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anjs

@anjs

IF-Stunnerz

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

wow...that was a long update...and i was on my edge throughout...

but did he just transform in front of her...but then she is the cure, isnt she ? and now her watching him transform, wont she loose her memory just like shashi did...

but i must say the whole detailing of the sequence was so lovely...i could see it happening...

eager for the next update

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

The beastly transfirmation,is that a bear...Bear Bear Bear???????????????am I right????am I wrong?????tell me tell me...where is hoops I need to hear her decoding about this update,now... I am hypetventilating after this update... What a damn scary chase was that??????damn it...damn damn it...Linny I may back after calming down my rapid beat of my heart...

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123vava

@123vava

Senior Member

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

😛awesome
Very well written

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Jammy-

@Jammy-

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

O.M.G!!! He transformed in front of her?!!!!!!!!!!!!

I cannot believe this! I cannot...wh..aat... just happened? 😲😲

😲😲😲

😲😲

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SaRunHolicc

@SaRunHolicc

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

OMGGG what was that..

okay that was inevitable..one day or other she was bound to know and see it.. And it happened on her wedding night..that was way too intense..

but isn't it also true that only she can heal him..i felt that when at the end he inhaled her and then fell drowsily that "khushi" ..

when khushi use to work for la then too once she helped him at the end..

and here I dunno..but can't stop this"what if" he had let her to come to him in start when she woke up..would it have helped him then too still..

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riti4u

@riti4u

IF-Stunnerz

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

Hey lin,

Wow what a thrilling update...so did he transform... and he transformed into a bear...that was really exciting chase...i was scared for khushi...so he managed to get his calm with her smell... she calmed him down...khushi's state was indeed painful... as she would be now more scared...of this beast being around...nice moments between akash and payal in the start...

waiting for ur next update😊

Take care

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zainza

@zainza

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

this was scary...my heart s still beating rapidly as i wait to this update to sink in

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Angel1618

@Angel1618

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

I found this story yesterday and read it all at one go and seriously you are an awesome writer.😊

loved the update

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hatelove_1

@hatelove_1

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

wow

I dont know know how to explain, but I loved it.😊👏

It was really awesome.

WAITING

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@flowers4u

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow such an intensive update...started wither the sweet papal and awash and ended with kushis torment...poor girl...the only surviving grace wa that he didn't transform fully...a wonderful story...keep it up

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