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akshusarun IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged

                     Making U a Perfect
               LOVER

This story starts from Lavanya leaving RM on akash and payal's engagement.Arnav cancels his engagement with lavanya since he has feelings for Khushi.

                    ~~ PROLOGUE~~
(Translations in Red)

Both Arnav and Khushi went to drop lavanya in the Airport.On thier way back Khushi was so angry on arnav because he is responsible for lavanya's sadness.there was utmost silence in the car.

"Gaadi rokiye!!!"(stop the car)Khushi muttered with anger


."What??"Arnav was shocked but he dint stop the car.


"mein ne kaha gaadi rokiye"(I said stop the car!!!)khushi said a

 litlle bit louder this time.


Arnav stopped the car.He turned to face khushi and ask her reason for stopping the car.but before he could ask anything Khushi removed her seat belt and moved out of the car.

Arnav was shocked to see this and he too got out of the car.

Outside it was so dark and silent and they were almost on the edge of a hill.Khushi stood there her arms across her chest fuming and her back facing arnav.Arnav understood Khushi is angry but he dont know the reason.


"Khushi!!" arnav called calmly.But khushi dint respond to him.


"Khushi..Kya hua??(what happened)"Again he asked her little bit louder...Khushi Turned to face him with anger in her eyes.


"Kya hua?????????? aur kya hona baaki reh gaya MR.raizada...??aaj aapki vajah seh  lavanya ji ka dil tuth gaya(What happned??stilll what needs to be happened Mr.Raizada??today because of you lavanya's heart is broken)."She shouted with anger is her eyes..


Arnav was shocked to see Khushi talking to him angrily but before he could say anything khushi continued...


"Aapko pata hai kitna dukh hoga jab ek ladki ki sagaai tuth jaathi tho???"(Do u know how much it hurts for a girl for breaking her engagement??)


" aap ek ladki ke jindagi ke saath yesa kaise kel sakte hein???"(How could you play with a girls life??)Khushi shouted at arnav.


 "batayie, jawab dijiye hame ki aapne yesa kyu kiya(tell me,why did you do all this)??" she started hitting his chest with force.Arnav saw tears in Khushi's eyes.She is sad for what had happened with her friend.


And thats enough for Arnav Singh Raizada to loose his patience. he pulled her with one jerk holding her shoulders tightly...


"Because I LOVE U DAMMIT..." arnav's voice echoed the surroundings.


Khushi was shocked to hear those words from arnav.arnav left her shoulders.

Khushi dint expect this answer from arnav.She was hell shocked to listen this...

Later she realized that she too love arnav and this is what she want to hear from arnav and today she heard it.Smile appeared on her lips.

She was soo happy and Turned back to see Arnav 

But before she could  see arnav left from the place...




I hope You loved it friends

I know its bit short Smile but i thought of just introducing the concept of

WHAT IF ARNAV PROPOSES KHUSHI VERY BEFORE??

Tell me whether to continue or not?? 

please hit LIKE and plzz do comment

they meant a lot for me

and since this is my first FF

plzz let me know if there are any mistakes so that i wont repeat it furthur.

If u have any doubts plzz ask me Smile

Thank You


PART1

PART2

PART3

PART-4A

PART-4B

PART-5

PART-6

PART-7A

PART-7B

Part - 8 on Pg 33

Edited by akshusarun - 27 October 2014 at 9:37pm

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:06am | IP Logged
nice one ... do continue please

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:12am | IP Logged


CONGRATULATION NICE START. NICE STYLE OF WRITING ENJOYING VERY MUCH KEEP ROCKING

GOOD LUCK FOR YOU NEW FF DEAR ALL THE BEST

              

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE . UPDATE SOON

Edited by vijiasr08 - 24 June 2013 at 11:23am

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Wow Prologue main he Chakka mardiya loved it 

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:23am | IP Logged

Big smileBig smile ITS REALLY GOODBig smileBig smile

CONTINUE SOONTongue


Edited by algy - 27 June 2013 at 1:12pm

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:27am | IP Logged
its ur first ff wowww very nc prolouge
continue ...
all the besttt

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bubbles76

nice one ... do continue please

thnq Smile
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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vijiasr08



CONGRATULATION NICE START. NICE STYLE OF WRITING ENJOYING VERY MUCH KEEP ROCKING

GOOD LUCK FOR YOU NEW FF DEAR ALL THE BEST

              

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE . UPDATE SOON
THNQ Smile soo much

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