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virman ff :Do anjaane ajnaabi part14 page 32(21 december) (Page 15)

parthnitiholics Senior Member

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prathe

wow super..feeling bad fr manvi ...hopefully virat doesnt hurt her much...excited hw the stry moves continue soon dear...Smile

stay tuned

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 10:32am | IP Logged
part 7
manvi in her room-when virat cn behave like this when m being normal in front of y sould i plan to do anything..let it b..n he will be back(bit her lower bit n smerk)
j-u said ryt manvi...i think we should not plan against him anything...u do what ever u hv being doing since long okk..

manvi nodded j smile n left the plan

m-so mr.vadhera...get face tortur by me..
manvi smile n went outside his room which is close...she singal shlok to come ther...
m-oe shlok lets play something...m getting really bored yr...
m-okk manvi didi..i mean bhabhii...chlo lets play chess

virat slightly open his door n look at the view in front of him
m-aye haye..what shlok...u hv an age of playing cricket ,backet ball...not these buddhe wala play.chess..
s-kyaa bhabhii(sad)
m-lets go today i will teach u how to njoy life...comeon my chhotu devar...
manvi look at virat seeing her from corner of her eyes...hold shlok hand n went play cricket

virat imidiatly go to his balcony to look whats going on...
he saw manvi playing with full of njoyment ,enthusiasm...a wide smile on her face...laughing ..n teaching shlok how to play cricket...

m-look shlok ..hold ur bat like this...

manvi teaching him n forget she was showing virat but lost in play.Tongue

m-are will i teach u yr...u r chhota
manvi was thinking when shlok look up n saw virat looking at them n smiling...

s-viraatt bhaia(shout from garden)

virat come out of his trance even manvi realise she has to show virat not xctly hv to play..bit her tongue n look at virat...
v-haaa...(shout from his room bacony)
s-plsss teach me to play cricket..i wanna show manvi bhabhii...that m not chhota dj ..m like other guyzz of my age(shouting from garden)
v-shlok mi nahi...
shlok cut him
s-pls bhaia pls pls plss(he sit on his knees n join hand)
v-achha achha ruk...m cuming...
he look at manvi smiling at his n shlok's brotherly talks...he look at her..give her angry look again...n went to garden..manvi shok her head

manvi looking at virat showing shlok how to hold to hit ball...
evryone in house too come out n surprise to see virat...changing..he never used to play or sing or...even laugh when mansi died

v-chl i'll throw a ball ...u do bating okk(to shlok)
s-haa bhaia...manvi bhabhii(manvi come out of her trance)
s-ab dekhna...m not chhota --
man vi got confuse n shlok signal dj is standing at back thats y he didnt say dj aftr chhota...Wink
manvi smile shok her head...

virat throw ball..manvi shloku hit sixr...
v-wah...kya bat hai..well done...
s-thnk you manvi bhbahi...lets play..bhaia u also play with us na...
virat look at manvi n then shlok-nhi shlok tu ho khel
vi-are virat chl na isi bhanae hmara b sunday ban jaega
v -bhai mgr...
vi-chl na...
viren drag virat...n girls team n boys team are made...

virat was batting n j was balling...
v-bhabhi..ready for a sixr.
j-no devar ji...u get ready to out...LOL
vlets c

virat hit j's ball n was ball was going high n high...virat about to take run..but saw manvi was laughing n talking to va n not looking at ball going to hit her...virat left the towards her..
manvi didnt listen she was busy in her talks...
virat run more fast n catch the ball..manvi look at ball at the same time virat hold the ball but missbalance himself was inches away from manvi n fall on her
viramn rok n roll on ground...they stop at a place..virat on top of her n manvi was below him...virat looking at her...her eyes was tightly closed..cllunching his shirt in her fist was scared...virat smile at her...a cute smile on his face...manvi open her eyes n saw virat too close to her..even on top of her both had n eye lock     ...virat remove hair strains from her face n tuck behind her tears manvi close her eyes...with his touch...


virman come in his senses...n get up...manvi was more embarised in front of familyEmbarrassed...n virat become again angry on can she rule himAngry
virat outburst on him
v-tum smjhti kya ho apne apkoAngry

manvi was confused with his sudden change of behaviour-maine kya
v-just shut up...jb tumhe khelna nhi h bate hi krni h to ghr k andr baitho na...
m-look maine kisi ko nhi bulaya sb apne ap hi ae... manvi chaudhry...
manvi cut him
m-mrs.manvi virat singh vadhera...

virat was silent again dnt no what to say...(thinks) she called herself MRS.MANVI VIRAT SINGN VADHERA...virat become more angry

v-ye naam aj lelia...or bht shok hai na mere naam apne sath jodne ka, mi bta du..udu mt jameen mi paho..tum jaise logo k liy ye hi achha h..mera naam sirf ek hi inssan k sath jud hai...mansi..or koi nhi smjhi tum(shout on her n went from there n maya glare at her n went behind him)

manvi sit on bench..tears about to come out from her eyes but she stopped them...n too rush  to her room ...

vi-jis bat ka dar ta mujhe vo hi hora h maa...virat manvi ko apni wife shayad hi kbhi accpt krega...

what next...will virat fall in love with him...will her always hate her...
cn virat n manvi ever b ready to move on in their realtionship
stay tunedWinkWink

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jayprabu Senior Member

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Nice update. Thanks for the pm.

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parthnitiholics Senior Member

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jayprabu

Nice update. Thanks for the pm.


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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 10:46am | IP Logged
nice update
loved the virat's care for manvi.

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rasp_berry IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Awesome updt
cont soon
Kicha111 Senior Member

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Nice update
Manvi correct him by saying mrs.manvi virat singh vadhera
Wht s maya doing der
 He s shouting at hr 2 mask hs weakness
do cont soon
nd Thnxxx 4 d pm

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