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ArHi FF:7:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 103)

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
wow 
Beautiful update :)

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
Another of your mind blowing updates Lin.
Never read the updates outside your comfort zone. As it can lead to total embarrassment when you read them in public. And you start reading the update and you grin, you laugh ... forgetting the world is watching you. Well you might wonder why I mention this. It happened to me today, travelling in a bus to work... and Lin i blame you for this. And so I'm reading through. Comes across the part where Khushi gets into comprehending the situation. 
Chapter 184 : But what of his tongue? There is something strange about that tongue. It burns like nothing in human plausibility would, not even if one was terribly ill. Why is it so? Is it because he is the Lord of the land? So does Lord Akash's tongue burn that way? Jiji would tell me if there was something strange of that sort. Leastways. I will need to ask Jiji if she knows about 'burning tongues'. His tongue left marks wherever it touched her skin.
And i laughed and laughed .. BURNING TONGUES!!! LOL
And in return i get stares from around me. You are not just a Queen of Romance but also the Queen of Comedy.

The start was so beatifully written. The candle casting shadows on the wall and it seemed like none other then a monster with an open mouth. *scared*
Lordy is so naughty he could see Khushi's curves through the shadow of the candle light.Embarrassed
Chapter 182 : Well I can't picture how the golden cage was placed by the Lordy. Was it hanging outside the balcony? Because you mentioned khushi was gauging the height from top to the ground. Or was it inside the balcony on the rim of the parapet ?
When Khushi confronted Lordy, I was like no no don't Khushi..no.
This is where you too come in, saying you won't advice khushi to do that. 
And then he bit her. Has he got the snake tongue? Confused

Then comes the part, where i fall in love again and again. Reminded me of the original IPKKND...He cried ! Promised that he would Never, never again Khushi. 

Golde cage has been destroyed -  which means Lordy's one step to a change.

AhOuch. He thinks of parting from her? Lady Anjali was spot on to say, She will always be yours!... It was so good to see a vulnerable side of him; of losing Khushi.

Chapter 184: So serene. A complete picture. She conquered her fears, for him. 
Kushi's arms slid up his shoulders, embracing him to her, the rug on the floor her mattress and her husbands' warm arms her secure blanket. ClapThumbs Up

Khushi don't wanna lose. And neither wanna see Lordy win.  There's a saying. If you lose something, you gain something better. 

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
I loved this update! I love the care khushi shows on arnav and I love the way she was able to tame the animal/beast in arnav - wish she does that everyday. It was a very short but sweet update and I absolutely loved it. Can't wait for the next one - please update soon.

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 5:16pm | IP Logged
Great update

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 6:30pm | IP Logged
wow.. you know late last night I was very surprised that ch184 was already up  and I went to sleep only after reading this. This morning I woke up after having a weirfd dream about this chapter and then in the dream it self aI don't know why... it appeared to me that ch 185-186 were already up as well. so early this monring I opened computer top check it out but it wasn't true. I am not complaining that they weren't up hell I am surprised 184 followed 183 in such quick succession. I am just amazesd at how much impact your ff is having on me that its even affecting my sleep..
 
 
So as the author of this wonderful ff yyou are writing.. this is best compliment I could given you...
 

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
omg...simply awesome...

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
brilliant!!
... and she came back.. on her own free will... 
i can not stop re-reading it.. until the feeling of 'her being there for him' sinks in...
 

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Absolutely freaking awesome update...loved it...kushi knows howto deal with her man...continue soon

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