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Virman :Meri duniya hai tujh mein Part. 4

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Dis if my first stry ever..just did idea came to my mind and I planned to write it...I will continue if u all like it ...plz comment how was it ..????? 
Character sketch same as show

Manvi and virat have fallen for each other ...her cancer is  cured dey  have not confessed.Manvi decided to confess as now she is fully cured ...same virat he also plans to confess his love to manvi.

Virat texts manvi to meet her on teraace...she decides she will confess dere and den.
Manvi was going to teraace wen she hears sb and vanshika talking dat dey have decided maya for virat 
she thought she can't ditch d family who supported in her worst time.
And maya w perfect for virat ...she w of dere class and second le she dint also knew dat virat loves her or not
.So she decided not to tell him her fellings.
On d other side virat was waiting for her.He had planned a perfect filmy proposal for her...
but she don't came ...he was heart broken ...
he called her but she dint pick his call .Next day manvi wid her family wa leaving for rishikesh .
...virat thought he can't loose dis easily ...he cant loose his first love ...
he decided to talk to her.But she kept ignoring him ..
.virat decided  to talk to her after breakfast but she left and started packing.
Virat now had lost all his patience ...it w den manvi was going to jeevika's room wen virat pulled her in his room.
He pinned her and kept one hand on her mouth so she does not scream ...manvi was hell scared ...but wen she saw its virat ...she calmed down ...her heart was racing at 120 speed.
Virat removed his hand from her mouth and liked desperately in her eyes ...
he straightly asked her y she dint come to terrace.M :mujhe jana hai ...Chodo mujhe.
She kept struggling but virat w too strong her.
She pushed him but he Held her tightly from her shoulders.
V:kyon bhag rahi ho mujhse.
Manvi : Chodo mujhe ..mujhe jana hai
.V :nahin (shouted) mere saabalon ka jaawab Diye bina nahin..
Manvi kept struggling.
v:He kyon nahin aayi kal.Kya main tumhari life kuch nahin Hun..
m: nahin 
.v:Acha ! Jab main  tumhari paas aata Hun to tum kyon Ghana jati ho( moving towards her)
.Jab main tu are Kareeb hota Hun kyon tumharri saansen tez ho jati hain (moving more toward her)
M : virat plz.
V: nahin manvi bolo...Kyon jab main tumhein choota hum tumhari dhadkanen aur tez hoti hsin..(Holding her from waist).
M:virat(softly)
v: Kyon mere ellava tu kissi aur ko dekh nahin pati.Kyon tadpa rahi ho.
Manvi pushed him now.
Her back w facing him..
v:He came closer ...jab tum mujhse pyaar karti ho to kehti kyon nahin ( nuzzling her neck)
.M: virat main tu se pyaar nahin karti.
Virat turned her.He held her hand and kept on his head.Ab kaho ki main tumhari life mein koi mayiney nahin rakhta.Kaho ki tum mujhse pyaar nahin karti( shouting ).
Now manvi had lost all countrol on her..removed er hand from his head
.M: karti Hun...Bahut pyaar karti Hun.Sabse Zada ...apni jaan se Zada ...Virat was now on d top of d world.
He pulled her in tigh hug.
Manvi hugged him back...virat placed soft kiss on her neck.
Manvi shivered wid his touch ..

Precap : everyone leaving for rishikesh...virat is very sad as today dey confessed and today manvi was leaving ...jeevika asks her to stay back

Next part if I get gud response...

                           
Index 
Part 1 - pg 1
Part 2 - pg2


Part 3 - pg 3
Part 4 : pg 4



Edited by Sweety_cool95 - 05 July 2013 at 12:16am

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:06am | IP Logged
first of all I love the title of ur story - its so beautiful n nice
love the concept too - yes jeevika make her stay there bt pir maya ka kya
cnt wait to read more- do continue it plz Wink

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:20am | IP Logged
superb update

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:40am | IP Logged
superb update
plz plz plz update soon

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
Awesome pleasee continue soon..

Its a damn good start... Cant wait for the next part..

And pleasee PM me alsoo...

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 4:00pm | IP Logged
yes pleasee continue and if possible pm me pleasee

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 4:22pm | IP Logged
fab continue soon plzz :)

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
awesome update.
plzzz plzzz update soon and plzz pm me...

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