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virman ff :Do anjaane ajnaabi part14 page 32(21 december) (Page 28)

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by GOOGLU

WOWWW I M FRST THIS TIME...YIPEEE! !!! Big smile Big smile Big smile
ABT UPDATE ITS AMEZING DEAR...LOVED IT.. Clap Clap Clap
WD EVERY UPDATE I BECOME MORE CRAZY AND GREEDY FOR NEXT UPDATE..M LOL
REALLY HAPPY TO SEE VIRAT' S CONDITIONS. ... Big smile
WT ABT NEW DHAMAKA...MEANS MANVI IS REAL MANSI...TWIST YAAR.. LOL
BUT ITS TOO SHORT AND YOU CHANGE SCENE AT AWSM POINT...TO GENIUS. ..HAHAAA Big smile Big smile
BUT FEELING BAD FOR MANVI' S CONDITIONS. ...HEARTLESS MANVI...ALL BCZ OF THAT CRUEL VADEHRA..
LOVE DIYA' S OUTBURST ON VIRAT...NOW VIRAT SOUND LIKE TABLA...HAAA...HR KOI BAJA RAHA HAI... Big smile Big smile
EGRLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...PLZZZ TRY TO UPDATE SOOON! !!!!!!!!!
********KEEP ROCKING ******* Star



HAHAHAHA I ALWAYS LIKE UR FEEDBACKS
TABLA..LOL
STAY TUNED

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prathe

wow finally the mansi=manvi how and who is that ??...interesting
finally virat ki bajegi ab hahahha manvi ko doondte rahega bechara
manvi  changed because of him hopefully virat will be able to bring back old manvi back again

do continue soon and other stories tooSmile




GLAD U LIKED IT
STAY TUNED FOR MORE TWISTS...LOL

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swathinair

Superab

Interesting...

So she is mansi...

Bt y bar dancer I mean she is llb student right was assisting viren

just a doubt...



HAHAHA U GUYZ ARE VERY CURIOUS ABOUT WHATS NEXT Y IS SHE DOING IT..
STAY TUNED N KEEP READING U WILL GET TO NO Y SHE IS DOING 
N FOR WHAT SHE IS DOING

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by niki795

awesome update
loved it
but how mansi and manvi are same
poor manvi became a dancer now
continue soon


HAHAH LOL

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kokubaba

mansi tto manviii air aaab mnvii nahii mansi...kya huwa  manvi ka face koo ...accident ne uska face change kardiya...u reminded me ok ekta kapoor...:-)...awsome twist...kahani me ek naya mood.e...aab kya hogha...


HAHAHA STAY TUNED TO NO THE TWIST..TongueLOL
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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 2:00am | IP Logged
HAHHAHAHAH FIRST OF ALL I LOVE U FEEDBACKS..THIS SHOWS HOW CURCIOUS U ALL ARE FOR THE UPDATES..MAKING IMAGINATIONS WHICH ME MORE IDEAS LOL
THNX ALOT FOR FEEDBACKS..Wink

PART 12

vadhera mansion

evryone turn towards the man still in shok state...that he said *she is not like ur sisters mrs vadhera she is ur sister mansi..*

they all turn n found rishi..Rishi is one of the collegue of viren..not working with him..viren appoint him..for some khufia work...only viren no him...evryone in office unaware of his position...viren give work to rishi..when he want some clue for some case..n then has a doubt may b someone is foloowing him...

v and j-rishi
r-hello sir hello mam...viren sir...apka kam ho gya...
evryone turn towards viren-viren sir these are the clue...which profs manvi is only mansi chaudhry...jeevika mam's sister...

evryone oin shok not even uttring a word..just listening to their convo..viren is also shoked...he only given rishi this work because..when j reactd 1 n 2 time on cake n when call manvi as her own sister..that dobt stuck in viren's mind..n he tell rishi to work upn this mistry

vi-rishi r u sure...
r-absolutely sir...these r the dna reports...with say manvi and jeevika mam are siters..as u hv given the sample of their hairs...n when i went mumbai...i come to no...(rishi stop n look at j..who is lost in something...n shok that mansi is alive...)...
vi-what hapen bolo
r-that mansi cured her cancer...n was abolutely fine...after her treatment in mumbai...

evryone dam shoked...listening to no..no body nos whats going on...evryone look at j who is still lost...

vi-thnx rishi..u may leav...n do collect the clues of mr. mehra's case...
r-okk sir...

evryone not in a state to ask anything to j ..coz j herlsf in not in a state she not been able to digest that her mansi is alive...but our diya is so confused wth this...

