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ArHi FF:7:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 146)

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:57am | IP Logged
hi, awesome update . thanx for posting. best wishes for ur father. 

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ipkkndrokzz4eva

I'm very intrigued by the story and always tend to find stuff which is related to the story'

and here's the result, I found a song.

Please read it, I will feel happy as it portrayed in your 'TERI MERI' dream sequence, there is separation and surrender.

So here's a song which I thought may be will fit in the bill.

Aahetein by Agnee

Aahatein, ho rahin teri, 

Dil ke dar pe mere, 

Tu yahin hai kahin na kahin.

Aahatein, ho rahin teri, 

Dil ke dar pe mere, 

Tu yahin hai kahin.

 

Kabhi mere khwab sa, 

Kabhi uljhe jawaab sa, 

Ke chanda mein bhi daag sa, 

Mere jaisa tu.

Ke dariya ka ho ik sira, 

Ke armaano ka silsila, 

Ke sehra mein bhi aab sa, 

Mere jaisa tu, mere jaisa tu.

 

Aahatein, ho rahin teri, 

Dil ke dar pe mere, 

Tu yahin hai kahin na kahin.

 

 

Tera hoon main, tujhe kyon na yaqeen hai! 

Chaahat mein meri aakhir kya kami hai?

Tujhme hi toh chhupi meri khudi hai. 

Meri khudi kuch na sahi.

Kuch na sahi, Kuch na sahi.

 

Aahatein, ho rahin teri, 

Dil ke dar pe mere, 

Tu yahin hai kahin.

 

Kabhi mere khwab sa, 

Kabhi uljhe jawaab sa, 

Ke chanda mein bhi daag sa, 

Mere jaisa tu.

Ke tu hi dariya ka he ik sira, 

Ke armaanon ka silsila, 

Ke sehra mein bhi aab sa, 

Mere jaisa tu, mere jaisa tu.

 

Aahatein, ho rahin teri, 

Dil ke dar pe mere, 

Tu yahin hai kahin na kahin. 

It's the song from splits villa right?

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 10:31am | IP Logged

Poem. To make up for lost time. And also because I had planned to make my 2500th post here, but got dragged into yapping away at the Cottage! *awkward laugh*

 

The day begins for the newly wed

Entangled, together on his bed

But she wakes to find herself alone

The memory of yester night within her, shone

 

And still a puzzle, her husband to her

His hunger, his ache, the changes that occur

Haughty he might be, apparently unaffected

Yet, he takes care that she be well rested

 

As the First Lady Khushi begins

Her journey, answering the wishes and whims

Being a good wife, a mistress, and yet herself

The fire within never yields itself

 

Moments of intimacy, of others, seen

Stokes a flame, a thought, some dream

Away though he may be, never far

In clouds, she sees the one who has her heart

 

Nani has learned of a titbit hitherto unsaid

And the wheels turned faster, in the old wise head

The laughter of the First Lord will grace the Castle hall

Or perhaps, only his room, with his wife against the wall?

 

Anjali knows the ways of her brother

And for him, she sees no better

Inspite of the irony, the obstinacy that rules

Making both brother and wife act like fools

 

The conscience has its ways

It works you into a daze

When, at last, fraught with frustration,

You cannot but let it lead to your destination

 

Fighting feeling, denying doubts

Arnav, your affection for your spouse

Is your undoing, and your strength

And yet you refuse to relent

 

And in the end, fate cannot be defied

Love pulls them in, forever tied

Embracing the other, the care that lives

Calming the night, the curse and the pain it seeks.


P.S. I paused at the picture of Hugh Jackman for a good minute before reading the update. 



Edited by maverickmartin - 14 September 2013 at 10:32am

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maverickmartin

Poem. To make up for lost time. And also because I had planned to make my 2500th post here, but got dragged into yapping away at the Cottage! *awkward laugh*

 

The day begins for the newly wed

Entangled, together on his bed

But she wakes to find herself alone

The memory of yester night within her, shone

 

And still a puzzle, her husband to her

His hunger, his ache, the changes that occur

Haughty he might be, apparently unaffected

Yet, he takes care that she be well rested

 

As the First Lady Khushi begins

Her journey, answering the wishes and whims

Being a good wife, a mistress, and yet herself

The fire within never yields itself

 

Moments of intimacy, of others, seen

Stokes a flame, a thought, some dream

Away though he may be, never far

In clouds, she sees the one who has her heart

 

Nani has learned of a titbit hitherto unsaid

And the wheels turned faster, in the old wise head

The laughter of the First Lord will grace the Castle hall

Or perhaps, only his room, with his wife against the wall?

 

Anjali knows the ways of her brother

And for him, she sees no better

Inspite of the irony, the obstinacy that rules

Making both brother and wife act like fools

 

The conscience has its ways

It works you into a daze

When, at last, fraught with frustration,

You cannot but let it lead to your destination

 

Fighting feeling, denying doubts

Arnav, your affection for your spouse

Is your undoing, and your strength

And yet you refuse to relent

 

And in the end, fate cannot be defied

Love pulls them in, forever tied

Embracing the other, the care that lives

Calming the night, the curse and the pain it seeks.



P.S. I paused at the picture of Hugh Jackman for a good minute before reading the update. 



AWESOME...FANTASTIC.. SUPERB MAV !!Clap

You are really very talented...Smile
the highlighted verses were my most fav ones,though i loved the whole masterpiece...Clap

@PS; me too !! Wink






Edited by shass - 14 September 2013 at 10:45am

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
LOL
Dhanyavaad, Shassy! First I see 8 lines being emboldened. Abhi I see 15 lines. LOLLOLLOL
I was missing the A.S.H.'s lamba-chaura gyaan-dene-wala comments! Now Soulie's back... So... *wink wink*

Now that I'm done, I want more. Sorry, Linnie, couldn't help it!

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Just wanted to add another comment to increase pages of this link...!!!!
ROFL


Waiting...!!!!


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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Fingers crossed for the next update

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:58am | IP Logged

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