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Collab : Making u a perfect lover (Page 33)

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Posted: 29 July 2014 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Nice part..

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wow, lovely story do loved to the core and enjoyed it in totally hatke style. pls PM me when u update next...

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Posted: 03 August 2014 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 09 August 2014 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
read all the parts and lived it!! I wish something like this could have happened in the soap...
loved arnav's possessive nature n him being jealius.
Khushi is sweet and knows to tackle arnav more effectively!!!
Can you PM me when you update next!!!

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Posted: 27 October 2014 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Hey Guys,
I am Sydell from now onwards I am here to update the story parts so here i go,,,

Part 8

It was Morning and In Gupta House


Khushi sleeping peacefully with her mouth with opened and leaving her bedroom TV on with Kamlesh Kabri saying Good Morning Aaj Mausam hai Hot kyunki aaj hogi pyaar ki baarish(Today the mausam will be Hot as today will Rain showering Love)
Arnav jumps and comes enters through the balcony with a rose in his with dreamy eyes looking at his beautiful Khushi sleeping peacefully in her bed with her mouth opened and left the TV on.He took the TV remote and switched off the TV and went next to her and closed her mouth and smiled and said Pagal he then placed her hair strand towards

***Rabba Ve ***


her ear side and kissed her on cheek left and then cheek right and then finally on her forehead sensing his wet lips Khushi woke with sudden jerk and said Arnavji you here aapko ko tho Shantivan mein hona chahiye(You here you should be right now in Shantivan)
How could I go mujhe toh tumhein dekhna tha (I wanted to see you)Aap jao na abhi Buaji aayegi mujge dekhne yaa phir Aama (You go right now Buaji or Aama will come to see me).Calm Down Khushi Look into my eyes and calm down .Aap idhar Kyun Aaye ho(Why have you come here)Why can't I come ..Ok chill he takes out a rose and says to her Good Morning Khushi!!she gets surprised and feels nice and then suddenly Arnav ask her to give him a smooch with a smirky smile she blushes and says Arnavji Nahi

**Knock Knock **


Buaji : Hai re Nandkishore.Titiliya ootho Subah ho gayi(Getup Khushi Its morning)
Khushi : Arnavji aap jao Buaji aagayi Aap jao Kidki se (with a worried expressions telling him to go from the window)

***Rabba Ve (Rock Version)***


Arnav : No I want a Kiss right now(with a smirky request)Tumahari Naak Laal Ho Gayi

Khushi : Arnavji.(With a blush)

Khushi: Acha baba Yeh lo (It was a lip lock for 2 minutes Rabba Ve(Rock Version)still playing)

**Knock Knock**


Buaji : Hai Re Sankadevi abhi ootho bhi jao kitna soo thi ho(Ooh ooh Khushi now get up how much you will sleep)


Khushi : Haan Buaji!! Aayi(in a loud voice saying I am coming to Buaji)
Khushi : Arnavji Aap ka kaam hogaya na abb jao (Arnavji now your work is done now go)She sends him through the window and giving a sigh relief and goes to the door and opens and sees Buaji
Buaji(with a question expressions) : What are you doing so long to open the door



Khushi(tries to cover up and saying): Buaji I was sleeping in a deep sleep and suddenly I heard your voice and opened the door only that much.Anything else

Buaji : Nothing.Get ready and come for breakfast 

Khushi : Ohk Buaji.(With a smile)Closes the door and sigh in relief and says Thank you Devi Maiya you really saved me today but today was indeed a beautiful morning she looks at the rose and takes it and just admires it and says Aaj Ka Din Suhana tha and then she sings her song Aaj Mausam hai Suhana Subah hui bohot haseen Laadgover ne paapi lene ka bahana ..

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So Guys how was my update

next update will be on December after my exams 

Do Like and Comment !!!!!!!!!!!!Wink



Edited by desigirl_sydell - 27 October 2014 at 9:46pm

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Posted: 27 October 2014 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
Hey it was nice to see naughty arnav...
Continue soon...

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