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FF: The Healing Touch #2: Ch 10 Pg 92 (Page 63)

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 6:51am | IP Logged
okay... Will wait patiently...

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Tomorrow morning it is.  Will be waiting.

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Waiting ... 

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nidsubh007

Update will be at 8pmUSA time. 6:30 am wed IST.

I will try to update earlier, but I have a very busy morning.

Thank you for all the comments to the teaser!!

Big smile Dancing 
I have holiday tomorrow. But will have to get up early morning thenErmmDay Dreaming

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Awesome part...

Do continue soon !!!!

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Yipeee...yipeee! 

I knew it...mujhe always bharosa hai Nidhi...it was beautiful! 

Nidhi this was fantastic...I love the way you  write Khushi, she is strong, supportive, perceptive and understanding ...

I loved her clarity and her understanding off the situation I loved how she explains to him that his devastation is at loss of his sister not his love...and the difference between what he perceives to be his fault and how certain things happens in which we play no role in. I loved how she uses his parents example to make him understand what love is...

Where as she agrees that what happened with his sister was sad and something no one should have to go,through but that does not mean it was his fault, if not with each other La and Shyam would have been with someone else...I love how she tells him by punishing himself will things go back who they were? Will it bring Di's husband back? Rather than dwelling on the past that is casting a shadow on the present he needs to embrace the people who care about him like Vandana...

I love how she believes in love and needs that and he does not ...they are just different neither right nor wrong. 
And neither will settle for anything different...or compromise on what they think they want...

I love your Arnav...I always did but this man,his anguish and pain, the dilemma and the guilt he lives him...punishing himself, I loved how he calls Di and speaks to her, that he did and the conversation with her giving closure to so many things gnawing in his heart...and his self imposed restrictions on the simple pleasures of life...hope now he is able to find his way home! 
 to see the woman he loves...(well I think he does) dressed the way she is...looking the way she does...and he sees green, literally and not just the colour...but also is angry, an anger which he is not able to understand or justify ...

I liked how he tries to tell himself that it's for the best and pacify himself ...he knows that since he can not offer her more, se should be free to find that with another man...but easier said than done, I loved his anguish...how could she have so easily forgotten everything that transpired between them, she seemed fine in contrast to his aching heart...

I loved that he is jealous, jealous of any man even near her...thankfully Vandana is there for him, but Arnav unable to fight those feelings anymore, or even comprehend them...I loved how he kept a track of the time and also remembering all the moments spent with her, images of which kept flashing in front of him, her laughter..like he was consumed by her...feelings he did even realise he was capable of feeling...I loved his banging doors and his ill temper, proving how deeply involved he is! 
I loved his resolve of not even going to ask her but in vain...

I just loved how at the sight of Alok's arm around his shoulders he breaking all barriers of self control and immediately warns him to remove his hand, loved the two of them at it with a perplexed Khushi, wondering, and then putting a stop the madness, finally getting Alok to leave, who seemed reluctant to do so witnessing Arnav's temper and anger scared for his Khushi...

I loved, just loved the last part, him pulling her to his room, his questing her as though he has full haq...(of course he thinks he has) and then loved how at the moment all that mattered to him and them was this feeling that was between them the desire and the need which ran deeper than just the physical need to be, she wanting to be angry but his look and his touch, his closeness to her and the tone of his voice when he calls her name and she she needs him as much...his touch and him in entirety..

I loved how her don't do this, and I think she meant it for not just his touch but for what it does to her emotionally, turns to do this again...I loved his I have to...realising he really had to, his heart losing to his head...
I loved the passion and intensity in their kiss...it touched the heart and soul...and Nidhi, I loved how she finally relieving him of his anxiousness and anger...so nonchalantly tells him who he was!

I love the way your wrote so many layers of emotions and expressed each one so clearly and crisply, with the correct words, or do words sound correct when you use them? but you leave me in awe, always!


Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 July 2013 at 3:06am

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I am so happy the way khushi's words started the healing process. 
Due to his past terrors, he his not giving love a chance again...not even khushiOuch.

I am glad he did talked to his sister, which might have made her feel betterSmile
I liked seeing the green eyed monster in arnavWink

No matter how hard they try, they just can't fght back their desires & also what they feel for each other.
And arnav, thoda toh sochna tha. How can khushi jump from one man to another? -_-

Arnav, my buoy, jealousy speaks hell lot then you will ever say.

Waiting for nextBig smile


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