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virman ff :Do anjaane ajnaabi part14 page 32(21 december) (Page 22)

tinni04 Groupbie

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Posted: 13 November 2013 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
ur update was awesome...liked it...sorry for the delay...busy in exams till dec.

parthnitiholics Senior Member

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Posted: 14 December 2013 at 10:16am | IP Logged
part 9
next moring it was jeevika's b'day...but evryone at home didnt wish her..coz it was mansi who wish her first on her every b'day

manvi come on dinning table j was not there but evryone was there...xcpt virat he was still sleeping

m-itni shanti kyu hai aj dinning table p...sab thk hai na
vi-ha manvi sb thk hai
manvi got confuse she didnt saw evryone silent like this
manvi got shlok's attention
s-apko pata hai aj jeevika bhabhi ka bday hai..but sab log sad hai(wisper in manvi's ear)
m-what(to evryone) aj jeevika ji ka b'day hai
evryone nodded
m-to ye to bht khushi ka mauka hai...ap log aise q baithe hai mi unhe wish krke ati hoo
vi-manvi noo...
manvi got confuse
jeevika ko har sal mansi pehle wish krti ti fir koi or...isliy hmne
m-viren to glt hai..kisi insan k jane se ...ap jeena nhi chhod dete..manti hoo mansi ap logo ki life mi bht imp. hai but kya jeevika ji nhi hai...ap log unhe wish na krke ho skta hai ye ehsas dila rhe ho ki...apko log ya to unki care ya unse pyar nhi krte ki...mansi nhi hai fir b unhe koi cheer up krne ki koshish nhi kr raha..hum chahe aisa soch b na rhe hoo..
va-i think manvi is ryt..aj jeevika bht udas hogi hme use cheer up krna chaiy
vi-haa ma..but wish to hme pehle krna chaiy ta..ab krnge to use ye b lg skta hai ki hme yad nhi ta
sb-haa u ryt viren...fir kya kre
evryone strted thinkin
m-idea..qki na hm se koi b wish na kre..or ratko sidha unhe surprise de,...whats say
evryone was happy now...n strted their work...virat too get up..evryone told him about plan..n also it was manvi;s plan..he was not happy n tell them tell him what he have to do..  strted their work...but imp thing is to take jeevika out of house
vi-manvi ye tum krogi
m-mi..nhi nhi nhi
va-haa manvi..j k sath tumhare ek attchment ho gya vo tumhari bat nhi takegi...
m-but mujhe cake banana hai ...bahar gai to kaise bnaogi...
sb-hum vo order kr denge..tum use leke jao
vi-manvi plss
m(thinks) cake to mi ghr mi hi bnaogi...chah mujhe abhi banke jana pde
m-okk...mi unhe 1 ghnte mi leke nikal jaogi...
evryone nodded n strted their work...
manvi made the cake.. n take jeevika parlour n for shopping...

evening time evrything was ready...
jeeman entr in house all lyts were off
j-manvi ye light..
m- chek kreke ati hooo

manvi too rush
then 1 2 3
all n lyt on-happy birthdayyy tooo youuu...happyy birthdayyy 22 uuu
jeevika got surprise..come forward took evryone's blessing n hugg viren...manvi was standing in corner n seeing the lovly family...
m(think) mujhe cake leke ana chaiy
manvi went in kitchen...decorate the cake n bring it outside...but she stop in middle n saw evryone was already there n even makrt cake was there...n jeevika was carrying knife to cut..
manvi look here n there...
j look at her---are manvi waha kya kr ri hoo..
manvi imitdiately kept the cake on table n hit it behind that no one notice it
j goto her-yaha kya kr ri hoo chlo cake katna hai...
virat become angry n make wred expressions...
manvi noded n went with j leaving cake behind
j about to cut the cake
when tarun came-manvi madam..apne jo ye cake bnaya hai uska kya krna hai
evryone look at cake n then manvi..manvi was looking down
j-manvi tumne cake bnaya hai
v-bhabhi..leav it..inke ghr mi..shayad ghr mi cake bante hoge
manvi look at virat (thinks) ye ek moment nhi chhodta mujhe nicha dikhane k liy..(to evryone) vo maine apke birthday k liy
j-to yaha q nhi rkha
m-mujeh lga mera cake achha nhi bana isliy bs...
j-manvi tum b na...
j remvoe the readymade cake from there n kept manvi's cake on table...
anvi look at  virat n smerk...
j-chli ab kate hai

evryone sing song for her..n she cut the cake...viren first feed j...suddenly knife drop from her hand..she look at viren n tears form in her eyes..she look at manvi.. n rush to her room crying
evryone got confused what happen
va-ye jeevika ko kya hua
v-ma ye sb is manvi ki waja se hau hai...ise kitni bar kaha hai hmari family mi dhakhal mt dia kre..but nhi ise..pta nhi kya maja ata hai..aj k din b bhabhi ko rula dia...iske is silly cake ki waja se...
m-maine to sirf
v(shout on her)-bs...tumhe bola hai hum sbse door rahne k liy..smjh nhi ata sb krke kya dikhana chahti ghr ki achhi bahu bn skti hoo..agr ye to shayad bahu bn jao..but meri wife kbhi nhi

virat to went from there...tars fall from her eyes n she too rush in her room

viren still confuse coz of j's behaviour he went to her to ask
j was sitting n crying hugging mansi;s foto
j-mansi ..aj maine bilkul waisa hi cake khaya jaisa tu banti ti..vo hi taste..vo hi flavour...mi ye nhi kah ri mi tjhe compare kr ri hoo..but manvi pta nhi mujhe tri yad q dilati hai...plss meri uljhan ko suljha de plss

viren was listening evryone n was confuse how can it b possible

he went to his study..n stiill thinking...ayone cn compare manvi with mansi but how cn j ...

intrsting update will be soon here..n give me achhaa  achha feedbackkLOL

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naina927 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 December 2013 at 10:28am | IP Logged
awww... How much i loved it sakshi...!!!!
Bahut badiya update tha... Very sweet...
Par virat toh heights hai... He is soo rude with manvi as if manvi ne uska pta nahi kaunsa nuksaan kar diya...
Par y everyone comparing manvi with mansi...kya mystery hai yaar...???
Waiting fr next...

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prathe IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 December 2013 at 10:29am | IP Logged
omg after a long time


am really feeling bad for manvi and virat is hrting her too much even though she has nt done anything hopefully he will realise her importance and mansi manvi what connection wow a mystery wowClap waiting for u r updatesEmbarrassed

some new entry for manvi  and thus a  jealous virat trackEmbarrassed only if its possible  dear Smile

Edited by prathe - 16 December 2013 at 4:06am
rasp_berry IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 December 2013 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Yes its damn intresting...kahi manvi hi toh mansi nahi...n virat...urghhh so rude...huh

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pritivirman Senior Member

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Posted: 14 December 2013 at 10:50am | IP Logged
wowww babu... bht bdia updt h... tne too mjhe bhttt khush kr d yr... Big smile its dm intrstng baby... nxt updt jldi nhi too m narj h jng... Wink
virumanu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 December 2013 at 11:14am | IP Logged
loved the update...
continue soonn pleasee
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Posted: 14 December 2013 at 2:38pm | IP Logged

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