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Asya FF Meri Duniya updated Part 30 (Page 93) (Page 73)

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Posted: 06 October 2013 at 4:43am | IP Logged
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Awesome !!!!!!
u written it so well...so much drama...
finally tanveer arrested...all r safe...
loved it !!!!
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Part 28:

Inside Building:

                                 Asad got up with the help of Zoya...Asad and Zoya hugged... They broke the hug...Asad placed his hand around Zoya and started walking with her help... They started finding way out home... Everthing around started falling...

Asad - Hum bahar kaise jayenge...???

Zoya - Carpet...!!!

              She saw a wooden plywood lying there... She placed it on entrance... She came out with him... As they came out building got collapsed... Everyone took a deep breath seeing them safe but there happiness and sense of safety for them didn't stay longer... Asad suddenly fainted and fell on ground because Zoya couldn't handle weight of his muscular body... She kneeled down handling him... Everyone came to them running...

              Zoya is in tears looking at unconscious Asad... She is moving him hard to wake him up... Her tears are flowing like a waterfall...

Zoya (Sobbing) - Mr. Kha... Mr. Khan... uttiye Mr. Khan... Mr. Khan...

Dilshad - Asad.. utto Asad...

                  Everyone were in tears not understanding what to do... Zeenat and Asma are trying to handle mother's pain, Dilshad... Anwar, Abdul and Gaffur are trying to handle breaking Rashid... Najma, Nikhat, Nuzzat are breaking down in tears while Aisha and Jia didn't understand how to calm them down... Zoya's red eyes are flowing tears while Zoya is continuously shouting Mr. Khan's name to bring him to conscious but there is no moment in him...

Zoya - Mr. Khan... Mr. Khan... Uttiye Mr. Khan...

                   Zoya is crying out loud no more to keep the pain inside...

Zoya - Asad utto Asad... Aapne toh kaha aap meri saath kabhi nahi chodenge... Aap apna wade ko kaise thod sakte hai...

           Zoya is distraught... Ayaan checked heartbeats by placing his head on Asad's chest, and he also checked his breathing... Both are gowing irregular...

Ayaan - Humein Bhai Jaan ko jaldi hospital lekar jana hai...

Farhaan - mein ne already ambulance ko call kiya hai... woh logh aarahe honge...

Zoya (Angrily) - Kab aayenge...??? Itne der kaise laga sakte hai...??? Yaha kisi ki jaan nikale jaa rahe hai aur woh logh abi tak nahi aaye...

                Ambulance and Fire brigade reached... Asad was placed on stretcher... They took him to Ambulance... Zoya, Dilshad and Rashid got into ambulance and rest all followed them in cars... Fire brigade is trying to calm down flames which are higly raising...

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Hospital:

               Asad was placed on a wheel strctcher and he is been taking to ICU... Zoya is running with strectcher holding his and pleasing him to open his eyes with flowing tears... Dilshad is distressed... Everyone reached there and everyone are running behind the stretcher crying and praying for Asad ... Asad was taken into ICU... Zoya's hand got separated from his, first there palm and there fingers leaving touch...

                  Everyone are worried out there... Zoya sat in distraught... She is in no sense to wipe her flowing tears... She rembered her days and fights with him... She rembered there promises... She rembered the way Asad said here "Mein aapko kabhi nahi chod ke jaane wala... Kon sa dil apni dhadkan ke bina reh sakta hai... Kaun saas ke bina jee sakta hai... Aapke bina mein nahi hoon... Aap se bina zindagi jeene se pehle mein maut ko gale lagaloon..."

                Zoya looked at her palm which are covered with Asad's blood and her sleeves covered with Asad's blood droplets, her hands started shivering... Her full body is burning with heat caused by tension... Reminscinces of Asad's gift to her.. the way he brought a bouqet made of raw corn and evening so many flowers with a card and his message...

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                Asim, Ayaan and Humeira are getting examined by doctors and they are doing first-aid... Asim's wound on hand is is cleaned and covered by bandage... Ayaan cuts and wounds are also got cleaned and covered... His head also got a normal first aid band... After his check up his first thought in mind is Humeira... He want to know how is she... He went to Humeira who is getting examined for her ankle... Aisha was there with her...

Ayaan - Aisha.. tum jaake waha Zoya ko first-aid hua ki nahi dekho mein yaha Humeira ke saath rahunga...

                 Aisha nodded and left from there...

