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virman ff :Do anjaane ajnaabi part14 page 32(21 december) (Page 26)

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Posted: 01 January 2014 at 5:06am | IP Logged
awesome update
feel really bad for manvi
finally manvi left
hope virat realise is mistake soon
continue soon
tanks for the pm

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Posted: 03 January 2014 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by naina927

Ohhh that was cool...
I loved manvi for taking such a stand for herself... What will she get living in such a house... A life which has no meaning n what she said to virat was sodmn correct... Bang on...!!!!
I personally luv this story more than any of urs... No offence Smile
If possible update this one more oftenly...



thnx alot for liking so much my this ff...
i will b updating it soon as i was not well thats y i didnt update it..
but on this weeknd i will defo upddate

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Posted: 03 January 2014 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maclean

awesome update with twist next update plzzz jaldi feeling sad fr manu Ouch waiting fr next,,, and virat omggg he should thing a bit atleast hope he pleads soon,,,WinkWink ClapClap gud one 



thnx for liking ..
i will surely update it soon
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Posted: 03 January 2014 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prathe

wow i loved it the way manvi gave back superbClapClap and yes virat should regret his actions and also the importance of relationship  let thm search for manvi now and virat ki band aur bajao yaar khoob bajaoLOL

wow maza aya padke superbClap



hahahahaLOL
yaa ab to band bajegi lover boy kiWink

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Posted: 03 January 2014 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by GOOGLU

Its Amezing and wndrful update...loved it..
Hey really hatts off you dear...I m lack of wrds..
Fabulous update...
Sad for manvi...but she take right decision to moving away from vadhera house...
Really love this part...manvi' s outburst on every one...
Really want manvi' s wrds become true soon ...that virat craving for this relationship very soon...
And also want manvi behave wd him in same manner...
Love VM slapped virat' s part...he deserved it...
U can imagine dear hw much ur update effective...
Plzzz try to update soon...
Egrly want to see virat' s crying crying and crying update...
Thanks alot for pm dea...
Can't hit like button, , sometimes its not wrking...otherwise I hit it 20 time...
Keep rocking...



hahahhaha
first of alll thnk u thnk u thnk u so such a long n lovely feedbacks..as u no i like long feedbacks
n secondly...stay tuned...he will surely crave for our mannu now..Wink
will b updating on this weeknd
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Posted: 03 January 2014 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kokubaba

hi

Superb update. Hope virat realises his mistakes. Now it is manvi turn to give it back tyo virat in same manner. Hope it is loads of fun...poor virat...Let him search manvi first ...haaa i knw u would have planned something different for sure. Eagerly waiting for search manu mission and virat patofying manvi...wow...


thnx alot for feedback 
and surely pataofying round will be strting soon
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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 12:19am | IP Logged
part 11

its been 2 days manvi left vadhera mansion n vadhera mansion is just silent since 2 days...virat didnt move out from his room...he dont no y he is sad for manvi even when he dont love her...he hate her like her...her word was crushing him again n again*one day u will crave for this relationship mr vadhera*

virat hit the class table on front of him..he dont no...but her words was effecting him each n evry word ...she told him...
viren came to his room-virat what hv u done...ur hand is bleeding...
v(widout looking at him)-no bhai m ok...plss go i dont wanna talk to anyone...

vi-virat come down lets have something..since 2 days no body have something ..lets go down...
v-hows bhabhi
vi-she is f9 but unaware of manvi left house...

v-m coming bhai

lateer on dinning table...j was arrnaging food..evryone was sitting on their chairs...dont hv mood to eat..but for j's sake they were sitting...
j-manvi nhi ai...
evryone ignoring j's graze n look each other

vi-jeevika vo...

