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Virman :Meri duniya hai tujh mein Part. 4 (Page 2)

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 12:56am | IP Logged
SUPERB  UPDATE.
THEY CONFESSED.
PLZ PM ME YOUR UPDATES.
CONTINUE SOON.

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 6:46am | IP Logged
fab, cont soon.

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 7:39am | IP Logged
awesome start dear
waiting to read more
update soon

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 9:46am | IP Logged
nice update
start also good update soon

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sweety_cool95

Dis if my first stry ever..just did idea came to my mind and I planned to write it...I will continue if u all like it ...plz comment how was it ..????? 
Character sketch same as show

Manvi and virat have fallen for each other ...her cancer is  cured dey  have not confessed.Manvi decided to confess as now she is fully cured ...same virat he also plans to confess his love to manvi.

Virat texts manvi to meet her on teraace...she decides she will confess dere and den.
Manvi was going to teraace wen she hears sb and vanshika talking dat dey have decided maya for virat 
she thought she can't ditch d family who supported in her worst time.
And maya w perfect for virat ...she w of dere class and second le she dint also knew dat virat loves her or not
.So she decided not to tell him her fellings.
On d other side virat was waiting for her.He had planned a perfect filmy proposal for her...
but she don't came ...he was heart broken ...
he called her but she dint pick his call .Next day manvi wid her family wa leaving for rishikesh .
...virat thought he can't loose dis easily ...he cant loose his first love ...
he decided to talk to her.But she kept ignoring him ..
.virat decided  to talk to her after breakfast but she left and started packing.
Virat now had lost all his patience ...it w den manvi was going to jeevika's room wen virat pulled her in his room.
He pinned her and kept one hand on her mouth so she does not scream ...manvi was hell scared ...but wen she saw its virat ...she calmed down ...her heart was racing at 120 speed.
Virat removed his hand from her mouth and liked desperately in her eyes ...
he straightly asked her y she dint come to terrace.M :mujhe jana hai ...Chodo mujhe.
She kept struggling but virat w too strong her.
She pushed him but he Held her tightly from her shoulders.
V:kyon bhag rahi ho mujhse.
Manvi : Chodo mujhe ..mujhe jana hai
.V :nahin (shouted) mere saabalon ka jaawab Diye bina nahin..
Manvi kept struggling.
v:He kyon nahin aayi kal.Kya main tumhari life kuch nahin Hun..
m: nahin 
.v:Acha ! Jab main  tumhari paas aata Hun to tum kyon Ghana jati ho( moving towards her)
.Jab main tu are Kareeb hota Hun kyon tumharri saansen tez ho jati hain (moving more toward her)
M : virat plz.
V: nahin manvi bolo...Kyon jab main tumhein choota hum tumhari dhadkanen aur tez hoti hsin..(Holding her from waist).
M:virat(softly)
v: Kyon mere ellava tu kissi aur ko dekh nahin pati.Kyon tadpa rahi ho.
Manvi pushed him now.
Her back w facing him..
v:He came closer ...jab tum mujhse pyaar karti ho to kehti kyon nahin ( nuzzling her neck)
.M: virat main tu se pyaar nahin karti.
Virat turned her.He held her hand and kept on his head.Ab kaho ki main tumhari life mein koi mayiney nahin rakhta.Kaho ki tum mujhse pyaar nahin karti( shouting ).
Now manvi had lost all countrol on her..removed er hand from his head
.M: karti Hun...Bahut pyaar karti Hun.Sabse Zada ...apni jaan se Zada ...Virat was now on d top of d world.
He pulled her in tigh hug.
Manvi hugged him back...virat placed soft kiss on her neck.
Manvi shivered wid his touch ..

Precap : everyone leaving for rishikesh...virat is very sad as today dey confessed and today manvi was leaving ...jeevika asks her to stay back

Next part if I get gud response...


Edited by Sweety_cool95 - 28 June 2013 at 6:13am
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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Sry guys ...main kuch try kar rahi thi and ye same art dobara paste ho Gaya ...sooo sry ...ignore it..Disapprove

Edited by Sweety_cool95 - 28 June 2013 at 6:22am
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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Part 2
Virat and manvi separated from each other
Virat kissed her forehead, then eyes,cheeks...came down to her lips...he was abt to kiss dem wen beeji called manvi from outside..
V: kya yr...kitna khrab time hsi logon ka...
Manvi was abt to leave but virat held her hand ...she pleaded...but virat dint listen nd pulled her towards him ... Holding her from waist 
M: virat plz Jane do ...beji bula rahi hsin 
V: noo
M:plzzz
V:pehle kiss
M: nooo
V: theek hai...phir main tu hain nahin chod ne vala
Beeji called manvi agin 
Manvi kissed his cheek and ran out of d room
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...
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Virat was smiling in his room wen viren entered d room 
Vi:kya baat hai mere bhai ...aaj tumhari cheer ki smile ki itni wide kyon hai
V: bhai aaj main Bahut khushi Hun ...Bahut khush
Finally Maine apne pyaar ka izhaar kar diya
Aur aap sahi the bhai manvi bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai ...
Aaj meri life ka neatest day hai
Vi Kamal hai bhai...mubarakan mubarakan


In manvi's room 
Haan di Maine virat ko apni felling s bata di 
Bata Diya usse ki main usse pyaar Kari Hun 
J:manvi main tum Donno ke liye Bahut khush Hun
J: chal ab tu packing puri kar varna beeji Bahut daantegi

It was dem manvi realised dat she was going today ...

Virat's room

V:plz bhai kuch karo na ...manvi ko plz rock lo na
Aaj hi to Maine usse alone pyaar ka izhaar Kiya hsi 
Plz bhai Romeo ko apni Juliet se alag mat karo ..p,zzz bhai kuch karo na

Vi: are bas kar...manvi ka kitna asar hai tujh par ...itna melo dramatic ho Gaya hi tu
V : bhai plz kuch socho na varna manvi ki yaad mein main majnoo ban jaunga
Vi: Han kyon nahin ab to kuch sochna hi padega varana dusri devdas banne mrin time nahin lagega
Tabhi jeevika enters
J : kya baaten ho rahi hai bhai yon ke beech
Vi: are jeevika acha hua tum aa gayi 
J : kyon kya hua
Vi: manvi ko aaj Jane se rokna hai ...kuch idea socho na
V : haan bhabhi plzzz
J: par beeji ko kaise manayenge
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...
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Msmni 's room
M: beeji plzzz bas kuch din aur rehne Dejiye na ...plzzz beeji ...
B:nahin manvi ...pehle hi Bahut din ho chulkey hain ab aur nahin 
M: par beeji ..
B: mujhe kuch aur nahin Sunna 
And beeji left
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...beeji was in virika's room 
J: beeji plz manvi kuch din rehne dejiye...meri delivery issi mahine mrin to hai ...uske baad usse main vapas bhej dungi ...aap to jante hsi na main manvi ke bina kuch nahin kar pati...plzzz beji...mujhe uske zaroorat hsi ..plzzz
B: Lakin beta yahan Sab kya socenge
J: are beeji yhan par to sabko Bahut khushi hogi agar vo ruk gayi 
B: theek hsi beta
J : thanku beeji 

Beji was leaving and manvi still dint knew dat she beeji had agreed for get stay..
M: bye di ...Bahut miss karungi aspko ..apna dhyaan rakhna and chutku ka bhi 
It was difficult for jeevika to countrol her laugher ...






Next part in few hrs...





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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Sounds Amazing!!
Luved both the parts!!!
Update soon!!

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