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Aansu- Tears of Sadness [Shah-Rani-Aamir-Preity] (Page 3)

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
Chapter 16
[A couple days had past now. Raj and Priya didn't speak to each other much. Priya still wasn't 100% well but she was a lot better. Rhea and Rohan were in jail still but that day wasnt far when they both would be released.]
Priya finally breaking the long silence between her and raj - Raj...
Raj looks up and goes to Priya - Hmm?
Priya - Please dont say no.
Raj - What?
Priya - I want to meet Rhea.
Raj - WHat? No Priya.
Priya - Please Raj. And nothing will happen to me. You're with me nah. [Priya gets up and goes to freshen up. Minutes later she's ready.]
Priya - Let's go.
[Raj silently gets his car keys and they both go to the police station.]
Inspector - Arey Raj?
Raj silently - Priya wants to meet Rhea.
Inspector -She's dangerous.
Priya - Please inspector.
[The inspector allows Priya to go meet Rhea but Raj and the inspector stay close behind her. When Rhea sees her she immediatley gets up.]
Priya - Why are you so surprsied?
[Rhea is silent.]
Priya - Kyun kiya? Why Rhea? I started liking you. I started believing you were my friend. Yeh dhoka kyun?
Rhea - Priya yeh dhoka nahi hai. I hate you. I just had to act nice. You stole my Raj away...
Priya interuppts - I didn't steal him from you. We loved each other. Arey I didn't even know about you and Raj and about your past...Why would I steal him from you?
[Rhea is silent.]
Priya continues - And you hated me nah? Then why kill such an innocent baby. What had he/she done to you? Nothing..[Tears start forming in her eyes.]
Rhea - I couldn't bear to see a baby that was not mine...
Priya shakes her head - Raj wanted to kill you...lekin i said no. But remember one thing. Raj was mine, is mine, and will always be mine. No one will come in our way.
Rhea smiles - You might want to think that over.
Priya - No...our love will keep us together Rhea. [She leaves.]
Rhea to Rohan - What does she know about love. She stole it from me.

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Chapter 17
[A few days have past now. Rohan and Rhea are both out of jail. How we dont know but they had their ways. They are free again.]
Rhea - Now I will teach that ***** a lesson.
Rohan - Look Rhea I dont think what you're doing...
Rhea - Then leave me. Why be my friend?
Rohan - No Rhea. I'm your friend. 
[Suddenly Raj bumps into Rohan and Rhea. He is surprised to see them out of jail.]
Raj - What the hell are you two doing out of jail?
Rhea smiles - Raj...i told you I dont stay in jail for long.
Raj - Rhea you're filled with so much hatred. I want to kill...
Rhea - But you cant...tumhari biwi ne jo na kehdiya...
Raj - Shut up Rhea.
Rhea - Raj you shut up.
[Suddenly a bullet hits Rohan]
Rhea - ROHAN!
Rohan- Rhea..W*F was that?
Rhea - I dont know where it came from...[then she slowly looks at Raj.]
Rhea - YOU B******.
Raj - I didn't do anything.
Rhea - THEN WHERE DID THAT GUNSHOT COME FROM?
Raj - How do I know?
Rhea - Raj I'm not sparing you. This time I'm not.
Raj - Rhea you very well...
Rhea - OH SHUT UP. I'M TIRED OF HEARING YOU.
Rhea to Rohan - ROhan are you ok?
[No reply.]
Rhea - ROHANNN!
[Rohan died on the spot. No one knew who had fired the gunshot and for what reason. Rhea still had the feeling that Raj was responsible.]
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Chapter 18
[The next day at home. Raj doesn't tell Priya anything about the whole gunshot incident.]
Priya - Raj I have a doctor's appointment today.
Raj - Ok sweetheart. 
Priya - So are you ready?
Raj - Yes...
Priya - Raj...
Raj [annoyed] - WHAT?
Priya - WHY ARE YOU GETTING ANGRY?
Raj - I'm sorry Priya. There are so many things running through my mind.
Priya - Everything ok?
Raj - Yes.
Priya - Raj killing Rhea is not going...
Raj - I'M NOT GOING TO KILL HER GOD DAMMIT.
Priya - I know you want to but you are not because of me. But I promise you they day u do kill her or anyone else for that matter I will divorce you.
Raj - I wont priya. I love you too much to loose you.
Priya - Raj I love you too. Just dont ever make me helpless.
[1 hour later Raj and Priya go to the doctor's office for Priya's checkup.]
Doctor - Priya please follow me. Raj please wait outside.
[Raj waits outside while Priya follows the doctor inside a room.]
Doctor - Hi Priya.
Priya - Hi.
Doctor - How are you feeling?
Priya - Better than before.
Doctor - Please take of all your clothes. We need to check thorougly today.
[Priya does as she is told. The doctor examines her very carefully and accurately. She does not want to miss one thing. Soon she is finished.]
Docotr - Well for the most part everything looks normal. However are you in any pain at all?
Priya - Actually I am. I haven't told even Raj about it.
Doctor - Where?
Priya - I've been having a lot of back pain for some reason.
Doctor - Ok let me examine that. Please lie down on ur stomach. I'm going to have to use a machine to check it. It may hurt or be painful and it may tickle but you have to be still for me.
[Priya obeys and the doctor examines her back.]
Doctor - Well we are seeing a few problems. I will prescribe some medication and then come see me after 1 week.
Priya - Ok doctor.
[Priya leaves and the doctor tells Raj that he has to watch Priya regurulary and check her back too. Any more complications could cause Priya trouble. Raj makes sure he will take care of her.]

