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Asya FF Meri Duniya updated Part 30 (Page 93) (Page 92)

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update milling??????
teaser is too good but what golmal has she done now?????

To know whether she did golmal or goodmal.. u have to wait...
wahi to nahi hota

mujhe bhi nahi hota... par kya karoon... mujhe likhke update karna hoga...
mehnet se lolzLOL
 
likhne ke baad tumhe mehnat se padna padega...LOL yaad rakhna...Wink
pehle tum mehnet se hi sahi update to karo
pehle mujhe mehnat se likhne toh do...
liko likoLOL

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Part 30:

Next Day: Hospital:

Nurse - Aap yaha sign kar dijiye...

                 Rashid singned discharge papers...

Nurse - Aap abhi patient ko leja sakte hai...

                  Nurse left from there... Gaffur came there...

Gaffur - Saare formalities hogaye...???

Rashid - Ha... hum abhi Asad ko leja sakte hai...

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Asad's ward:

Ayaan - Aap toh sach mein hero bangaye bhaijaan... Appraisals, Sympathy sabb aapko hi mila hai...

Asad - Aap kum hai kya chote miyya... Mini size hero toh aap bhi bangaye...

                Zoya came there with Asad's reports...

Zoya - Rabart, tumhara bhaijaan ka dimaag khana katam hogaya hai toh toda madatt karlo...

Asad - Miss. Farooqi, hum jaa kaha rahe hai...??

Zoya - Mannat mein Mr. Khan... Sharukh Khan ne humein invite kiya hai...

Asad - very Funny Miss. Farooqi...

Zoya - Ghar hi jayenge Mr. Khan...

                        Ayaan is giggling looking at them...

Asad - Tu hass matt Ayaan... Mein seriously pooch raha hoon...

Zoya - Aapko jaha jana hai, hum wahi jayenge...

Asad - Par kaha...??

Zoya - Surprise hai...!!!

Asad (To himself) - Definetly abbu ke ghar... Ammi toh mujhe dekhne ke liye abbu ke ghar toh nahi aayegi... Aur abbu ammi ke ghar... Ammi, abbu hokar bhi hum akele hogaye...

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Dilshad's House:

Zeenat - Dilshad ji, aap Asad ka karma taiyaar nahi kiya...???

Dilshad - Mujhe nahi lagta ki Rashid, Asad ko yaha rakhega...

Asma - Isa kyun soch rahe ho aap...??? Zoya ne call karke batay ki Asad yahi rukhega...

Dilshad (Surprise) - Sach mein...!!! Rashid maan gaye...???

Asma - Ha abhi taiyarriya kare...??!!!

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Living Room:

            Everyone got assembled in living room waiting for Asad's arrival... As the horn of car heard, everyone ran to entrance... Ayaan drove the car with Asad in front passenger sear and Zoya in back seat... Another car followed there car with Rashid, Gaffur and Abdul... As car drawn inside the gate, Asad face is covered with wide smile... He didn't expect this from his parents... Thing which amazed him most is, his father Rashid came to drop him in his mother's house...

             Asim and Farhaan helped Asad get out of SUV... Zoya took her duty to make Asad walk slowly while Ayaan is busy parking car... Rashid for the first time came to Dilshad's house... After there depart, they never intrude into eachothers place and lives... Dilshad is really happy to see her son fine and entering her house with agreed Rashid...

           Asad entered house with Zoya and others following them... Rashid stood at the entrance with hesitation to enter house or not... He didn't know the reaction of Dilshad with his act of coming to her house and entering inside is higer degree decision... But Dilshad's one soft look cleared his confusions... He entered with no worry about results for his act...

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Asad's Room:

Dilshad - Abb kaise ho Asad...???

Asad - Ammi, mein teekh hoon aap tension matt lijiye...

Zeenat - Asad sahi keh raha hai Dilshad ji, aapko tension lene ki kya zaroorat hai... Zoya hai na...

              This statement by Zeenat made Zoya blush and Asad embarrassed... Everyone there giggled...

Ayaan - wahi toh ammi, aap tension att lijiye Mona hai na.. Bhai jaan ki screws jaha deela hua hai woh sabb Mona fix kar degi...

Zoya - Rabart...!!!

Dilshad - Oho... abb bass karo...

             Asad took deep breathe with the interruption by Dilshad... But that relaxed expression didn't stay for long with Dilshad's next statement...

Dilshad - Kal ke liye bhi bacha ke rakho... Kal aur bhi chidana hai...

Asad - Ammi...!!!

Dilshad - Teekhe... abhi Asad ko araam karne dijiye... Zoya tum bhi jaakar araam karlo...

Asma - Issa na ho ki Asad teekh hojaye aur tum bimaar... Kyun ki...???

                Asma bit her tongue, realizing what she is going to say...

Zoya - Kyun ki...???

Zeenat (Covering) - Kyun ki Asad ko sirf tum hi handle jar sakti ho...

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               Humeira, Aisha, Nikhat, Najma and Nuzzat sat there in the room wandering around rapid topics coming to there mind... Ayaan came there but stopped at the entrance hearing question asked to Humeira...

Nikhat - Humeira, tumhe kaise ladke acche lagte hai...???

Humeira - Mujhe...??? Abby eh topic kyun...???

