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ArHi FF:7:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 107)

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Loved the updates..

U r awesome as usual.. 

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Ures my comments on page 104 n 105 I guess

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
I am a new reader of dis story...I finished all of 184 chapters after reading continuosly for 2 nights and may I just say..I was blown away by ur writing...U have a talent of weaving magic through ur words and as a reader I was impressed by each chapter...each character has been developed wid care n love...It shows dat u have put a lot of thoughts while sketching da characters n wring da story...As a reader,dis story wad vry much succesful in transporting me to a world of illusions and surprises i.e Arhasia...I am in love wid Arhasia and its habitants..each character had some substance n an importance...dis story is so similar yet so different from da show...In show my favourite character was ASR obviously but dis is da first ff where its khushi...dis Lordy Lord is truly a beast..when I was halfway through n he had locked up khushi inside a dungeon,I was cursing him so badly and yet towards da last chapters da significant change in him made me a little attached to him...I would have loved it more if khushi could give him an actual punishment instead of just retorting bak...he so needed one from khushi...but I guess now he has taken some major steps towards humanity and has started caring abt his lady love...lavanya got a justified ending and dat made me really very happy..heres wishing lady La n master Aman a happy future ahead...I just hope now khushi finds a cure for Lordy Lord's curse and make him realise da true meaning of love n life...dont know how u r planing to disclose general Jha n his deeds to Lady Anjali but truly hope she will not loose her baby in da process...although I have noticed shyam n khushi's equation here is very different from IPK...here shyam somehow seem to care fr Anjali n da baby...he has a need for khushi to lift off da curse while in da show shyam was just a psycho who had an infatuation fr khushi...must say I like ur version more..it makes dis story less negative n goes wid da fairytale aura

Really looking forward to reading da tale of Arhasia..plss pm me when u update next..n plss update fast

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Khushi is so child like...enjoying the present without a worry of the world even though she has a hell of a questions unanswered...Smile

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Aweee...it was so cute! I mean Arnav acted as if a baby longing for love is it?Embarrassed

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crackerszone

I am a new reader of dis story...I finished all of 184 chapters after reading continuosly for 2 nights and may I just say..I was blown away by ur writing...U have a talent of weaving magic through ur words and as a reader I was impressed by each chapter...each character has been developed wid care n love...It shows dat u have put a lot of thoughts while sketching da characters n wring da story...As a reader,dis story wad vry much succesful in transporting me to a world of illusions and surprises i.e Arhasia...I am in love wid Arhasia and its habitants..each character had some substance n an importance...dis story is so similar yet so different from da show...In show my favourite character was ASR obviously but dis is da first ff where its khushi...dis Lordy Lord is truly a beast..when I was halfway through n he had locked up khushi inside a dungeon,I was cursing him so badly and yet towards da last chapters da significant change in him made me a little attached to him...I would have loved it more if khushi could give him an actual punishment instead of just retorting bak...he so needed one from khushi...but I guess now he has taken some major steps towards humanity and has started caring abt his lady love...lavanya got a justified ending and dat made me really very happy..heres wishing lady La n master Aman a happy future ahead...I just hope now khushi finds a cure for Lordy Lord's curse and make him realise da true meaning of love n life...dont know how u r planing to disclose general Jha n his deeds to Lady Anjali but truly hope she will not loose her baby in da process...although I have noticed shyam n khushi's equation here is very different from IPK...here shyam somehow seem to care fr Anjali n da baby...he has a need for khushi to lift off da curse while in da show shyam was just a psycho who had an infatuation fr khushi...must say I like ur version more..it makes dis story less negative n goes wid da fairytale aura
Really looking forward to reading da tale of Arhasia..plss pm me when u update next..n plss update fast

Rabba Vey CZ
its the way of greeting in Arhasia. Since our dear comrade Soul, who welcome all new readers in such awesome way, is busy in her personal life I m having the honor to welcome u on board. Welcome to the beautiful land of Arhasia and even more beautiful tale of Arhi. I hope u will feel comfortable in the INN n do remember to tell the InnKeeper about ur fav. Drink so tht he can arrange it before the next visit. As our beloved storyteller in under arrest by Capt. Responsibility for her father is at her place she might not b able to give regular installments of the tale till september but she will give updates whenever it will b possible for her. She will send out a pigeon to u too dear friend when she can otherwise look out for the change of title. In the meantime if u want to discuss something or just hang around a bit like we do u r welcome to pay visit in the cottage new room which was made by our dear comrade Meg famously known as Crazzy I hope u will find at least one comrade there. The address is
Cottage Room 14
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Regards
Comrade Farwa

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 19 August 2013 at 3:55am

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Greetings people! 



I have hit a double century. Which means i'm a Senior Member now... 
So finally i have the privilege to change my username ... yay!
Serialaddict12 to Jo_Pinchy 

Thank you Lin for giving us this tale. I think I have commented the most on this ff.  And thanks to all the members for liking my posts.
Okay lemme end this. and lets party




Sorry for spamming the page Lin. But you know how desperately i wanted to change my username.WinkWink



Edited by Jo_Pinchy - 19 August 2013 at 4:56am

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Read all three together - Am I glad I did that Big smile

The change from fighting to surrender - Khushi is brilliant. She knows when to give up Approve

And Arnav - he just can't let her go but for her safety she needs to be far - or so he thinks Unhappy But she is the cure for him - life D'oh Ah the love between the two Heart even if they are both too dumb to realise it LOL

Now can't wait for Anji to see this picture - she will be ecstatic. And kudos to her for threatening Arnav to reveal the truth Thumbs Up

Thanks a loot darling for taking the time out for us crazy readers - You are just like TBATBR - Amazing and beloved Heart

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