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ArHi FF:7:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 17)

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by A_Soul

Chapter 175: Acting On Her Words

Every emotional update.. Shashi uncle star of the epi..!! 

"Why! Its little Ram! I was wondering where he'd disappeared to!" Lady Anjali stepped forward, seeing the little boy run up the red-carpeted flight of stairs to the Temple platform, "But whatever is he looking so pale for?"

Lady Anjali & Ram the most waiting connection for me'. Linn what have you hide in your brilliant mind!

"That is all that is needed," Master Shashi said finally. He looked at them fixedly, "Let the marriage begin."

Love the way shashi was asking the questions.. all silly one but it was stating his condition and his thought that we should not wait when all required ppl are here..!
Knowing Shashi uncle, we can say he didn't say anything in anger, but ya with disappointment..!

Holding her bouquet in one hand, Payal pressed the other hand to her heart and looked up at the white ceiling of the Temple: Please Goddess Mother, watch over my little sister. May no harm befall her...may tears not mar her life anymore...This is the moment where I bind myself to a man and become his...I cannot be there for my little Kushi like how I could in the past. I wish I could run and find her for I know if she misses my wedding, she is missing it because something unwanted hinders her path to me...she would never choose to keep away. She loves me too much.

 With the bouquet held in one hand, Payal raised her other hand to move the curtain away, her mind flooded with only one wish, Please Kushi, come to me. I'm scared. I need you...

Touched touched touched' Lovely Linny Darling..!!
@Bold: in single sentence you said so much'.!

"Divine!" smiled Lord Manohar, his tear-filled eyes on the couple at the altar, "My son is a husband at last."
Lady Manorama sighed, and tears filled her eyes too, but she said nothing.

This duo is something' It is always good to read them.

Babuji, No matter what happens, even if I am absent, the marriage must happen.
I love you, Babuji. I am scared. Lord Arnav

Why it ends on 'Lord Arnav..' was she going to write something more and didn't write? Or it I just simply typo from your end, instead of Kushi.

I think she just left a little hint I THINK

'.Had he awakened a fiery volcano by his feather-tickle of a nod to let his daughter be wedded to the man she had always said she hated but had slowly come to admire?
He sighed. He trusted the First Lord. He didn't know why. '. On what sane reasons had he been willing to affirm his daughter's hand to the First Lord's sudden proposal?
There was something that was wrong in all the things. 

You are super cool dad I tell ya.. love ya Shashi uncle..!!

agree to u

Whole scene of memory lane is so touching linny' loved it!
The way Shashi was calming her down' aaahh happy tears..!
Such scene speaks a lot about writer's personality & Maturity trait'.

again agree

"And what did you tell the river?"
"You should have told it to go away," whispered Shashi.
"Tell the river to go?" Kushi looked up at his face eagerly.
"And what if doesn't go and it is still coming?"
Shashi leaned forward, "You can swim yourself through it."
"But I don't know how to swim..." Kushi's voice was feeble.
"Nonsense!" said Shashi firmly, "It's a dream. Everyone knows how to swim in a dream!"

Ooohhh this lines are my favorite, how innocently he taught her to fight back and not to fear' lesson for life through dream.. WOW!!

Clap for u and Lin both

And that last (bold) line'. Hay haay Maar Dala..!!

Suddenly the clouds raged wild with the winds and the temple bells in the South Temple rang aloud. Everyone looked around as though sensing something sinister in the air.

If I visualize two chaps simultaneously (last one and this one) this is the time they got married' and effect of felt at south temple too..! 

The General looked back at the parrot, but the bird had already returned its focus on the wedding. 

Smart Boy' Fortune, not general..!!

GEN IS SMART VILLAIN

"Worry not," said her husband, looking forward at the altar, "All is well." She didn't see the way he scowled for a moment.

He is saying to himself more than Lady Anjali' he he "All IS WELL"'!

I picturize this one too


"Lightning," he whispered anxiously, as he mounted on his white horse that was stationed near the forest, "Why do I fear I have judged their sibling-love wrong..."

Ha ha ha ha'. *Devil laughter*

Akash, Payal, Shashi Uncle, Garima, Madhumati, Nani, Mami, Mama, Anjali, Gen & Fortune.. everyone's concern over missing Lordy & Khushi is so distinctly shown..
Too Good!!
 

