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OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#2 (Page 9)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:14am | IP Logged
haww!!! this is ramanchi!!!!

how can you leave so many questions unanswered...

you sounded like the famous hindi writer Jaishankar prasad!!! GOD!!! how I hated that man...first he would leave the story hanging and then we were left hanging in the exams making assumptions...HMPH!!!I know we don't have to answer an exam still..

But please you have got to help me!!! I am guessing you atleast answer whether my guesses are right

first tell me who is aryan? lav's son or khushi's son?

the twins are adopted I guess!!!

please answer these


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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Nice update.lovely

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Awesome OS..

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 4:30am | IP Logged
Hi Semanti,
 
Khatam ho gaya?? The WAUFMAIO Universe brought me into your writing, and the one shots beautifully showcased the happily ever after and you have thoroughly spoilt your readers Semanti, we all want this Arnavji and the more I read the more I demand for my future hubby to be like this, infact a certified test should be created that all men must pass the Capt. Raizada test before being considered suitable for marriage! (I'm taking it a little overboard aren't I?!)
 
But seriously I lived this universe you created and I can't wait to read what you have in store next
 
Manreet :)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 4:31am | IP Logged
i loved the last chapter!!! so u found a pair for garima as well...i loved khushi and lavas interogattion!!! hilarious!!! im going to miss this story so much!!! i wish u didnt have to end it so soon!!!!!Cry

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 4:46am | IP Logged
AN AMAZING PARALLEL UNIVERSE CREATED BY AN AMAZING WRITER.

Semanti you created a wonderful story with so lively characters. 

loved them all.

God bless you and may you wite more.

Cheers
Anukriti

ps-  Though your '  CHARMED TALE'  is my favourite One shot on this forum

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:26am | IP Logged
I have same feeling like image in Juhi's comment.
I am not going for mass petition to you to not end it bcos you are promising a new full length FF.

I just loved your portryal of Arnavji and Khushi. Somehow I liked them the most! And sms (s)exchanges between Arnav and Lavanya- Very entertaining!

Finally Your author's notes are as good as the update!

Thank you for introducing us to captain and his universe!

I didn't get what the reference to Fritz by Satyajit Ray wa sabout.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
So! Thats that!
*flicks a happy tear*
i cant believe this journey finally comes to end..and the time which I am recalling is those winter mornings,7am IST, when you used to update waufmaio and how eagerly we used to wait for the daily dose of delicious Captain, blushing child Khushi and text msgs.. =) Although i had started following you since you had begun with Expectation..but that was totally a new and delightful league. Thank you so much for all these os'es too..They just left me feeling good and floating ofcourse. This last installment was perfection ofcourse. Loved each part of it to bits and it was a complete package with everyone making an appearance in it. Laila and Sinatra too,in the A/N. ;)
m so so glad and so so happy for each one of them..from Aman and Tara to Kaseera Amara New baby to Captain Missus and their yum and sweet scenes to Garima Rajeev Vikram Payal and Jalebies to Neerav Anjali and twins.. (for age issue,hmm, il take it the other way round- twins-3 , A and N married for 5..coz otherwise, il think how Captain would have reacted to what is implied.. O_o .. Ohkay! Il leave that)

Il miss this! :)
Koi doubt mat rakhna! 8-)

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