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Posted: 12 October 2013 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jasminerahul

Ha ha.Arnav is jealous.NK is cute.Does Nk luv K?


its not like dat
here NK char is same as in IPKKND
soo he dont lov her
but he likes her
but flirts with her

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Posted: 12 October 2013 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by impk

wow akshu that was fantastic finally he kissed her to shut her,,,,,,cute and lovely chapter...continue soon plz...thanks for pm

thnqqq ...Smile
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Posted: 13 October 2013 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Hiii friends
first of all a very big sorry for the long delay
i was very busy with my studies so dont have time to update
and finally today i am going to update it because some of my friends warned me Ouch
so here is the update

HAPPY READING Smile
                                                   
                                                    MAKING YOU A PERFECT  
                                        LOVER  

                                            part 5

Same night:
Arnav was unable to sleep due to his khushi thought phobia...
His almost kiss with khushi and NK's closeness with khushi is making him restless..
and all he could do was to roam in his room
...
where as khushi's position is not different
she is suffering from Arnav thought phobia..
Both of them were trying to sleep but their black and white flashbacks are not letting them to sleep...
and finally it became one more sleepness night for ARSHI Sleepy
Next morning:
Khushi was getting ready to go to shopping with NK...
She was so excited because she know how her plan is going to work...
...
Nk came to pick up khushi and rang the door bell of GUPTHA house...
Buaji was the one to open the door...
"Haire nanda kishore...andar aao bitua"buaji welcomed him with wide smile...
But NK expected khushi to open the door...
"Baito bitua khushi bitua tayar ho rahi hein mein bulake aati hun"Buaji said and went to call khushi...
Khushi came out and wished NK..
"Ok khushiji so now lets go"Nk said to khushi...and was about to leave but was interrupted by buaji"arre nahi!!aese kaise jaa sakhte hein bitua.kuch toh khake jao".
"Nahi buaji...we are getting late.we should go"Nk explained ...
poor buaji nodded her head unable to understand. what he said.
both NK and khushi left to the shopping mall.
But they were unaware of the white SUV following them...Wink
...
In shopping mall:
"Khushiji mein apni phone car mein bhul gayi.so You carryon i will be back..."Nk said and went out to get his phone...
Nk pointed out Arnav's white SUV
"Yeh Nannav ka car yeha kya kar rahe hein?"Nk thought to himself and searched for arnav..
He saw him going into the shopping mall.
...
Khushi was scaning all the dresses in the mall...
she loved all of them alott but one dress caught her eyes...
she was pulled towards that dress...
She was admiring the dress...it's a simple red lehanga choli with designer work on it...it is simple yet beautifull...

              
But the cost of the dress made khushi to leave it in one go...
because the cost is 60000rs...
this dint go unnoticed by arnav...
She turned around and her eyes met with the dark brown eyes which she always love...
Both of them were lost in each others world...
"Nannav what are  you doing here?"Nk shouted bringing them into reality...
Khushi blushedEmbarrassed...and was happy that arnav came...because she know he would surely come...
"Wohh...mein...actually mein ek client milne aaya hu toh socha ki aap logon ka saath du"Arnav covered the reason...
But khushi know the reason why arnav came there...
"ohh dats great nannav mera bhai lets go now"with that NK,khushi and arnav moved into the various sections..
Arnav whispered in Khushi's ear "waise tum woh dress kharid sakhte hein..i wil pay for it"..which made khushi angry..
"Dhanyawaad hame nahi chahiye agar hame  sach mein pasand aaya toh ham kudh karid sakhte hein"Khushi replied angrily...
Nk watched them talking and interfered"arey arey kya kusur busurg ho rahe hein yeha??tel me tel me.."
"Khushi nahi nanheji...arnavji ne kuch pucha aur meine use jawab de diya"Khushi replied and continued her shopping..
All the dresses in the shop are so lovelyy but are looking too costly..which khushi cant pay for ...
"Nanheji lagta hein yeha saare kapde bahut mehanga hein.hame kuch aur shop pe jaana hoga"Khushi said NK..
"nahi khushiji this shop was good you select your favourite one i will pay for it.kyunki mein aapko gift dena chahtha hu khushiji ."Nk requested khushi lovingly..
"teek hein"khushi replied with smile..which made arnav more angry..
Khushi smirked seeing arnav's expression...
khushi had asked NK to select the saree for her..
All arnav could do was to listen to khushi and trying to not to hit NK...
Khushi selected 3 sarees in the best of all and was not able to select one among them..
she asked for NK's help..and this made arnav more and more angry...
Nk selected the yellow one among them,but khushi loved the red one most

                
"i think redone is the best"Arnav said hoping Khushi would love it...
A wide smile appeared on her face but she controled it and decided to play along with arnav and make him more jelous.
"Yeh toh bilkul ganda hein hume acha nahi laga aur yeh peelawala(which NK hadchoosen)bahut acha hein"Khushi said and had thrown it aside..
"what the..."Arnav rose and was about to shout but was again backened...
He moved out immediately not to shout at her...
Khushi knew that arnav was angry but to make her love perfect she has to do this...
Khushi selected one saree and got packed it..
both NK and khushi came out of the shopping mall.
since they dint find arnav outside the shopping mall...they thought that he might have left...
Nk drove back khushi to her home.
and when she was about to getdown
"Khushi ji plzz aap aaj raat ki party mein yehi dress pehen lijiye naa"Nk asked khushi.
for which khushi accepted with lovely smile...
She left to the home planning for her last plan...
...
PRECAP:
Party...
THANK YOUSmile



IMPORTANT NOTE:
Hi friends
really sorry to say this
that i may not be posting the next update till the end of NOV due to my sem end exams
so plzzz kindly understand and plzz encourage me with your likes and comments...
I'm not getting the enough potential to write the story so plzz silent readers plz do comment after reading it meant a lot for us..
thank you Smile





Edited by akshusarun - 13 October 2013 at 8:27am

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Posted: 13 October 2013 at 8:47am | IP Logged
nice update
i understand ur problem
take ur own time 
but pls update dis ff

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Posted: 13 October 2013 at 8:51am | IP Logged
all the best for ur examsSmile

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Posted: 13 October 2013 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Wow Akshu finaly u updated... But it was short yaar ... Its k since u hav exams this tym i forgive u ;) n ha lovd d update especialy jealous Arnav n Playful Khushi... Awee poor Arshi had to spend sleeples nyts... N poor Buaji cudnt understand NK's english :P . N lovd how Arnav followd n Lied lol... N lovd how khushi playd wid him regarding Saree... N nw waiting fr d party n wats Khushi's last plan??? But take ur time to update i knw exams r imp... Al d best

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Posted: 13 October 2013 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pravallikacool

nice update
i understand ur problem
take ur own time 
but pls update dis ff

thnq soo much pravallika ji...Tongue
i will update as per ur wish
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Posted: 13 October 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pravallikacool

all the best for ur examsSmile

all the best for u too Tongue

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