Nikhat - At least ek quality toh batao...???

Humeira - Ladka responsible hona chahiye...

Najma - Phir...???

Humeira - EK hi poochana, aur mein ne bata diya... Abb aur matt pooch...

            ****************************************************

Ayaan's Room:

                Ayaan stood before mirror looking at himself... He remembered Humeira saying Responsible...

Ayaan - Responsible...??? Kahi se bhi nahi lag raha hoon...

               Ayaan ruffled his hair...

Ayaan -  Mujhe responsible banna hai... Responsibility kaha se shuru karoon...??? (Idea stuck) Job se... Best idea.. Mein abbu ke company mein join karleta hoon... At least isse toh Humeira impress hojayegi... Hope so...

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Living Room:

Abdul - Mein ne Rafiq ko infor kar diya hai, woh saara kaam supervise kar lega.. Humein tension lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...

Rashid - Mein files kal bejdunga.. Kyun ki mujhe aaj uss pe kaam karna hoga...

             Ayaan came there interrupting...

Ayaan - Aap tension matt lijiye Abbu, job hi kaam hoga mein karoonga... Aap do din aaraam kijiye...

             Gaffur and Abdul smiled at Ayaan, But Rashid is still in shock...

FlashBack:

Rashid - Ayaan, kal se tum bhi humare saath office chaloge...

Ayaan - Abbu, Office...???!!! Mein toh abhi abhi padai karke aayi hoon, aap mujhe office join karne ke liye keh rahe hai... Please abbu mujhe kuch din enjoy karne dijiye...

Rashid - Ayaan tum abhi baccha nahi ho... Tumhe responsible hona chahiye...

Ayaan - mein responsible hojaunga abbu... But please kuch din enjoy karne dijiye...

Flash Back Ends

            ******************************************************

Rashid - Suddenly, tumhe kya hogaya hai Ayaan...???!!!

Ayaan - Kya hua abbu...???

Rashid - Mein netumhe kitne baar office aane ke liye kaha hai, par kabhi nahi maana.. aaj sudden change kya hai...???

Ayaan - Aap hi kehte na abbu, mujhe responsible hona chahiye... Issi liye...

Gaffur - Rashid saab, aap abb retire hojayiye.. aapke dono bte office sambhalenge...

               Every smiled...

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Kitchen:

Zeenat - Sabb ke liye coffee taiyaar...

Dilshad - Rashid coffee nahi peeta hai... Unke liye chai bana padega...

Asma - Teekhe mein bana leti hoon...

Dilshad - nahi mein banati hoon...

                *************************************************

               Rashid enjoyed tea from heart, with one sip he identified tea maker... After years he is drinking tea made by Dilshad... Every sip gave him a different taste... After his tea Rashid met Asad and took leave... Dilshad followed him out...

Dilshad - Rashid...!!!

          Rashid stopped his foot and turned back...

Dilshad - Woh... mein... aapko Thanks kehna chahti hoon... Aapne Asad ko hospitals se seeda yaha laya... Thank you...

         Rashid thought of saying something but took his words back... He shook his head and left from there...

             *******************************************************

Evening: Asad's Room:

              Zoya entered his room with coffee...

Asad - Miss. Farooqi, mein ne aapko aaraam karne ke liye kaha tha...

Zoya - Bahoth Karli mein ne aaraam... Aap coffee pee lijiye...

Asad - Thank u Miss. Farooqi...

Zoya - Kya hua Mr. Khan...???

Asad - Abbu ne mujhe ammi ke pass beja aur itne saal baad woh logh mile hai... Ayaan ne kaha ki ammi ne abbu se milkar thanks bhi kaha hai... Ammi ne abbu se baat kiya hai Miss. Farooqi mein bahot kush hoon...

                Asad moved his fractured hand in the happiness, mourned in pain...

Zoya - Araam se Mr. Khan...

Asad - Iss kushi ke saamne yeh dard bahot kum hai Miss. Farooqi...

Zoya - Mr. Khan, mein aapko isse zyada kushiyan dena chahti hoon...

            Zoya and Asad shared an eye-lock... They shared a cute moment with their cute smiles... Asad said breaking there eye-lock...

Asad - Aapne yeh sabb kaise kiya...???

 

Zoya - mein Miss. Farooqi hoon Mr. Khan... kuch bhi kar sakti hoon...

 

Asad - par kaise...??? Aapne toh impossible ko possible kardiya...

 

Zoya - Aap jaise Impossible ke saath rehkar, har cheez ko possible karna aagayi hai...

 

Asad - Accha... toh aap iss impossible ke saath reh kyun chahte hai...

 

Zoya - Kyun ki mein iss Impossible Ahmed khan ke saath mohobbat mein doob gayi hoon... aur mujhe tairna nahi aata hai...

 

Asad - Sekhne ka bhi zaroorat nahi hai... Kyun ki hum dono doob kar bhi saath rahenge...

 

Zoya - humesha ke liye...

 

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loved it... Thnx fr pm

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awesome part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part'
continue soon

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Posted: 17 December 2013 at 5:57am | IP Logged
i was missing this story of urs
welcum backa nd thanks for updating 
it was superb
i hope mu's of ayra and najma/asif will clear soon
cont soon

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