 

Enjoy

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Soul
 

 

 

 

 


I will share my feelings what I feel abt Ram matlab u know... anyways... loved ur comment like always

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Barun_Riti_LMH

Rabba ve dears...
Warm greetings Lin...the wonderful storyteller...
It took me full 2 days complete all the 176 narration...
I must say i am hellshocked wid ur wonderful rewriting version...
I wil be very much pleased if u do the honour of sending pigeons to me...
Please allow me to the Inn and lemme sit close to you to hear the next part...coz i am excited...
Thank you...

Ritiii Rabba Vey Dear HugWELCOME ON BOARD DEAR I am honored to welcome u on behalf of Lin(at present she will personally welcome u too) and all comrades and readers... I am glad u liked the tale haina its perfect rewritng of ArHi Rabba veys and few other scenes...
love to see u sachi

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Barun_Riti_LMH

Ooops...i forget to mention one thing...
Dearest fari (farwa_ibrahim)
thanks a lot dear...i got dis amazing ff from ur list...thank you thank you

aww Riti no need to say thanx in frnds right? I m glad u read it coz it is one of the bestest stories ever written on any fictional character(though I havent read on others lolz but when its one of the bestest in Arhi FF which are the bestest fictional character so it had to be right?) welcome hun welcome on board here is the CC thread(we call it cottage near the inn) where u can meet and greet with other fellow readers and comrades we'll love to have u there too Hug
Cottage present room

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:14am | IP Logged

My doubt about  Ram ... I dont know y after reading 173 somewhere in my mind I had this doubt that Ram is the HERMIT u know he asked Lady in Hood where to head 1st y would he need to ask that right? there was another hermit present to do the ceremony of Payash's wedding right? so y would he had asked the lady in hood where should he go 1st and everything else in that part of update was screaming to me (in my eyes and thoughts) that Ram is the hermit... so what u guys say?

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:22am | IP Logged
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My doubt about  Ram ... I dont know y after reading 173 somewhere in my mind I had this doubt that Ram is the HERMIT u know he asked Lady in Hood where to head 1st y would he need to ask that right? there was another hermit present to do the ceremony of Payash's wedding right? so y would he had asked the lady in hood where should he go 1st and everything else in that part of update was screaming to me (in my eyes and thoughts) that Ram is the hermit... so what u guys say?


1st, a Confession... Honestly i laugh a bit over you thought..! Sorry!
Well i just say.. Ram is Kid... he is a Bachcha baba... who can he be HERMIT.
Secondly khushi and Lordy both know RAM, so if Ram is the one who done wedding rituals then they recognize him no...!

Yes, Harmit's question to where to go 1st.. it a little attpatta (odd) but i currently i am taking it as only a light moment, we know how funny our HERMIT is right!!!


Edited by A_Soul - 27 June 2013 at 10:22am

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Loved the update.
The fight gave an adrenaline rush. 
Glad that he didn't judge about shyam and khushi friendship. 
Atleast Arnav knows about shyam completely.
Wanna see how the others react. Plus when khushi rushed to save Arnav. Embarrassed

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:26am | IP Logged
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My doubt about  Ram ... I dont know y after reading 173 somewhere in my mind I had this doubt that Ram is the HERMIT u know he asked Lady in Hood where to head 1st y would he need to ask that right? there was another hermit present to do the ceremony of Payash's wedding right? so y would he had asked the lady in hood where should he go 1st and everything else in that part of update was screaming to me (in my eyes and thoughts) that Ram is the hermit... so what u guys say?


Ram could be the hermit. If he had the fastest horse ever. To go to the North Temple from the Castle and then cover double distance to reach the South Temple to deliver the message, a little before the bells in the South Temple began ringing in warning. That would need a very very fast horse.

LOL

The Hermit is a complete person on his own. Ram can't transform himself, don't worry.

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:27am | IP Logged
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OMGGG






Seventh thread!!!



COngrats darling



and what an amazing chapter...



I am just in wow with the updates!

How arnav pays attention to each and everything in this ff I mean for carrying the sane-ness lolz!

And plus general is not too bad actually...I think he just need a cure for his curse I guess...And nothing more..Or is it more?

Well all depends on you dear!

Now eagerly waiting for the story to move on yaar!

And plus there is so much to come..

Their curse...

Arhi's union...which i guess took place already when they married lolz...just they need to realise that!

And that general..well its up to you!

And yes dont worry yaar!

Take your time in update!
We are here!

We are not running away!lolz

We will wait for you hectic shedules to end before you come here in all the glory to narrate this tale to us!

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