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virman ff :Do anjaane ajnaabi part14 page 32(21 december) (Page 30)

parthnitiholics Senior Member

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Posted: 31 March 2014 at 12:42am | IP Logged
part 13

soryy guyzz m really sory i was very busyCry
here's ur update

evryone turn  turn towards diya..she was lost in something...n just blabbered her sentence...
diya look at them-haa manvi di  ki platic surgery hui hai...
evryone dont no whether to happy that their manvi is alive whether to sad that she left their house in front of evryone but no one even dare to stop her...specially virat she shouted hurt his mansi...his love his life..for no reasn

d-ji vo jb mi ek br frnds k sath mumbai gai ti to mujhe unki body mili vo puri jal chuki ti...mgr mi khush ti ki unki saase chal rahi hai..mi unhe jaldi se hospital le gaye unka chehra nahi pta tha iliiy dr ne unk nya chehra diya...jab unko hosh aya maine unse pochha ki vo kaun hai but unhe kuchh yad nahi maine unhe manvi naam dia...or unhe apne sath orphnage le gai..qki mi wahi rahti ti(tears fall from her eyes)..wahah ek din unke muh se nikal vo lawyer banna chahti hai..unhone kuchh din orphange mi teachr ka kam kiya..or fr hum dono orphane chhod kr..hmare fat mi rahne lage or maine apni padhai contunye kari

diya sit on her knees hiding her face with her hands n cried her heart out-m soryy//...mujhe nahi pata tha mere ek decsion ki waja se kisi ki life badljaegi...plsss mujhe maaf kr do...
j goes to her n hugg her---tumhari koi glti nhi hai...blki tumne to meri mannu ko bachYas

suddenlyv-magr mansi...i mean manvi ab hogi kaha

evryone was thinking the same...
vi-mere pas hai idea hai hm manvi ki foto newspapr mi dete hai...
d-nahi..di agr ana nahi chahti ..or unhone newspapr mi ye news dekhi to vo kahi or b ja skti hai..vo kuch b kr skti hai apne ap ko chhupane k liy...hum to police mi complain kr skte hai...

vi-yaa ye sahi ita 26th jan sare police wala is very busy...
v-to kyqa is 26th jan ki waja se hm manvi ko nhi dhndenge kaisi bat kr rhe hoo ap bhai(shout on viren)mi manvi ko kahi se b dhndoga...
virat pick his car keys n abt to go
d-kaha dhondoge unhe...virat turn...
dya n virat is now face to face-kaha dhondoge...apko pta hai vo kaha hai...
virat lost n he to dont where she must b...
d-pta hai to hm b chalte hai...btaiye kaunse shehr kaun ki country ...kaha hai vo...vo 2 din se gayab hai is time to pta nhi kaha hongi...boliye...
virat sit on sofa hide his face
d-agr mansi didi hoti to kya unke sath b aise hi behv krte.//...yaha didi apni marji se to nhi ai ti...
viren to stop the convo-hme kal tk ka w8 krna pdega...kal sbse pehle policemi complaint krenge...
d-ya hm ye bhi kr skte ye dekhehe kaha kaun kaun se lawyer hai n unke assistants...shayad usse pta chle...
viren nodded..calll rishi to do this work...

on the other hand...
manvi was working as a waitrs.she is w8ing for her jobs to get final as an assistant of any lawyer in that city...she decided once she get the job she will leav the other job but for a while..she had to do these jobs...

m-manvi oi bt nhi kuchh din ki bat hai ek br tjhe job mill jae...fir ye w8er o dance ki job chhod vadhera bht khush honge na ap apki life se apki sbse bdi musbat hat gai..thnk u so much..for making me suffr this much...

on the othr hand...virat is not quit...dialing his frnds n collegues giving manvis foto to them n telling them to give this fotos to their other frnds n do find her as soon as possible...he too fiding her evry nok nd evry corner of their city.he tired come home

sit on his bed..manvi wordings was coming in his mind* one day u wll crave for this realtion mr vadhera...* mansi's wording*atleast give her a chance virat..may b u what u doing with her is wrong*

virat strted crying-m sory manvi..m so soryy..plss come back

hope u guyzz njoyed it...Big smileBig smileBig smile

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pritivirman Senior Member

Joined: 02 May 2013
Posts: 517

Posted: 31 March 2014 at 1:02am | IP Logged
wahhh babyy kya updt h..
mst updt d h tne...
ab jldi se virman k mlwa d fr too or v mjdr updt mlg.. kyn baby ;)
nxt updt plzz jldi krio... jyda wt nhi krng kh dt hn.. Wink

Edited by pritivirman - 31 March 2014 at 1:01am
rasp_berry IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 March 2014 at 1:36am | IP Logged
Superb...i hope virat will find her soon
pink1 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 April 2013
Posts: 8482

Posted: 31 March 2014 at 1:41am | IP Logged
nice update everyone get to know
how mansi turn manvi update soon
chandiniebinda Goldie

Joined: 05 July 2012
Posts: 2493

Posted: 31 March 2014 at 3:27am | IP Logged

Finally you are back..

How was your exames???
Loved it yaar..
Feel sad for Virman...
Hope they will find Manvi soon..
Update soon...
panamaa Goldie

Joined: 14 June 2013
Posts: 1382

Posted: 31 March 2014 at 4:45am | IP Logged
nice update.
thanku so much
swathin IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 February 2012
Posts: 9559

Posted: 31 March 2014 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Thankyou so much for continuing this story
Nw everything is relieved
Felt bad for virat
Waiting for next
Try to update soon
naina927 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 24 June 2012
Posts: 13752

Posted: 31 March 2014 at 5:06am | IP Logged
good one... want virat to suffer for sometime n then let him find his manvi... mansi... whatever... Wink

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