First of all sorry for the delay in commenting... works just choking me!! 😊
This was a lovely update... It had all emotions... attraction, jealousy, anger, pain...
It was but natural for Khushi to feel jealous about Vandana talking so casually to Arnav... a man who is so stern and barely talks to anyone, shared such a carefree relationship with someone... and that someone being his wife Vandana...(atleast that's what Khushi thought)...
The whole scenario of Vandana - Khushi conversation was very beautifully written... Khushi being a perfect host yet disappointed in Arnav... their cancellation of dinner plans... and also of her feeling of being cheated by him... that kiss last night meant much more to her that she admitted...
And here Arnav was no less disappointed... he is terribly attracted to Khushi and can't wait for their dinner... He completely forgets about Vandana and is so upset to not find Khushi around... He immediately judges her that for her, he meant nothing and she just bailed out of their dinner plan without giving him any notice...
Awww... when Khushi returns back... you described her emotions so beautifully... wanting to talk to her parents... feeling miserable looking at Arnav laugh with Vandana... and the way she crawls into her bed holding a picture of her parents...
And then the Arnav - Khushi encounter... was just brilliant... I love your style of writing such scenes... by the end of it, they make me want more always... like I am craving for the next update like crazy... 😊
Edited by mints23 - 10 years ago
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