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ArHi FF:7:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 140)

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
As I have said before, taking the route of trust and love is where your story is different from IPK...and it is better.

Instead of irking her husband and Arnav calling her names and saying things which will hurt them both.
They are on the path of love...this is where Shyam's character does not overpower them or the story...which is the greatest thing...even though shyam's character is important in the story its not overpowering...it doesn't become a evil, villainous story...And i love that ...love ...love...love it...

It is absolutely amazing the way you have narrated Khushi's struggle with her inner self. Her impatience, or her inherent wish to be with him and her stubbornness...or say her self-respect...how she over come her pride...and went to him...AND THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING WAS..SHE DIDN'T LEFT.she stayed there with him.

Arnav's longing for her...the way he got up and sat up on the bed with hand stretched out for her...was just...just so Arnav...and not lordy lord...
the one with the big flared up ego...who was not not facing the door to not give in to his yearns for her...was lordy lord.

it gives me goosebumps...even now...you have described it so amazingly.

Thank you for the pm...

p.s. we are not leaving this story either...write when ever and we will be there...if you are writing with your blood...we too are not only reading with our eyes...we aren't betraying this either...or you or IPK...or Arnav, Khushi...
so take care of yourself and do the things you need to do...our prayers are always there for you and your family.


 

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 5:12pm | IP Logged
awiee this was such cute update..loved loved it soo much.. From restlessness to longing, from debating to finally giving into.. And then sleep took over <3 .. He is so stubborn.. And yeah today no tormenting :-) 
 
no worries take your time and good luck for all


Edited by SaRunHolicc - 10 September 2013 at 5:14pm

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
I am gushing right now! the song that is constantly reminding me of Arnav and Khushi is Pyar hua Chupke se!!! I am really excited to read how their relationship will progress. I feel like nothing is going to separate these two. They have become a habit with each other in the short amount of time in their marriage and that for me is the key to a loving relationship! thanks for the update cant wait to read more.

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
ab jaake saans me saans aayi...

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 7:54pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
such a pleasure to read an update from  you...fantastic update...absolutely loved it...keep it up

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
That was so cute of Khushi behaving like a perfect wife of course with a lot of ego :)

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
Khushi went back for arnav Hug
can't wait to read more...
Please update soon
Thanku for PMing

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