[At home.]
Raj - Priya can i check your back.
Priya - Baadmash. I'm fine.
Raj - No the doctor said.
Priya - Ok...[She lies down adn Raj checks it just as the doctor has instructed.]
Raj - Is it paining?
Priya - A little.
Raj - Bloodpressure time.
Priya - Kya?
Raj - I have to check your bloodpressure. [He checks it.]
Raj - Uh oh. its too much.
Priya - Its ok. Its like taht lately. Raj tum kitna khyal rakte ho.
Raj - That's because I love you so much...
Priya - I love...[Suddenly the doorbell rings. Raj goes to open it.]
Inspector - Raj you're under arrest.
Raj [shocked] - Lekin inspector I di...
Inspector - Whatever you have to say say it at the police station.
Raj - But listen...
Inspector [puts handcuffs on his hands and takes him. Priya comes to the door but is unable to stop them. She is left in terrible shock.]
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Chapter 19
[At the police station.]
Raj - Tell me why I'm under arrest.
Inspector - You have been charged under the murder of Rohan.
Raj - WHAT? INSPECTOR I DIDN"T KILL HIM.
Inspector - You were there when he died.
Raj - Yes I admit I was there at the scene but I didn't kill him. I heard a gunshot.
Inspector - Well you will need proof. This case is hard. Until the date in court you will have to stay behind bars.
Raj - But please understand. My wife is not well. She cant stay on her own.
Inspector - I'm sorry Raj. [He puts Raj behind the bars.]
[Hours later Rhea comes. She starts clapping as she sees Raj.]
Rhea - Bechara Raj. Kya kiya tumne?
Raj [furious] - SHUT THE HELL UP...
Rhea - Remember where you are...
Raj - I SAID SHUT UP.
Rhea - Now your in jail. Who's going to watch over your wife now?
Raj - I SWEAR IF YOU DO ANY HARM TO HER I WILL KILL YOU. 
Rhea - What can you do Raj? What can you do? Nothing. You killed Rohan...
Raj - I DIDN"T KILL THAT...
Rhea - That what? That what Raj? You hated him.
Raj - I DID NOT KILL HIM GOD d**nIT..[tears start pouring.]
Rhea - Waise Raj I hate seeing you in this state. I love you. But kya karu. I have to get rid of that Priya first before I can get you.
Raj - Dont you dare touch her...
Rhea - What can you do? [Rhea walks away.]
Raj [yelling] - RHEAAA! I WILL KILL YOU IF U DO ANYTHING.

[For two days Raj and Priya didn't see each other. PRiya was in deep shock. Then after two days Priya came to the police station.]
Priya - Raj what did you do?
Raj - Priya believe me I didn't kill Rohan.
Priya - Tell me.
Raj - Yes its true I was at the scene but I did not fire the gunshot.
Priya - Raj how am I supposed to beleive you? You are a murderer and you cant deny that.
Raj - Yes I am Priya. But I didn't kill Rohan. Please.
Priya - You've left me no choice.
Raj - Priya please. I love you.
Priya - I love you too but this relationship is ov...ov..[Priya starts getting dizzy.]
Raj - PRIYA? PRIYAAA.
[She faints and falls to the ground.] 
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Chapter 20
[Priya is fine now. She fainted because of the great shock but she is fine and doing ok now. She still has back pain but due to the medication it is much better. She still doesnt believe Raj when he says that he didn't kill Rohan. Priya is at the police station.]
Raj - Believe me Priya.
Priya starts crying - How Raj? How?
Raj - Please. I swear on you.
[Priya then realizes that Raj is telling the truth. He would never swear falsely.]
Raj - Be careful Priya.
Priya - Raj?
Raj - Rhea wants to kill you.
Priya - Dont worry. She wont harm me.
[Priya then has to leave the police station.]

