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Bubbles76 Goldie

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
sorry for late commenting ... it was good ... hahahaha Arnav getting jealous ... now abh aye ga mazaSmile

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 8:38am | IP Logged
amazing update...
akshusarun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged
                                          Hii frnds 
                                               HAPPY READING Smile
                                   MAKING YOU A PERFECT 


                                                                             PART 4A


Everyone in the home were running here and there to complete workd for puja.

Anjali is busy in setting puja mandir while NK is helping her.

Asusual arnav is busy with his phone talking to Aman.

But his eyes always kept going near the entrance of the door.

"Chotte jaake oopar se flowers lekar aana"(chotte go and get the flowers from upstairs)Anjali said arnav.

Arnav has no other choice so he went to get the flowers..

Mean while entire GUPTA family came to home.

They were welcomed by anjali and NK...

Nk was trying veryy much to impress khushi's family...

Khushi's eyes were searching for Arnav but she was unable to find him..

Everyone sat in the living room and kept discussing about the puja and other wedding rituals mean while khushi went to help anjali in lighting diyas in mandir.

Then Arnav came back with a basket of flowers...and kept them near the table.

Suddenly Arnav saw khushi lighting the diyas near the puja mandir.

He was awstruck seeing his KHUSHI...

She is looking beautifull in a RED saree(diwali saree).


The strands that are falling on her face is making him disturbed.

Arnav felt a strong urge removing those strands and see her beautiful angelic face...and to wet her face with his kisses...Embarrassed


He was completely lost in his world of admiring her with his intense gaze..

Khushi could feel the intense gaze of arnav on her...

she lifted her head to see him and she was welcomed to his world

making thier eyes lock...

Khushi could feel the dhak dhak raising in her heart.she clutched her heart...and kept looking at arnav...

But there trance was broken by the great romance breakers RAIZADA'S and GUPTAS.

Khushi blushed hard thiking about the eyelock they had.Embarrassed

Arnav was about to go but was stopped by seeing something..

He saw NK looking at khushi with dreamy eyes lost in her presence.

Anger ran through arnav's moment he shouted at NK making him come back to the present world.

"NK come with me.. i need to talk to you"He said with commanding voice.

Arnav took NK to his room and closed the door...

"Nk!! What the hell are you doing down??"Arnav yelled at NK shocking him...

"mein??I'm helping khushiji in her work "Nk stammered due to ASR's anger...and confused about the questions he asked.

"I mean tum khushi ko yese kyu dekh rahe ho??"(why wer you watching khushi like that?)Arnav asked.

"Ohoo Nannav mera bhai.i watched because she is beautiful"Nk said very cooly...

Arnav controled his anger which is reaching its peaks...

"Tum khushi se dur raho"(stay away from khushi)Arnav warned NK.

"kyu???"(y) was the confused answer that escaped NK's mouth.

"Because She is mi..."Arnav stopped suddenly on what he was about to say and again resumed..

"Because she is mad..Thats it just stay away from her".and left from ther angrily...leaving confused NK behind.

"yeh nannav bhi naa.he thinks everyone were mad like him"Nk thought to himself and left from the room to down stairs.


Khushi was trying to tie flowers near the entrance of the door with the help of a stool...

Arnav came downstairs with anger..and was pacing in RM living room...

He saw Khushi standing on a stool and tieing the flowers...

His foot dragged him towards khushi...

The main door opened without a warning and in the nexxt moment the stool lost its control and fell down.

Khushi closed her eyes tightly thiking about the pain after hitting to the floor.But she landed safely on a strong built body protected her with his arms safely...

She could feel that warmth of Arnav's holding her tightly...

She could hear his heart beat which is beating fast noww..

Khushi opened her eyes and looked into his eyes which were full of concern,care and DEEP LOVE...

Khushi was lost in those chocolate brown eyes and arnav was lost in Her caramel eyes.


Both of them were lost in thier own world...

"Khushijiii"Nk screamed seeing khushi and arnav on floor.

everyone in RM came running to see what happened.

Arnav and Khushi got up and saw all the members gatheres infront of them..

"kya hua??"(wat happened?)everyone asked with worried faces.

"Ku...kuch na...nahi bas mein stool sey ghir gayi aur arnavji ne bachaliya"Khushi said trying to be cool.

"omgg khushiji.aapko chot toh nahi lagi heina?"(you dint get hurt na)NK asked with concerned eyes...

"nahi toh"(no)khushi said looking at arnav.

                                            everyone went back to complete preparations for puja and NK was helping Khushi in the kitchen...making a pair of loving eyes fume with jelousy...

"Khushiji..aap khana bannate wakht... bahut kubsoorat lagte hein"(you look beautiful while cooking)Nk said admiring khushi's beauty..

"iska matlab mein sirf khana bhanate waqt hi khubsoorat lagti hu kya??"(do you mean i look beautiful only while cooking)Khushi said knowingly to let arnav feel more and more jelous.

"Nahi nahi..aap har waqt bahut khubsoorat lagte hein"(you look beautiful all the time) NK replied khushi with smile on his face.

"aur aap bhi bahut ache aur khubssorat hein."(even you are beautiful and good)Khushi said making arnav jelous.


Arnav observed this from behind the pillow and came inside the kitchen...

"Khushiii... Dii tumhe upar bula rahi hein"(di is calling you upstairs)Arnav said khushi trying to be cool.

Khushi went out of the kitchen arnav gave an "IDIOT"look to NK and left...


In Anjali's room

Khushi knocked the door of anjali's room.

Shyam opened the door...but then Anjali came ther.

"Khushiji app yeha??"(you here?)anjali asked khushi..

"jii woh arnavji ne kaha ki app mujhe bula rahe hein"(arnavji told me that you are calling me)Khushi replied back..

"nahi toh"(no) anjali replies khushi.

Khushi was shocked...and confused and turned around to get down..

"yeh arnavji humse joot kyu bola??)(why did arnavji lie to me??)Khushi kept thiking while moving infront of the rooms upstairs.

Suddenly she felt a strong pull...and nxt moment she was in room locked between a pair of strong muscular hands and the door.Embarrassed


Hii frnds

the nest part will be tomorrow

due to lack of time i'm unable to update the posts

i'm trying my best to post it..

plz let me know if there are any mistakes.

okk then enjoy todays update and will be back with part B tomorrow

hit LIKE and plzz do COMMENT 

they give me strength to write



Edited by akshusarun - 17 July 2013 at 11:09am

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 11:20am | IP Logged



Edited by vijiasr08 - 18 July 2013 at 8:09pm

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Akkkiii darliiinggg...superb update..keep it up Wink Big smile
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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
eeep! quickly put the precap please!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
nice update !!! so arnav is jealous and now he will get angry over khushi for being so sweet with nk.. loved the update.. 

thanks for pm Smile

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
beautiful  update
ohooo finally arnav is jealous 

continue soon :)

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