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FF: The Healing Touch #2: Ch 10 Pg 92 (Page 48)

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Arnav had a very painful past
fabulous update

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
very nice update!

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
you write as if a waterfall of words is flowing, very clear, uninterrupted and really beautiful.

i dnt knw wht else to say.

beautiful chapter.

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 8:42am | IP Logged
amazing chapter
so arnav suffered betrayal
he canceled the date and khushi felt sad
loved the way she introduced him to her parents
and she wanted to tell payal about arnav
arnav told her everything
waiting for next update
thanks for pm
update soon

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 9:01am | IP Logged
unres'd on page 37----> here

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Wonderful update Nidhi...Loved everything about the update...  loved when khushi runs out of shower to answer her phone...and arnav tells her she shouldn't tell a man who has the hits for her, that she was in the shower LOL .. that was so cute 
Loved when vandana complains about his brother and arnav the workaholic suggests to talk to Dr workaholic LOL...
we get to know finally the reason why Arnav is the way he is...he thinks what he felt with La was love...coz she blended into his life and lifestyle perfectly...and having her in his life made his Di happy...but clearly there was something missing in that relationship for it to have turned out the way it did... Once he sees the difference that things that are mean to happen are never anyone's fault coz destiny cannot be controlled or changed only how you deal with them can be ...i think he will realize it time then only he can make peace in his heart...glad he has opened up to her about his life and the reason behind his pain and grief...his betrayal and guilt are much visible...loved how he silently listened to her life story... mesmerized by her inner beauty as much as her physical beauty and how he thanks her for sharing her story with him.. glad he realizes the value of her sharing it with him...
that was a beautiful update Nidhi..and loved it...
eagerly waiting to read more... plz continue soon..



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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged

Thank you so much for the long chapter, I loved it!  Finally we got to know Arnav's mystery.  Totally not what I expected, one thing I have learned from reading your stories is to expect the unexpected….which in turn makes you a brilliant writer to keep your reader captivated and capture them into your story.  The update was so well written from the dialogue to the emotions.

 

The bonding of the Vandana and Arnav was so nice.  He can sense something is wrong with his friend/bhabi and wants to help.  The part when she says mr. workaholic and dr. workaholic was hilarious.  I loved how she has picked up that there is something between him and Khushi.  But off course Arnav decides not to let her in on his secret.  Hope he takes her advice and moves on because we all want that for him.

 

The Arnav and Khushi scene was so touching, from her introducing him to her parents (amazing how you incorporated that into this story) and him revealing his past.  Him not believing in love anymore is going to be roadblock because it seems she has fallen for him really bad.  Hoping she can "heal" him to love again……"The Healing Touch"  The title is perfect!!!

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 9:29am | IP Logged
nice update...
feeling bad for arnav     lavnaya cheat him...
continue soon
thanks for link

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