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virman ff :Do anjaane ajnaabi part14 page 32(21 december) (Page 9)

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part 5
manvi was sitting in her room i.e guest room n crying hard n for the words virat used for her...she was sitting beside her window n looking up in the sky
m(crying voice)-bahut maja ara h na apko mujhe itna dukh deke..maine ya bigada hai apka jo ap aise kr rhe hoo ...mi ek simple ladki hoo ek simple life chahti hoo..maine kbhi kisi k sath kuch bura nhi kia..to q mere sath itna bura hota h bhgwan.q(cried her heart out holding her face in her palms) 
when someone put her hand on herhead..manvi lift her head n saw virat's dadiji(yes guyzz his grandma)
m-dadiji ap yaha...
d-q mi nhi askti apni bachi k pas...
m-dadiji(cried n hugg her) mujhe nhi rahna yaha plss.mujhe jana h apne ghr..plsss help me...
d-(also want her to go away from this house where there are all selfish people but then thought she is bahu of this khandan) beta..meri abt suno
manvi broke the hug-plsss mujhe yaha achha nhi lgta plss...
d-ao mere sath..
d took manvi to her room
m-ap mujhe yaha q lai hai
d-tumhe kuch dikhana h /...
manvi got confused 
dadiji showed someone virat's fotos to manvi from his child hood so that manvi think some good about him not only bad bad n bad
m-ap mujhe ye sb
d-ruko sb smjh jaogi...(showed her his toys  from 1 yr to 6 yrs his cyce he used to ride when he was 10 yrs old then his clg guitar n all
m-virat sir..gate b hai..
d-ha merA VIRAT BHT ACHHA GATA H 
M=MGR
d-mgrkuch aisa hua ki usne apna gana or jeena tk chhod dia..
manvi was so cinfused
d-virat ek ladki se bht pyar krta ta even use shadi krna chahta h uski ek din death ho gai bs usi din hmne apne haste khelte virat ko kho dia.
m-mi kuch smjhi nhi..haste khetle mtlb..voto abi b khush hi rahte h (shok her head with disgusting face)us maya k sath
d-ao tumhe kuch dikhati ho
dadi show her videos of virat njoying freely in virika's shadi function n evry function manvi smile see him smiling..
m-dadiji vo ladki kaun h.jo hmesha virat sir k sath h in sb videos mi se
d(smile)-vo jeevika ki behna h mansi..ye hai vo ladki jisse virat  behinta pyar krta ta.
manvi smile vanished she saw the girl she was cute n bubbly types like her
m-ohh...
d-bs jbhi se hmne virat ko kho dia..vo har ladki mi masi ko dhndta h ..uske pyar dhndta h ki kahi to uske jaise pyar krne wali ladki use mill jae..but afsos mansi k bad aisi koi ladki nhi ai..jo uski life bdl ske..tumhe dekha to socha tum hi hoo jo hmara virat hme lauta skti hoo...
m(look down)mansi ki death kaise hui \
?-use cancer ta
manvi n d turn n saw jeevika on door.
j-use cancer ta hmne use bachane ki bht koshish ki but vo hme chhod k chli gai 
j strted crying manvi go n hugg her tightly
m-pls chup ho jaiye...ab hmare rone se mansi to wapas nhi aegi na.plss chup ho jaiye
aftersometime they brok hug
j-pehle mi nhi chahti ti meri behn ki jaga koi or le..mgr jaise jaise virt bdlta gya..maine soch lia uski life kisi ko pkka laungi...verna vo aise hi mar jaega
m-mgr ap log mujhe ye pehle b bta skte the.mujeh blackmail q kia
j-hm chahte the  tum is ghr mi ao uski patni bnke jbhi vo thk ho skta h ..verna tum ye b kah skti ti tum uski dost banke madad kr skti hoo
falshback
manvi went to home n strted crying door bell rings manvi goto her door n was shoked saw her lil sis diya there
m(shoked ) tum ayah itni ratko
d(crying) diii
diya go n hugg her
m-kya hau di tum ro q ri ho
d-di mi clg se nikal dia di...
m(shoked)kya..mgr vo aise kaise kr skte tum to unki bht achi student hoo..
they brok the hugg
m-diya...kahi fees ki to waja nhi h 
d-nhi di..fees ki nhi h ..fees to ap puri deti ho..
m-fir kya vaja h dia
d(crying)vadheras
manvi was dam shoked cant think even once y dey did this coz she knows y
m-chl mere sath
after few minutes manvi n diya reach vadhera mansion manvi keep on ringing bell when servant come n open the door
manvi shout-mr.vadhera
evryone ws in their room
m-mr vadhra come out(sout)
evryone come out of their room  xcpt virat n maya...Tongue
vi-manvi tum yaha
m-ap smjhte ky hai apne apko..kuch krenge mi chup chap dekhti rahogi...
v-manvi hua kya hai(to diya)or ye kaun hao
m-ye meri behn hai jise ap logo ki waja se clg se nikal dia..trustee h na ap use clg k 
vi got it its all coz of va
va come ine front-manvi mujhse bt kro...
m-q kr rhe h ap log ye sb
va-chlo mere room mi
va move to her room n manvi follow her-dia tu yahi baith mi ai ..(put her palms on her cheeks) tra carrier mi khrb nhi hone dungi
m go to va room
m-kya chahti h ap q kr rahi h ye sb
va-apne bete k luy..jaise tumhari behn tumhare liy maine rkhti h mera beta b mere liy ,maine rkhta h ..tum usse shdi krlo mi tumhari behn ko duabra admission dilwa dungi
m-mgr uske carrier or is bt k beech mi q lari h ..
va-tum shadi k lyi haa kr do..sb pehle jaise ho jaega
ters flowing from manvis eyes whther to destroy dia's carrier or her life..amvni clear her tear
m-mi tair(yes she choose her life to b destroyed(thinks)mere taiar hones ekya hota h virat ko b to taiar hoa pdega or vo kbhi nhi hoga)
va(smile)-thk h tum jao kl subh dia ko clg chhod dena sb pehle jaisa hoga
manvi move out saw dia crying-dia sb tk ho gya h ..tum kl clg jao okk
both sistrs hugg n vadhers shoked va maan kaise gai
falshback ends

j-bs isliy ma ne tumhe blackmail kia or kuch nhi .. anvi plss man jao..or hmare virat ko hme lauta do
manvi noded clear her tear(to d) kya mein ye guitar le skti h 
j and d shoked wanted to say no but she is his wife they nodded yes
manvi took guitr n move was when bump into someone n guitr fell from her hand..that was viraaatt

virat lok at her angrily n then guitar..all his memories again come back to him with mansi
virat slap her tihtly-tumhari himmat kaise hui ise chhune ki...aj k bad meri cheejo chune ki koshish b mt krna
virat took the guitar n left..manvi strted crying n rush to her room she curse herself for tuching his things n get hard words from him n today he slapt her

thats it guyzz njoy
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Awesome yaar..
Pleasee continue soon...
Feel really sad for Manvi...
Update soon...
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awesome update...
vanshika blackmailed manvi by using diya... very bad...
virat slapped manvi... sadu kahin ka...
and this whole fiasco... uff... what will manvi go through... poor mannu...
continue soon...

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