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OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#2 (Page 8)

littlemissstar Goldie
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
Amazing update. Wink
luved it   Big smile
sad that its ending bt do cum up wid sumthing soon.. Smile

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
loved the whole series... will really miss it... looking fwd to ur new story

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
lovely update!!!

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CheshireBilli

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
Thank you for the beautiful journey.
It was lovely.

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nnhk Senior Member
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Joined: 15 August 2012
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:20am | IP Logged
this was hilarious

1. Creepy Shyam on a houseboat

I so wish some reporter would sneak in and give a full blast page 3 worth reading scoop

2. Khushi and Lavanya on text  messages

was fun to read , as it had always been ASR and Lavanya.


3. Anjali and Neerav  and YES I RE - READ THE PART 5 TIMES TO CLEAR MY CONFUSION THAT THEY HAVE BEEN MARRIED 3 YEARS WHILE THE TWINS ARE 5 YEARS OLD!!!

and then you have left that loop open for us LOL

4.Arnav poor thing . will never be rid of Vikram Kapoor.

No matter what he does, Vikram Kapoor is here to stay for good.

would have loved to read about the hike with a pregnant Khushi

All in all why is it endinggg?!!!!!

now waiting for your new story.

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simi58 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:45am | IP Logged
this was awesomeee..Clap
loved  the possessive  side of aman..
Cared enough to come pick me up from work when you were in town, and ensure that enough people saw you kiss me outside the office."  Big smileBig smile
kaseera has turned out to b perfect kid of sanka devi and asr LOLLOL telling horror stories in the morning..LOLstop Kaseera from using the shower head as a water gun.LOL
the texting was back and although it was between khushi and la and no la and asr I loved it nyways, Smile
poor neerav still afraid of asr..LOL but still he did got his revenge..of crs when he was sure he is not supposed to b in hundred mile radius of asr ny soonLOL
gareema and rajeev.. wah wah..Thumbs Up and it was simply adorable how la and khushi was supportive and encouraging,, Smile
Uff this arnav and khushi.. besharams BlushingWink and asr still get jealous of vikram??? haha wht can i say.. sometyms a charm of a certain serial actor is too much to get over with for girls.. Embarrassed but khushi in her own swt way assured arnav.. and the end part was soo sooo sooo cute.. loved it absolutely..Day Dreaming
i am surely gonna miss this one a lot.. I'll be not so secretlyu hoping tht something comes on ur mind and u decide to make another shot of this series..Embarrassed


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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:53am | IP Logged
One of the awesomest and a must read series of ipkknd forum...!!!ClapThumbs Up i wish if you could continue this...but as they say- all goods things come to an end..!!Ouch thank you for writing this semanti...it's been an amazing journey...Smile

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Arshix144 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:56am | IP Logged
What an awesome end to the very wonderful journey of the captain and his Mrs, it was such a fun experience and this last update was so heartwarming, I can't stop grinning. I am sad that it ended but as they say all good things must come to an end so I understand! Your ability to bring about so many characters and give them the treatment they deserved hence making them all lovable e.g Lavanya and Aman, the kids, Nani even Vikram Kapoor and Payal, Anjali heck just about everyone with the exception of Shyaamwa the creepwa :D Even there you did wonders with his character portrayal, the negative vibe the exists with his character multiplied by 10 in here.
I couldn't stop laughing when I read about Shyaam and Sheetal's marriage, the two people who we all love to hate! The way Lavanya was telling Aman about them and Aman's indifferent attitude, it was just hilarious. This whole FF was just so much fun, I have thoroughly enjoyed this journey with you so thank you so much for it. I look forward to even more GEMS that you will come up with! And finally * Take a bow ma'am because your style of writing is out of this world!Clap

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