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deeksh Senior Member

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged
It was lovely...
Damn just loved how Arnie thought of wetting her face wid kisses :p
he grabed her inside a room? Wat happens... Naughty thoughts :p

Edited by deeksh - 19 July 2013 at 9:12pm

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akshusarun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Hii friends
first of all SORRY to everyone 
i cant be able to update todays postCry
i'm feeling sick and due to an error in my PC 
todays post got deleted from my PCCry
so i should write it again
but dont have resistance to write it now
so plzz i hope you can understand
I promise that i will update tomorrow for sureee
                                     KEEP SMILINGSmile


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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 8:17pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 8:45pm | IP Logged
wowww sooo cute update waiting fr nxt update dear

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akshusarun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Hii friends
Sorry for the late
i'm unable to update it due to fever...
                                                       Making you a perfect


Arnav pulled khushi with force into his room.He blocked her in between the door and his hands...

Khushi was about shout in confusion but arnav placed hand on her mouth...

Khushi was shocked to see arnav holding her close to him but still she struggled to remove his hand from her mouth...

Arnav removed his hand slowly seeing khushi relaxed...

He removed his hands from the door so that she will be relaxed completely.

Khushi tried to go out but arnav again blocked her.khushi was confused seeing arnav's actions...

"Arnavji hume jaane dijiye"(let me go)Khushi said arnav...

"Mujhe tumse baat karna hein khushi"(i want to talk to you)Arnav replied her with his husky voice which made her shiver...

"Nahi mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni hein. mein jaa rahi hu"(no.i dont want to talk to you.i'm going)Khushi said that turned around with her fake anger.But this time arnav pulled her with full force.

Khushi came crashing into his hard chest...

Khushi looked up to see arnav fuming in anger.She slowly moved away from him...

Arnav caught khushi'shsoulders tightly making her wince in pain...

"jab mein baat kar raha hu toh piche mat modna"(when i'm talking dont turn around) arnav warned her with his deadfull eyes and again he resumed "mein ne kaha naa ki tum NK se dur rahogi aur usse baat nahi karogi.then what are you doing dammit??"(I said you to stay away from NK na and also not to talk to him.then what are you doing dammit?)Arnav shouted at khushi.

Arnav's behaviour made khushi angry and she shrugged her shoulders to remove his hands of him "mein kab kaha ki mein Nanheji se dur rahungi?mein ne kab kaha ki mein unse baat nahi karungi???"(when did i say that i will stay away from nanheji and i will not talk to him?)Khushi looked at arnav who was staring at her with his angry eyes "boliye??"(tell me)khushi again shouted at him...

"Stop it khushi...Dont shout.koi sunegaa"(someone will listen)Arnav warned her with low voice...

"sun ne do sab ko.mujhe koi faraq nahi padhta hein.mein chilaungi,aur jor se chillaungi.aap kya kar payengi?"(let them dosent make any diffference for me if they listen.I wil shout,loudly.what can you do?" Khushi shouted very loudly...

But the next is not known to her.

Arnav slammed his lips on hers.making her shut her mouth...

Her voice was caught in her throat by the sudden action of arnav.

She closed her eyes instantly to feel his lips on hers...


"khushijii"Nk's voice made both of them break their kiss.

Arnav felt damn irritated because of NK...

Arnav withdrew from his kiss and saw Khushi's eyes.

Khushi's eyes are same as his eyes.her eyes showing the same feelings he had...

"Khushijii"Again nk's voice made arnav more and more irritated he rushed out of his keep himself calm...

Khushi was still in some other world.she was completely lost in the first feel of his lips on hers.

An unknown sensation raised in her and her mind went wild.Khushi blushed thinking about the kiss...

"Khushiji"Nk's voice made khushi come out of her trance...

" yeha pe kya kar rahe hein??"(what are you doing here?)Nk asked khushi...

But khushi was silent not able to know what to answer..she felt unconfortable thinking about her kiss with arnav..

Nk understood that she was unconfortable and wished to leave it..

"Ok leave it.waise aapka cheeks laal kyu hai??(ok leave it.why are your cheeks red?)Nk asked khushi pointing towards her blushing cheeks.

Khushi touched her cheeks and again blushed hard.

she ran away from there as fast as she can..


Khushi saw arnav coming down stairs... His eyes looking at her,only her...

Her heart started beating fast  DHAK DHAK...

Khushi clutched the saree near her heart...but her DHAK DHAK dint seem to stop...

She blushed furiously which dint go unnoticed by arnav.

Arnav felt happy seeing khushi blushing and smirked at her expressions.

which made khushi blush more and more...


Everyone sat for the puja Anjali beside shyam,akash besides payal,maami besides maami,khushi's amma beside buaji,naniji beside laxmi.Khushi was single 

NK was about to sit beside her but arnav was so fast and finally sat beside khushi shocking everyone  in the RM to the coree..

"Chotte tum?aur puja??"Asked the shocked anjali...

everyone were staring at arnav in disbelief.

Even khushi was shocked to see him beside her but felt happy inwardly...

"kyu?mein puja mein nahi reh sakhta hu kya??"(why?cant i stay in puja)arnav replies looking confidently at all the members making them withdraw their piercing gazes...

"Waah chotte mein bahut khush tum pehli baar puja mein bait rahe ho"(wow chotte i'm so happy that you are sitting in puja for the first time)Anjali screamed happily...

"Ok now lets start the puja now"Arnav said trying to divert everyone..

The went on pleasently with NK trying to look at khushi and arnav blocking NK's vision...


everyone sat on the couch in the living room and were discusssing about the wedding rituals..

Arshi were busy in staring and RABBAVE sessions..

All the family members decided to conduct a sangeet ceremony next evening at a HOTEL...which was suggested by NK...

Finally all the GUPTAS got up to to take leave for that day...

"Khushijii yaad heina kal hume shopping jaana tha"(khushi we have to go to shopping remember naa)Nk reminded khushi...

"mein kal subah aake aapko pick up karunga"(i will come and pick up you in the morning)

khushi smiled and nodded in confirmation...

Arnav clenched his fist in anger but controlled himself.

Khushi left leaving the fuming arnav...


Arshi  shopping

Hii friends

i hope u liked the part

i know many of you are w8ting for arshi's confession it will be in two updates dont worry Wink

and coming to SHYAMAngry

right now i dont want to bring into this love story

so as the story advances his character will come 

so have patience frnds

and plzz do LIKE and COMMENT Smile


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algy IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 27 February 2013
Posts: 11537

Posted: 19 July 2013 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Me 1st
OMG !!! he kissed khushi
A jealous Arnav s alwz a treat 2 watch
Loved this part
waiting 4 more

Edited by algy - 09 August 2013 at 2:33pm

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akshusarun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by algy

my place Approve
omgg u r so fasttt Smile

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algy IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by akshusarun

Originally posted by algy

my place Approve
omgg u r so fasttt Smile

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