virman ff :Do anjaane ajnaabi part14 page 32(21 december)

Gyz a thought stuck in my mind to I prefer writing that n share it with u guyz..hope u guyzz like my this post as well as u like my other ffs

Other work

Milna hi tha https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3512495

Arrnge marriage  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3460944

Anjani ls https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3638479

Character sketch

A cute and bubbly girl who is orphn first she styed in orphanage but after her study when she complted her graduation..sh left the orphanage to stand on her feet..she love everyone n think about everyone whether poor or rich..that is non other thn our manvi..;)'manvi gave interview in vadhera company and was working there for about 1 month'she work with famous lawyer viren vadhera'who is handsome ,soft spoken and kind hearted person'

Manvi don't know anything about viren family who is there n who is not she is only concerned about her work and about her feelings..yes she is feeling for viren (let me write future then hit me plss..lol)..she don't care about how he live n woith whom ..but the truth is viren is married..;)..he had not discusses anything with her coz he no her from 1 month only n don't ike to discus anything about his personal life..he crack joked with her'n they become good frnds too..but from viren side she is only frnd..but manvi taking his side to opposite..;)

On the othr hand a arrogant person..who don't like to stay to talk to poor people..who don't even stnd with them..he only care about the latest in the world whether it is fon,or lapop or a gf..yes she chnge his gfs mothly or weekly (plss don't hit mee)..yes he only have the gfs who is sexiest from all'n will b on the top..his current gf is Maya..who live with his bhai ,bhabhi jeevika,,mom,dj..sb.kc,ic,shloku

Part 1

Viren's clint had thrown a party as he won the casen invited viren's family in the part'and all viren collegues including manvi as his secretry

Manvi wore black net saree hair curled applied little markup was looking gorgeous from all..as viren told them ladies will wear balck sarees and gents will wear black suit with a bow as it is a dress code..viren told his family to b in party n he will come directy from his office

Here manvi and viren was attending the guest  when viren's family arrive..n even maya too as she is with virt everyone no

Virn went to them manvi turn n saw viren hugging a lay she thought may b his frnd she again turn to attmd the guest'viren introduce his collegues n clients to his family

j-viren ji..pko vo new scretry kaha h ..

v-haa vo yahi ti mi dekh k lat ho

viren about to go when dj stop him a

dj-viren tum rehndo virat le aega'.

v-mein

dj-haa tum q pairo mi mendi  lagai h

v-mgr

viren signal him to not to argye n go..virt about to go with maya..

v-kya ap mujhe btaenge ki vo dikhti kaisi h

vi-usne black pehna h

virat signal to look back viren saw everyone had wore black..

vi-tu rehnde mi hi leke ata hoo

viren left

v-kya hum ab jake njoy kr skti hoo

dj nodded virat held maya with her waist n left

dj-kya hoga ladke ka

va-bauji rehnde dijijye a jb koi ladki aegi isliy life mi jo isse khel wala nhi sacha pyar degi'virat badl jaega

dj-hope so..pta lga vo ladki hme hi galia deri h ..lo viren agya

 

will virat and viren b fall in love with diffent characters ?

will manvi b able to hide her feelings for viren

what next stay tuned ..;)

charatr sketch   page 1

part 2   page 2

part 3   page 3

part 4   page 6

part 5    page 9

part 6 page 12

part 7 page 15

part 8 n note on page 18

part 9 page 22

part 10 page 24

PART 11

part 12

part 13

part 14

Edited by sakshivirmanian - 9 years ago

omg this is an awesome concept

very very interesting - wud love to read more

plz continue it 😉

awesome update

Its awesm do pm me whn u cont. 

AWESOME CONCEPT.
PLZ CONTINUE SOON AND PLZ PM ME.

nice...

the story will be update today.;)

Part 2

Viren comes with manvi…vadhera give cute smile 

v-manvi ye mere dadaji h …meri maa..bdi maa….

Manvi say Namaste n took their blessings…viren search for virat

vi-dj virat kaha h …

dj-kaha ho skta h …

virn got it he is gone…then viren give side hug to jeevika

vi-or ye meri wife meri life…jeevika…

manvi smile faded looking at too….her world crush into pieces….but she hide her emotions n smile at shake hand with j

m-hii…nice to meet u(to viren)-sir apne kbi btaya nhi apki shadi….

vi-manvi bt y h ki office mi apne personall mattrs or personal talks krna pasand nhi krta h baki sbko kisi na kisi party mi hi pta chla h …

m-ohh(its difficult for her to hide her emotions)sir mi baki ko guest ko dekh leti hoo…

v-yaa sure..manvi j ko washroom jana tat um le jaogi…

m(looking down)-yaa sure..aiye mam….

