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FF: The Healing Touch #2: Ch 10 Pg 92 (Page 52)

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Before I start complaining I just need to tell you that I am blown away by your writing. The way you string together words to create emotions and pictures is beautiful. We become so attached to these intangible people and forget that they are fictional. The pace is also perfect. It doesn't drag at all. You've revealed Arnav's past and shared Khushi's parents at the point where Arnav and Khushi have a strong bond. 

This is a big deal for Arnav because he could have been vague about why he didn't believe in love but he shared his pain. He shared his Di's pain and that above all shows that Arnav trusts Khushi. He might not quite realize that yet, though. 

Now to the complain part. Arnav has a god complex. And it's not the I-am-perfect, I-am-superman, I-have-the-Midas-touch kind of complex. It's the wahhCry-my-life-sucks-everything-is-my-fault kind of complex. Someone needs to tell him that he damn well believes in love. Love is not restricted to a man and woman. There is love between siblings, parents, friends, children. He only sees the negative sides of love. He sees his father's broken heart but why can't he remember how happy his parents were?

Khushi will teach him. Your Khushi is strong and she won't give up on Arnav. And she'll have Vandana as an ally Wink.

A very emotional chapter. Brilliant!

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
This is such a good story and I love the way you have slowly detailed out the characters.

Arnav is really damaged and distrusts love because he associates it with pain and destruction.  Khushi is such a loving, giving and open person who believes in her new found love and now her hopes dreams have just crashed based on Arnav's revelations.

Will she be able to change him?

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
Wow that was a amazing and fantastic update, simply wonderful.

The update was written exceptionally well, 

Awww love the fact that Khushi admitted to Arnav that she did not like coffee, the reward she received for telling the truth was beautiful. 

The ASR and VSR conversation was really nice, it's a shame Arnav did not admit Khushi was more than a friend, also it was quite sad to read that Arnav blames himself for his Di's husband dying. 

Awww loved the beach part, Khushi and Arnav star gazing was so beautiful and Khushi telling Arnav about her parents becoming stars was really heart warming.

Arnav finally opening up to Khushi about his past and how he does not believe in love, such a emotional and heart breaking part. 

Can't wait to read khushi's reaction, hopefully she will be very understanding and offering her caring and affectionate words. 

Loved the update, a brilliant read.

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the Email xx 


Edited by P4rveen12 - 04 July 2013 at 3:01pm

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
Loved this chapter a lot.

VSR and ASR share a very wonderful relationship and VSR is already having intuitive feelings about something brewing between the two of them.

Arnav is not willing to fully accept the extent of his feelings for Khushi and now we know the reason why. Not only must he be having trust issues but probably a lowered esteem too...

That was a nice take on the whole MU thing...LA and Shyam...!

Khushi sharing her innermost thoughts with Arnav and introducing her parents to him was very poignant.

Arnav and Khushi gazing at stars together was so romantic...loved it..

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 1:59am | IP Logged
lovely part
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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 2:32am | IP Logged
wow beautiful update. Arnav was betrayed. Nd he opnd up wid khushi. Love vandana arnav bond. Waitng 4 nxt

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
 Waiting...

Edited by barauni - 06 July 2013 at 6:32am

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Unresed pg 35Smile

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