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LooneyLuna
LooneyLuna @LooneyLuna IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Semanti


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_CRF_wWHaQ0[/YOUTUBE]
M love this song ya. 😳


😳 😳 😳

M tink dis b GR8 sinspiration for da next C-sun,

Sum mellow plateauting instead of da usual Big Bang Theory? 
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LooneyLuna
LooneyLuna @LooneyLuna IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by EXPELLIARMUS


Did someone say C-Sun 2? 

M hear it awl over da IF frenz 
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EXPELLIARMUS
EXPELLIARMUS @EXPELLIARMUS IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 11 Engager 4 + 8
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by LooneyLuna



M hear it awl over da IF frenz 

No no, not that one.

M talk about the Captain-wala, non-asthma, non-shocking one ya?
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LooneyLuna
LooneyLuna @LooneyLuna IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 4
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by EXPELLIARMUS



No no, not that one.

M talk about the Captain-wala, non-asthma, non-shocking one ya?

OH frenz sorry ya M so underwehlmed by da daiyya hos between shock n aasthma, 

m forget about da CAPTAIN 2. New and Improved, just like Tide!! 
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Javeria3991
javeria @Javeria3991 IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 5 + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
Love the whole story.
Enjoyed a lot reading it.
You mentioned how every couple met even nani and nana as well, I wish you could have add Shyam and sheetal story as well.
Beautiful and superb work. 
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nishu_shorna
nishu_shorna @nishu_shorna IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 6 + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
XIII) The Omnipotence Paradox

Shyam Jha And Sheetal Kapoor end up together...jodi kamal ki hai...
I loved Kaseera-Amara bonding...ever lasting texting of Lavanya...Nani's 85th birthday...a new start for Garima...Neerav's revenge to Arnav...and beautiful ArShi moment...WOW...ending cant be more amazing...

I actually read the whole series in 1.5 days...this was indeed a super fun journey...Captain & Mrs. Raizada...with Kaseera and the coming one...Mathur & Lavanya with Amara & Aryan...Anjali-Neerav with Abhimanyu and Nayana...Garima & Rajeev...Vikram & Payal...and pyaari naniji...happily ever after for everyone...just too beautiful...

PS: I was confused whether to comment in this thread or in previous one as that's already crossed 150 pages...then did there...and due to my damn phone which hardly allow me to edit,i had to make so many posts...Sorry for that...
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Natalia
Natalia @Natalia Goldie Inactive
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks a lot for the timeline. Helps straighten out the time frame, and summarizes the story. 
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Natalia
Natalia @Natalia Goldie Inactive
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Posted: 10 years ago
this was one hell of a fun journey, like an adventurous plane ride headed by Capt Raizada and his crew. 😉 As mush as you had writing it, we sure had more fun reading it!.
It is great to see Gaarima finally getting some happiness, and really it doesn't matter what she choses as long as she is happy with it.

COme to think of it, it is so true that Arnav and Khushi were the catalyst to so many relationships, even if not the catalyst but definitely a centre ground for them to meet.
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.ButterCup.
.ButterCup. @.ButterCup. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Excellent story..
loved it.❤️
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