J continuesly looking at manvi who is ignoring her grace-tum thk ho…

m-ji haa bilkul….

j-sb se ai ho dekh ri hoo kahi khoi hui hoo..tum mujhe bta skti hoo…

m-nhi mam…actually itne stresss tha is case ko leke bs khtkm ho gya isliy….

j-ohh…

m-waise sir koto personal bate pasand nhi ..apse bt kr skte h kin hi…

j-ofcose..or ek mujhe mam bnd kro mi tumhari nhi hoo….pochho

m-apki shadi kb hui…

j-ohh(smile n blush)-1 sall pehle…

mnvi's saree stuk in something….

m-mam ap sidhe jake left mi washroom h ap jaiye mi ye nikal k ati hoo….

Manvi took out sare tears strted faling from her eyes….a=he just move a step back n her emotional troma when she crush in someone…n the drink fal on his dress its non other thn virat vadheraaa

Vshout_wht th hel….dekh k nhi chl skti…

m-sory vo maine dekha nhi….

v-kya sory…..meri puri shirt khrb kr di..tum jaise chhote log hote hi aise he….ya to kisi ki sympathy le skte h ya..aisi harkt krke….kisko apne traf attrct kr skte

m(become angry)-dekhiye mr..(point towards him)

v-a a a a…mujhe ungli dikhaane ki jaorrt nhi h ,….

m-ap kuch b bologi…or mi sun logi mi un ladkio mi se nhi hooo…

v-achha kin ladkio mi se ..jo logo ko aisi harkato se apni traf attrct krke(showing her saree which is stuck)

m-ap

viren come there running n j too…

vi-virat kya ho rha h yaha

v-bhai apni employe ko boliye….employe h employe bn k rhe..iski vohi aukad h ….

m-d3ekhiye

vi-manvi….

m-sir mgr….

v-ye virat n mera bhai….

Mani shok .n ook down..-to sir apka bhai h to kya kisi ko b kuch kahne ka haq mill gya…(tears fall from her eyes n she rush out of the party …

Vi-ma..(to virat)viat kya tmeej kho chukka h ek ladki se bt krne ki…

v-bhai mgr meri shirt…

vi-virat shirt or askti h kisi ki izzat nhi jise tune kya kuch nhi kah dia..in sb logo k samne…(to jeevika) j jake dekhna manvi ko…

j-ji(j move out in search of manvi

virat give disgusting look…n left too….

vi-m sory hmari waja se

clinet-its okk…

vi-ab hum log chlte h ..kafi rat ho gai h ….

All took leav…n bmove out..when j come to them

vi-jeevika manvi mili…

j-nhi viren ji….vo shayad chli gai….

vi-koi bt nhi mi kl use bt krloga

va-viren beta..mafi to hme b mangni chhiay…..hmari parivar ki waja se

vi-lekin ma

sb-bhabhi sahi kah ri h viren..tumhe uska ghr pta h …

vi-rita ko pta hoga mi pochhta hoo….(viren dial rita's no n got her add)..chle…

everyone nodded…..but

v-mi nhi jaoga…

vi-tu chlega or maafi b mangega..

v-mi nhi mangoga

j-viren ji(ndded no) achha virat maafi mt mangna mgr sath to chlo…

virat nodded yes n all went……they went to a apartment….n ask security gard where manvi lives..first he said he cant tell its too late at nyt..but viren tell him he is her boss n want to talk about work..even his family is here…security gard told him the no n they went…

here manvi was sobbing …

m-meri kya glti ti bhagwani ..q ap hmesha mere sath aisa krte hoo..qq….pehle mere mumy papa ko cheen lia or ab….mera puar b q…meri kya glti ti(manvi totally forget about what virat said)

suddenly her door bell ring..manvi got scared its 1 at nyt…who must b there……

she pick up a stell vase n her hand n move towars door…viren again rang the bell…

v-bhai shayad vo so gai chli yaha se…

vi-nhi hm milke hi jaenge

viren again rang the bell.manvi got too much scared …

when suddenly virat come in frnt of viren n rang thrice the bell..manvi open the door quickly n hit his hand ….

v-aaa(holding hi head)…

manvi eyes was widen motuh in 0 shape even the vadhera….manvi leav the vase n it fall on virat's leg…v-aaa..(virat hold his feet n jump here n there)

v-tumhara dimag khrb h ..koi aise welcome krta h kisi ko…

manvi still in shok what she did….

Vadhera controleing there laughtr….

m-tum tum yaha kya kr re hooo…..

v-tumse mar khane aya ta(angr tone) n look at viren n others thn manvi

vi-manv i

m-sir ap…sb yaha…..

vi-vo…

m-andr aiye naa……

here shlok laugh holding his stomach tevryone ws holding their laughtt they bust out laughing…virat still holding his head n toe..n looking angrily to manvi….

Everyone entr her mouse….

 

That's it guyzz….

Precap-

Va- tumahre ghr mi kaun kaun h …

m-m orphn…

everyone shoked even viren too coz he also dnt no…

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Va-bauji maine socha h manvi hi ek aisi ladki h jo virat ko sahi line p laa skti h q na hum uski shadi krade manvi se

awesome update

yes yes yes plz unki shaadi karod

this new story of urs is so damn interesting - I so want them to get married nw

I love virman's first meeting n then wen she hits him with the vase lolz

plz continue soon cnt wait to read next part 😉