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virman ff :Do anjaane ajnaabi part14 page 32(21 december) (Page 2)

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 5:02am | IP Logged
the story will be update today.;)

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Part 2

Viren comes with manvi…vadhera give cute smile 

v-manvi ye mere dadaji h …meri maa..bdi maa….

Manvi say Namaste n took their blessings…viren search for virat

vi-dj virat kaha h …

dj-kaha ho skta h …

virn got it he is gone…then viren give side hug to jeevika

vi-or ye meri wife meri life…jeevika…

manvi smile faded looking at too….her world crush into pieces….but she hide her emotions n smile at shake hand with j

m-hii…nice to meet u(to viren)-sir apne kbi btaya nhi apki shadi….

vi-manvi bt y h ki office mi apne personall mattrs or personal talks krna pasand nhi krta h baki sbko kisi na kisi party mi hi pta chla h …

m-ohh(its difficult for her to hide her emotions)sir mi baki ko guest ko dekh leti hoo…

v-yaa sure..manvi j ko washroom jana tat um le jaogi…

m(looking down)-yaa sure..aiye mam….

J continuesly looking at manvi who is ignoring her grace-tum thk ho…

m-ji haa bilkul….

j-sb se ai ho dekh ri hoo kahi khoi hui hoo..tum mujhe bta skti hoo…

m-nhi mam…actually itne stresss tha is case ko leke bs khtkm ho gya isliy….

j-ohh…

m-waise sir koto personal bate pasand nhi ..apse bt kr skte h kin hi…

j-ofcose..or ek mujhe mam bnd kro mi tumhari nhi hoo….pochho

m-apki shadi kb hui…

j-ohh(smile n blush)-1 sall pehle…

mnvi's saree stuk in something….

m-mam ap sidhe jake left mi washroom h ap jaiye mi ye nikal k ati hoo….

Manvi took out sare tears strted faling from her eyes….a=he just move a step back n her emotional troma when she crush in someone…n the drink fal on his dress its non other thn virat vadheraaa

Vshout_wht th hel….dekh k nhi chl skti…

m-sory vo maine dekha nhi….

v-kya sory…..meri puri shirt khrb kr di..tum jaise chhote log hote hi aise he….ya to kisi ki sympathy le skte h ya..aisi harkt krke….kisko apne traf attrct kr skte

m(become angry)-dekhiye mr..(point towards him)

v-a a a a…mujhe ungli dikhaane ki jaorrt nhi h ,….

m-ap kuch b bologi…or mi sun logi mi un ladkio mi se nhi hooo…

v-achha kin ladkio mi se ..jo logo ko aisi harkato se apni traf attrct krke(showing her saree which is stuck)

m-ap

viren come there running n j too…

vi-virat kya ho rha h yaha

v-bhai apni employe ko boliye….employe h employe bn k rhe..iski vohi aukad h ….

m-d3ekhiye

vi-manvi….

m-sir mgr….

v-ye virat n mera bhai….

Mani shok .n ook down..-to sir apka bhai h to kya kisi ko b kuch kahne ka haq mill gya…(tears fall from her eyes n she rush out of the party …

Vi-ma..(to virat)viat kya tmeej kho chukka h ek ladki se bt krne ki…

v-bhai mgr meri shirt…

vi-virat shirt or askti h kisi ki izzat nhi jise tune kya kuch nhi kah dia..in sb logo k samne…(to jeevika) j jake dekhna manvi ko…

j-ji(j move out in search of manvi

virat give disgusting look…n left too….

vi-m sory hmari waja se

clinet-its okk…

vi-ab hum log chlte h ..kafi rat ho gai h ….

All took leav…n bmove out..when j come to them

vi-jeevika manvi mili…

j-nhi viren ji….vo shayad chli gai….

vi-koi bt nhi mi kl use bt krloga

va-viren beta..mafi to hme b mangni chhiay…..hmari parivar ki waja se

vi-lekin ma

sb-bhabhi sahi kah ri h viren..tumhe uska ghr pta h …

vi-rita ko pta hoga mi pochhta hoo….(viren dial rita's no n got her add)..chle…

everyone nodded…..but

v-mi nhi jaoga…

vi-tu chlega or maafi b mangega..

v-mi nhi mangoga

j-viren ji(ndded no) achha virat maafi mt mangna mgr sath to chlo…

virat nodded yes n all went……they went to a apartment….n ask security gard where manvi lives..first he said he cant tell its too late at nyt..but viren tell him he is her boss n want to talk about work..even his family is here…security gard told him the no n they went…

here manvi was sobbing …

m-meri kya glti ti bhagwani ..q ap hmesha mere sath aisa krte hoo..qq….pehle mere mumy papa ko cheen lia or ab….mera puar b q…meri kya glti ti(manvi totally forget about what virat said)

suddenly her door bell ring..manvi got scared its 1 at nyt…who must b there……

she pick up a stell vase n her hand n move towars door…viren again rang the bell…

v-bhai shayad vo so gai chli yaha se…

vi-nhi hm milke hi jaenge

viren again rang the bell.manvi got too much scared …

when suddenly virat come in frnt of viren n rang thrice the bell..manvi open the door quickly n hit his hand ….

v-aaa(holding hi head)…

manvi eyes was widen motuh in 0 shape even the vadhera….manvi leav the vase n it fall on virat's leg…v-aaa..(virat hold his feet n jump here n there)

v-tumhara dimag khrb h ..koi aise welcome krta h kisi ko…

manvi still in shok what she did….

Vadhera controleing there laughtr….

m-tum tum yaha kya kr re hooo…..

v-tumse mar khane aya ta(angr tone) n look at viren n others thn manvi

vi-manv i

m-sir ap…sb yaha…..

vi-vo…

m-andr aiye naa……

here shlok laugh holding his stomach tevryone ws holding their laughtt they bust out laughing…virat still holding his head n toe..n looking angrily to manvi….

Everyone entr her mouse….

 

That's it guyzz….

Precap-

Va- tumahre ghr mi kaun kaun h …

m-m orphn…

everyone shoked even viren too coz he also dnt no…

Va-bauji maine socha h manvi hi ek aisi ladki h jo virat ko sahi line p laa skti h q na hum uski shadi krade manvi se

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:00am | IP Logged
awesome update
virat is so rude
interesting precap
plz cont soon
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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:09am | IP Logged
yes yes yes plz unki shaadi karod
this new story of urs is so damn interesting - I so want them to get married nw
I love virman's first meeting n then wen she hits him with the vase lolz
plz continue soon cnt wait to read next part Wink
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jia123sagar

awesome update
virat is so rude
interesting precap
plz cont soon


try to update today
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Huma0301

yes yes yes plz unki shaadi karod
this new story of urs is so damn interesting - I so want them to get married nw
I love virman's first meeting n then wen she hits him with the vase lolz
plz continue soon cnt wait to read next part Wink

hahah ..WinkWinkWink
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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 1:20am | IP Logged
This is also a awesome story sakshi...now a days i m on the mission to read sakshis stories...lolsss...pls cont soon n pm me
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nice

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