d-ye kya ho raha..kaun mansi...ab ap log kaunsa blam dal rhe hoo meri manvi didi p...
j-mannu zinda hai(Atlast she said) meri mannu...

vi-jeevika..ab me sirf sch sunna hai...
tears flow from her eyes...she look at evryone loking at them with questioning eyes...jeevika nodded positively-mi b thk gai hoo sbko bolte bolte ki meri mannu...cancer se mar gai,...

evryone jist listening to it...

j-ye sb ki bt hai..jb mannu ko mi..mumbai leke gai ti...akele...uske treatment k liy..virat nhi ja paya ta...qki...usko kuch kam ta...imp..or mannu nhi chahti ti ki virat kam chhod k jaye...mi hospital gai..to mannu ki stage ko dekh k ...dr. ne ek dam treatment shuru kr dia...or jb 1 mahine bad..manvi ka treatment bilkul thk hua...hum dono bht khosh the..ek to is bt ki khushi meri behn thk ho gai..or dosri is bt ki...ki ab meri mannu hmesha mere sath rahegi..qki hmne ye decid kia ta..virat or manvi ki shadi...manvi k bilkul thk hone k bad krenge hum...us din shayad hmari khushi ka akhri din ta...jb hum hotel wapas jare the...humne decid kia sbko surpirse krenge...abhi kisi ko hum kuch nhi btanege...

flashbakc
way back to hotel
m-di..ghr mi sb kitna khush honge na
j was driving...-haa mannu or sbse jyada to virat hoga(teasing her)
m-di plss uski bat mt kro..usne mujhe 2 din se fon ya msg b nhi kia..aise koi krta hai kya..ek br mujhe ghr jane ko..aise kaan kheechogi uske...yad rkhega
j-mannu..gussa nahi...kheech lio..pehle dekh to lene lio..vo q fon nhi kia...Wink

m-mtlb...ap janti hiiShocked

j-haha sory mannu mi nhi bta skti..secret hai..bhabhi devar secret...
m-di pls btao na...
j-mannu vo tra surprise hai..plss virat ka surprise khrb mt kr...

m-hmm okk..waise b mi b dekho..mera hone wala pati mere liy kya surprise plan kr raha hai aise...

j was driving n jeeman was having fun...j was pressing brks..-mannu ye brk q nhi lg raha...
m-ahah di...brk mujhe lgwane k liy apne car k brk khrb kr diye...

j was now worried -mannu sch mi brk nhi lg raha...
m-di mjk mt  mujhe dr lg raha...
j(worrid more)mannu tri kasm brk nhi lg raha...
she was trying to prss brk n stop the car...but not working...
m-di di..tension mt lo..try kro...
j-mannu nhi lg raha...
m saw truck coming...-diii
mansi stir the stairing wheel...n they saved from truck they went on wrong path...they chance by chance saving themselves n others from accident...when they after sometime reach near a khai...mansi shoked seeing this...-di khai agai..we hv to jump...
j-haa jldi kr...mi ye handel krti hoo..nhi di dono sath mi krenge...

j open the door n her door opened quickly mansi was trying but her door was not oprning..
manvi trying n looking at j n nodding not oprning...n looking at khai coming closer to the...
j-mannvi jldi kr...
m-di ye khul nhi ra...
when manvi saw they are so near..she look at j..j got her look what she is upto..she nodded no...
m-m sory di...
she just push j out of car..coz her door was open...
j--no mannu...

j fall outside the car...n the car in which there was manvi it goes directly into khai...j run turn the car...n the car blast...
j-mannnuuuCryCryCry

flashback end...

us din maine apni mannu ko kho dia...
evryone saw j was suffreing alot from so much time..but didnt tell anything to anyone
vi n v was holding her hand bending on their knees
v-bhabhi..ek br b nhi btaya ki mansi...car accident mi...apne fir ye q kaha ki vo cancer
j-mi dar gai ti virat...jis halat mi mujhe uski body mili ti..tum dekhte to tum usi time mar jate virat..atleast hme ye pta ta unse cancer hai...tovo cancer se mari hai..ye sunke sbko shok nhi lgta na...
v-mi ab kaunsa zinda hoo bhabhii...mi to usi din mar gya ta..jb mansi

virat bend his head on j's knees n cry hard..evryone was crying..diya dont no what to say n doo..stainding still

vi was still confuse-jeevika ne kaha ki mansi mar gai ti..but how can manvi b mansi

evryone got his attntion...evryone to want to no the reasn...how can it b
d-coz unki blastic surgry hui hai


evryone shoked


important
guyzz my xamz r coming so cant update till 24th jan hope u njoys

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 2:09am | IP Logged
superb update...Smile All d best for ur exam...
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lovely update...
all the best for examsBig smile

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