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virman ff :Do anjaane ajnaabi part14 page 32(21 december) (Page 18)

shaalivirman Senior Member
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Posted: 05 October 2013 at 6:29am | IP Logged
hawww...awsome update...Clap
poor manvi...Cry
hpe virat changes sooonn...Ouch
luved the update...Heart
\continu soonnn...and thnx fr the pmBig smile

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Posted: 05 October 2013 at 6:39am | IP Logged
its nice ..update soon...
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nice update cont soo and thanx for pm
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Posted: 06 October 2013 at 3:54am | IP Logged
feeling bad fr manvi hopefully all will rite soon and also virat realizes his mistake..
loved the update do continue soon dear...Smile  
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Posted: 06 October 2013 at 11:49am | IP Logged
awsm stry...bt virat is so rude !!!!!!! Want virat jealous ...manvi is so sweetheart @@@@@@@ again maya also in the stry...hate her @@@@@@ keep rocking ***
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Posted: 06 October 2013 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
awesome update 
parthnitiholics Senior Member
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Posted: 13 October 2013 at 12:38am | IP Logged
part 8
i love the feedbacks...i hope feedbacks will b like this only...LOLLOL

virat in his room thinking about mansi n hugging her foto...

v-mansi dekho kya ho raha..vo low cls ladki manvi...(after a gap) mujhe to uska naam b lena psnd nhi hai...vo tumhri jaga lena chahti hai meri life mi ..plss help mansi..plss help...mi tumhari jaga kisi ko nhi dena chahta...

suddenly n image of mansi come in front of him-virat...

virat got shoked look at mansi about to hug her but she stop him-jb tum Tanya jaisi ladki ko ek chance de skte hoo to manvi ko q nhi voto tumhari patni hai na...

v-nhi mansi..mi use apni patni nhi manta...meri life mi meri wife ki jaga sirf or sirf tum le skti hoo or koi nhi...

mansi-to maya kaun hai..jiske sath tum din rat rahte hooo..jb nhi socha..ki mansi ko kaisa lagega...

virat look down she is ryt..he is passing time with maya...n cheating mansi...evrymoment...

v-mi bs ..vo(tears forming in his eyes)

m-virat..kuch mt bolo...i noo..u r craving for love...but virat...maya jaisi ladki tumhe kabhi love nhi dekhti...u hv to understand...manvi is the one...

virat cut her in between-no ...manvi mera pyar kbhi nhi ho skti...vo low cls...

m-virat yad hai sb b mujhe ye h kahti ti low cls girl..but fir b tumne mujhs epyar kia na...to manvi ki kya glti hai tum use b to ek chance de skte ho na...

virat look at her-tum ye chahti hoo tumhe dhoka deke mi us manvi k sath...

m-mi ye kah ri hoo..use smjho..or fir apne dil se pochho...kya vo thk hai tumhe liy ya nhi...tumhe use ek chnce dena hoga virat...

v-kya mi tumhe hug kr skta hoo plss..m crazing for it(cutely tears flowing from his eys)

m-go n hug manvi..tumhe mera hug mil jaega...

v-mgr

suddenly image vanished...virat think about what mansi said...sudennly maya comes in his room n hug her from behind virat come out of his trance...v-leave..(strn)

maya shoked n confuse she left him virat turn-leav my room ryt nw...

m-virat what happen

v-i said leav(shouted on him)

maya in angr left virat's place...j was lisning...evrything..n smile widely...n went to manvi

m-ye mujhe kya ho jata hai bhgwan..mi yaha sbki traf attrct q hone lgti hoo..q aisa lagta hai...ki ..mi vo krn chaiy o ye sb mujhe kahte hai..shadi k liy mi mana kr skti ti...sirf apni behn k liy maine shadi kr li..usne b kaha ta..uska year khtm hone wala hai...to maine in logo ki bat q mani..q mera dil bola..manvi jot u kr ri hai thk kr ri hai...or virat..use dekhke...mujhe q man krta hai...ki mujhe use thk krna chaiy...jb vo mujhe kitna bhala bura kahta hai..bhgwan q kr re hoo mere sath aisa..

j was listning...evrything n smile-coz u r fallig for everyone in this house

manvi turn n look at j-plss jeevika ap ...jaye yaha se m not in a mood to talk to anyone...

again trn her back was faing her

j-manvi meri bat to suno..

m-plss di jao yaha se...

j got shoked -what did u say...

manvi got angry-i said just go...

j-nhi just go se pehle..u called me di ryt...

manvi thought for a while-haa shayad muh se nikal gya...

j-di mujhe mansi bulati ti...

manvi felt guilty..-m sory mera irada apko hurt krne ka nhi ta...

j-koi bat nhi...tumhe pta hai mujhe tumhe sb btane ka man krta hai..jo aj tk is ghr ko nhi btaya..i think tumhe pta hona chaiy...

m-boliye...m always here to listen to u(feeling her heart is saying this to her)

va-j beta...jldi ana viren agya hai...

j-ai maa...manvi mi thodi der mi aungi...

manvi nodded j went-manvi j to di kaha but q...manvi is ghr k sath rah k tu itne pagl ho jae...u hv to..do u work n leav this house...

manvi was going went some drag her towards a room n lok the room she was scared t=firt then saw virat ..n was shoked angry n confused

m-what the hell s this..hato jane do..

virat blok her way..n look at her keenly...manvi gup n now scared of his grace

v-tum q ai ho yaha...kya chaiy tumhe(softly)

m-mi yaha nhi ai..ap lae hai mujhe...

v-mera mtlb..meri life mi q ai hoo...

m-apni maa se pochhiye q lai hai mujhe...apki bjaan zindagi mi..maine shadi k liy haa ki but ap na kr skte the...

v-sam bat mi b bol skta hoo...or tumme aisa kya hai..jo mansi ne kaha*he stop himself..what he is going to say*

m(confusd)-mansi...

v-u don't have to care for that ki maine kya kaha...

virt look at her eyes

m-mujhe jana hai plsss..mera rasta chhodiye...(She is pleading...she about to push him..but virat hold her hand which are on his chest to push him)

v-jana hai

manvi cutely nodded yes...virat lost in her innocence..words of mansi rushing in his mind*manvi ko ek chance to deke dekho)

virat smile remove her strain from her face tuck it behind her ears..manvi close her eyes..virat again lost in her innocence...come out of his trance..virat look her so close to him..he left her with a jerk-get out...

manvi  was shoked n confused-kyaa???

v-shout on her-i said get out...

manvi rush of his room...virat close his door behind her with a bang...sit on bed..manvi to her room.

v-mansi..tum q kr ri hoo ye sb...q mujhe us manvi ki traf attrct kr ri hooo...y u hurting me

manvi in her room-muje virat ko pehle his ek thapad mar k ajana chaiy ta fir mi q ruki rahi..aisa q laga ye to hona hi ta...mujhe or virat ko ek sath hona hi ta..bhagwanji..ap kaunsi ghnti baja re hoo

 important note

guyzz my maine terms are starting i'll not update till november..may b aftr diwali i will update..hope u undrstnd...n dont forget to give long feedbacks about the update...n wishes for my xamz..WinkSmile

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