Doctor - Choti si chot hai par pair e zyada stress dene ki wajah se bahot sujgaya hai... Sujan kum hone tak aapko iss pair pe zyada pressure nahi daalni chahiye...

Humeira - yes Doctor...

Doctor - mein aapko ointment aur spray likhe de raha hoon...

Ayaan - Ok doctor...

               Ayaan took prescription from doctor... He held Humeira and helped her to get up...

Humeira - It's ok Ayaan... mein chal sakti hoon...

Ayaan - Abhi abhi doctor ne jo kaha woh suna hai na... phir bhi tu..

          Humeira interrupting Ayaan in mid sentence by raising her hand she said...

Humeira - Mein apna khayal rakh sakti hoon Ayaan... Aap zindagi bar meri saath nahi rehne wale hai...

             That sentence from Humeira stabbed him... Humeira turned other side with brimming tears in her eyes... Jia came there...

Jia - Ayaan, tum teekh toh ho...???

Ayaan - yeah I am fine...

Jia - Humeira.. tumhari pair kaisa hai...

Humeira - Teekh hai...

               Aisha came there to see Humeira, whether her check up is done or not...

Aisha - Humeira, aapki check up hogayi...???

             Humeira hiding her tears...

Humeira - Ha... Chalo Aisha mujhe Baji ke pass jana hai...

               Aisha and Humeira started to leave... Humeira stopped and turned...

Humeira - Ayaan prescription dijiye... Mein dawai magvalungi...

Ayaan - Mein apni dawai ke saath aapki bhi leke aajaunga...

Humeira - It's ok Ayaan... Mein Farhaan ko batadunga... woh meri, Asim ka aur tumhara bhi medicines lake dedga...

               Ayaan couldn't say anything he just gave her prescription... Humeira and Aisha left Ayaan confused and shocked...

Humeira (To Herself) - Mujhe pata hai Ayaan... Mein ne job hi kiya hai aapke balayi ke liye kiya hai... Isse aapko jitna dukh pahuncha hai usse zyada mujhe pahuncha hai... Aapko mujhse dur rehna hoga Ayaan aur mujhe aapse... Iss mein hi aapka balayi hai... mein aapke pass reh kar aapki duniya se kushiya nahi cheena chahti goon... mein iss pyaar ki ehsaas ko kud mein hi dafan karna chati hoon... Kyun ki meri pyaar aapki duniya mein sirf anderi leke aaegi... Aapke liye Jia hi sahi ladki hai...

                  Humeira wiping her tears stressed her mind and heart to stay away from Ayaan...

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                Ayaan didn't understand why Humeira is behaving like this... Why is she ignoring him...??? What changed her behavior...??? She didn't even ask him, how is he feeling now...?? His brother is in danger, Humeira's behavior, Ammi and Abbu's condition and Zoya... Zoya is no where in this world now... She is drowning in tears with Asad's memories...

Jia - Ayaan...!!! Ayaan...!!!

                  Ayaan snapping out of thoughts...

Ayaan - Ha..

Jia - Mujhe lagta hai aapko aapke ammi aur abbu ke pass jana chahiye...

Ayaa - Wahi jaa raha tha...

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Outside ICU:

               Everyone are worried for Asad... Everyone are depressed and drowned I grief... Doctor came in white coat with a stecthescope around his neck... Everyone rouned hi m to know Asad's condition... Zoya stood up to one corner but couldn't ask doctor how he is because she is scared of answer...

Rashid - Asad kaisa hai...???

Doctor - Humne saari tests kar diya hai... Head injury ki wajah se woh behosh hai bahot khoon behgaya hai... Usse agle 6 ghanto mein hosh nahi aaya toh comma mein jaa sakta hai... If something happens like this, then his life will be in danger... Uske esophagus and epiglottis, I mean wind and food pipe block hua hai, hard smoke inhale karne ki wajah se... Issi liye breathing problem ho rahi hai... Mein aapko darana nahi chahta hoon, but truth is Abhi sirf baghwaan hi kuch kar sakta hai...

                  Everyone are shocked hearing ths from doctor... Everyone are in tears... Zoya didn't even say anything... Her breathing stopped for a minute... Tears started flowing continuously...

Rashid - Kya hum usse ek baar dekh sakte hai...???

Doctor - Patient ko disturb matt kijiyega... ICU ke andar sirf ek insaan jaa sakta hai... Aap chahe toh uss door se dekh sakte hai...