??-surpriseee

evryone turn n saw DIYA manvi's lil sis...evryone saw them n shoked to see her...evryone was happy hopping to see...manvi to with her...

diya took evryone's blessings ..evryone looking at door to see manvi was also there...specially virat he dont no y but he wanna see manvi he had not seen her from 2 days...

d-y r u guyzz looking towards door...koi ane wala hai kya?
befre someone ask diya asked them-manvi di kaha hai..bht din ho gaye..unse mile hue...

diya for searching for manvi...
va-manvi(confused)..voto ...

but stop..dont no what to say but virat told her-manvi 2 din pehle is ghr se chli gai ti..tumhe tumhare ghr p nhi mili...
d-chli gai mtlb(confused)
j too confuse looking at evryone...
vi-vo ye ghr chhod k chli gai

j n diya was dam shoked 
d-but di ghr p to nhi hai..vo wahi se to ai hoo..
evryone else nin house now more shoked...virat too dam shoked listening to this..
virat goto diya n hold diya by her sholder
v-what do u mean...where is she...
d(now angry n virat got reasn y manvi left house) it must b u ryt...coz of whom she left her house ryt

virat leav her n look down still in lost where must b she...

j-kya bol rhe hai kya hua where is manvi

vi told evrything to j virat behaviour towards manvi on her birthday etc etc...
j move towards v -virat tumne aisa kyu kaha use...i was crying coz she made the xact taste cake for me that mansi used to make for me on my birthday...same falour...same taste..same smell...

virat shoked listening to this(thinks)-that mean i shouted on her for no reasons...

j-y virat ...y plss get her back virat...she was too like my sister

??-she was not like ur sistr mrs vadhera...she is ur sistr..mansi...

evryone shok dont no to whom n look at the person...who said this..their eyes was shok op[en...dont no what going on...each n evry person was out of word..dont no whats going on...virat too didnt move towards the perosn...j  and evryone else...was stading like a statue...


on the other hand...
a cute bubbly girl was dancing in a bar...she need money for her sistr's study...heart broken didnt et love through out her life...but dont want her sistr should suffer coz of her. yes she was our heartless manvi ..i said heartless coz...now she is heartless...she promised herself ...she will not meet anyone now not even her sistr...coz if her sister came to no of her that she left the out...she will curse herself for her broken marriage..not even she want to come in fron of vadheras...

she left chandigrh(sory i actually forget if i have mansion some place for vadhera mnsion)...she came to goa where no one can recognise her...she decided..she will work her..what so ever the work is...n sumit the money in diya's clg..widout letting her no...

so she got job as a dancer in a br..n in morning she decided to work as a waiters in some hotel...

m-mr vadhera...its all just coz of u ...m here doing this work...coz of u ..i cant face my own sister...coz of u ..i will never ever forgive u...yes i strted loving u ...dont no y ..i was ready to b with u how stupid i was..that i was ready to live with a person who is heartless...

what's next...stay tuned...LOL

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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 1:52am | IP Logged
WOWWW I M FRST THIS TIME...YIPEEE! !!! Big smile Big smile Big smile
ABT UPDATE ITS AMEZING DEAR...LOVED IT.. Clap Clap Clap
WD EVERY UPDATE I BECOME MORE CRAZY AND GREEDY FOR NEXT UPDATE..M LOL
REALLY HAPPY TO SEE VIRAT' S CONDITIONS. ... Big smile
WT ABT NEW DHAMAKA...MEANS MANVI IS REAL MANSI...TWIST YAAR.. LOL
BUT ITS TOO SHORT AND YOU CHANGE SCENE AT AWSM POINT...TO GENIUS. ..HAHAAA Big smile Big smile
BUT FEELING BAD FOR MANVI' S CONDITIONS. ...HEARTLESS MANVI...ALL BCZ OF THAT CRUEL VADEHRA..
LOVE DIYA' S OUTBURST ON VIRAT...NOW VIRAT SOUND LIKE TABLA...HAAA...HR KOI BAJA RAHA HAI... Big smile Big smile
EGRLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...PLZZZ TRY TO UPDATE SOOON! !!!!!!!!!
********KEEP ROCKING ******* Star

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