[2 days later Priya is at her home. Rhea comes for a visit.]
Priya - What do you want?
Rhea - Priya its sad nah? YOur husband in jail for something he didn't even do?
Priya - You know he didn't do it?
Rhea - Of course. [She takes out a gun.] He's in jail so that I can kill you. [She pulls the triger and it hits Priya right in the heart. Priya falls to the ground. Neighbors notice this and call for an ambulance. However neighbors are unable to idently the killer as she ran away.]
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Chapter 21
[Couple hours later Raj is informed about his wife. The inspector allows Raj to go to the hospital under police suppervision. Raj goes inside Priya's rooma and runs to the bed. He grabs her hand tight.]
Priya very weak - Raj...
Raj - I'm here baby...
Priya - Raj...i was wrong. You should have killed her.
Raj looks sad.
Raj - Nahi Priya...
Priya - Raj I'm dying. When I die kill her for me.
Raj - NO PRIYA. Dont say that. Nothing will happen to you.
Priya - I love you Raj. I love you very much and I want you to...I want you to know i'll always be with you...
Raj crying - NO PRIYA...DONT LEAVE ME PRIYA.
Priya - I'm sorry Raj...[She closes her eyes.]
Doctor - I'm sorry...Your wife is no more.
[Raj starts crying...]

[2 days later Priya's dad comes over.]
Priya's dad - Raj...how did this happen?
[Raj tells his father-in-law everything. He is surprised.]
Priya's dad - And you didn't tell me anything?
Raj - How could I? [He starts crying again. Priya's dad comes and hugs Raj and they both start crying.]
[While they are hugging Raj thinks and says to himself.]
Raj [to himself silently] - RHEA I'M NOT GOING TO SPARE YOU. I WILL KILL YOU EVEN IF THAT MEANS I'LL BE HANGED OR HAVE LIFETIME IN PRISON.
[Lighs fade]
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Chapter 22 [concluding chapter]

[For many days Raj is unable to locate Rhea or her whereabouts. But finally after so many days looking for her he comes face to face with her.]
Rhea - Raj...
Raj [furious] - RHEA I NEVER EXPECTED SUCH A LOWLY DEED FROM YOU. NOW I DONT CARE ABOUT ANYTHING. I DONT CARE ABOUT ANY CONSEQUENCES I MAY HAVE TO FACE. FIRST YOU TRIED TO KILL OUR BABY AND YOU SUCCEDDED. AND NOW PRIYA TOO...TOO MUCH. WAY TOO MUCH. I'M NOT TOLERATING ANY OF THIS. I DONT CARE IF I GET HANGED BUT I HATE YOU...[He pulls out a trigger.] YOU HURT ME...IS THIS WHAT YOU CALL LOVE? YOU NEVER LOVED ME. NEVER. YOU ALWAYS HATED ME ALWAYS...ALWAYS. THIS IS NO LOVE. MEIN TUMSE BOHOT NAFRAT KARTA HOON. [He shoots the gun at Rhea and she falls dead. The police see this because Rhea had called them and told them to always follow her. Thy arrest Raj. Raj is sentenced to life time in prision.]

[5 days after Rhea's death the inspector comes to see Raj.]
Inspector - Raj what did you do?
Raj - I had no other choice and I dont care about what I did. She deserved it.
[The inspector leaves. Raj thinks about all the times he had with Priya. The football games, the love, the hatred, the tears, the pain...everything. He closes his eyes and tears start forming.]
Narrator - And this was the story of Raj and Priya. They were a happy couple until one person changed it. Raj was sentenced to life time prisonment. However he died after being in jail 4 years. He didn't eat much and the food never suited him. He couldnt live on. He died and he too joined Priya in Heaven...This was what destiny had in store for them. They were a lovely couple. They hadn't done anything wrong. This was the story of two lovers Raj and Priya. Was it Rhea's fault she too loved the same guy as Priya? Did she have to break two hearts? If her love was strong wouldnt she be able to sacrifice her love for her love's happiness? But no she had to ruin it...that is the unfortunate tale of Raj and Priya...They got nothing but pain...nothing but tears.

THE END
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