                    Dilshad and Rashid went to door to see there son lying on bed... All other stood near wide glass window taking glance of unconscious Asad with teary eyes... Zoya is not there... She is not even near door or window...

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                 Zoya is walking aimlessly in the corridors... There were no visitors because at night they are not allowed... That floor have few nurses and ward boys with few night duty doctors... Reception place was empty... Zoya went to receptionist...

Zoya - Yaha koi room hai jaha mein prayer kar sakti hoon...???

                  Reception looking at Zoya who stood there with flowing tears and no expression on her face but with deep pain in her eyes... Receptionist showed her way towards which is empty... Luckily she saw a mat for prayer... It was like god planned everything... Receptionist left from there...

                 Zoya kneeled down... She covered her head and started praying with so much pain in her heart... She is not able to sit balanced n her knees... She falling week on her knees who can fall at any moment... Tears are still making there way from shuttered eyes... Only prayer she could do is...

Zoya - Allah tala... Aaj aapko ek jaan bachana hoga, nahi toh do jaan lene honge... Asad ke bina mein nahi ji paungi... Usse kuch hogaya toh mein nahi seh paungi... meri madat kijiye... Mr. Khan ko bachayiye...

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                         Everyone are outside ICU after meeting Asad one by one...

Gaffur - Zoya kaha hai...???

                  Everyone looked around and they couldn't see her... When they looked straight to corridor they saw her coming from dark to light... She made her steps slowly with no senses... She came there...

Gaffur - Zoya tum teekh toh ho...???

Zoya (Stern and Painful voice) - Ha abbu... Mein Mr. Khan se milke aati hoon...

                    Zoya moved towards ICU door, she opened and entered... Her heart broke looking at Asad lying on bed unconscious with all equipment... Blood bottle on his right hand nerve... There is pulse oximeter connected to Asad through a clip... Elctrodes attached to Asad's chest with sticky pads which helps to examine his heartbeat, displayed on monitors... Asaad's nose and mouth are covered with Oxygen mask... She went near to him... She slid her hand palm under his... And held it gently... She kept his hand near her heart...

Zoya - Mr. Khan... Aap iss dhadkan ko sun rahe hai na... Aapko meri ehsaas hai na... Meri dhadkan tab tak zinda hai jab tak aap ho Mr. Khan... Aap nahi hai toh mein bhi nahi...

                  Zoya tears are rolling down her cheeks...

Zoya - Mr. Khan aapne zindagi bar saath nibane ka waada kiya hai Mr. Khan... app uss wade ko nahi thod sakte hai...

               Zoya started crying loud before him, With his palm in her hands... She sensed movement in his hands... She looked at him who is trying hard to open his eyes... Slowly he opened his eyes and looked at Zoya who is weeping for him... But he founded difficulty in breathing... He started breathing hard raising his chest high...

Zoya - Doctor...!!! Doctor...!!!

               Ayaan called doctor... Doctor and Nurse reached there in no time... Nurse sent Zoya out... Doctor checked Asad and Nurse gave siringe to doctor... Doctor gave injection to Asad... Doctor spent 15 minutes inside checking Asad and continuously examining him... After 15minutes he came out with pleasant expression on his face...

Doctor - He is out of danger... After five minutes u people can go and meet him... Kal subha hum usse normal ward mein shift kardenge...

                    Everyone took normal breathe... After five minutes one after other entered ICU and met him... Zoya made her way into ICU after everyone... She went near to Asad who is sleeping with a normal breathe... Zoya looked at him when happy tears flowed down her cheeks... She looked at him with a smile sending silent prayers of thanks to Allah... She was going to leave when she felt a gentle hold on her hand... She turned and was on cloud 9 seeing Asad conscious... Asad sighed her to bend down... Asad removed his oxygen mask... Asad took her hand and placed it near to his heart...

Asad - Yeh dil bhi sirf tumhare liye dhadk tha hai... har dhadkan mein sirf tumhara hi naam hai... Tumhari ehsaas se zinda hoon mein...

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Edited by VindhyaMounika - 16 October 2013 at 3:34am

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Awesome !!
loved i!i wished to be1'st but its ok

its awesome!!

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Asya...

Awesome !!
loved i!i wished to be1'st but its ok

its awesome!!

thank u... it's ok if u are not commented first... But thanks for commenting...Smile

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Awesome update.glad that asad is safe..

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awesome. loved it. superb.
update soon

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