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Asya FF Meri Duniya updated Part 30 (Page 93) (Page 7)

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      Lots of thanks to regular readers awesome, Linsie, sasir, kajen.asya4ever, AsyaManic,  delka'''. Thanks for your feedback''

     My warm welcome to new readers akap and princeegoyal'''

     If any silent readers are present please do comment''

Note : i know most of you are disappointed with Asad and tanveer's marriage track... but believe me there marriage will never happen... so dont worry... just see how marriage will not happen... Asad is going to do that thing which he never thought to do stop his marriage and zoya is going to help him... please bare me... 

Part 7

Zoya's fight with herself:

Heart (Angrily) - What is this……. He is getting married…… How can he get married to someone else…..

Mind (coolly) – Why can't he get married…… that is his wish……

Heart (Angrily) – but without informing me……

Mind (Coolly) – Why should he inform you…..?

Heart (Angrily and confused) – Because he is my……

Mind (coolly) – Because he is your……. He is nothing to you…… now stop confusing me and yourself….. he is nothing to you…..

Heart (Sadly) – I think you are right……

                By a small mistake of Allah Miyya Zoya's mind won…… because of this Zoya didn't even try to listen to her heart…… On the other side…..

Asad (To himself) – Which made them think like that…..? We are poles apart…… She is completely different from me and I am completely different from her….. But opposites attract…… why this misunderstanding is giving me happiness….. what is this feeling….. Why I feel that Ms. Farooqi belongs to me…… No Asad you cannot think like that…… What is Tanveer's mistake… you cannot do this to her….. This is just attraction……..

               After some time Tanveer reached there……

Najma (To Zoya pointing to Tanveer) – Ye kon hai bhabi…… aapke dost……

                      This made Zoya come out of her thoughts………. She collected herself……

Tanveer (confused) – bhabi….. dost…!!!!! What's going on here Asad….?            

                  This made Asad to come out his thoughts……….

Asad – Ammi…… actually…… (looking at Zoya) Tanveer aapki hone wali bahu hai…. Ms. Farooqi yaha meri aur Tanveer ki wedding plan karne aayi hai……..

                     Dilshad was shocked and so Najma……. Zoya gave a look to him…….

Zoya (looking at him) – Haa phufi… mein yaha sirf Mr. Khan aur Tanveer ki nikha plan karne ayi hoon……

                         Zoya is trying to remove Khagan but it is not coming out of her hand….. Asad is feeling ger angriness…. But he didn't understand she is angry for what…..

Dilshad – Rehne de Zoya….. baad mein dedena…….

                Tanveer was unhappy with this……. Dilshad went to Tanveer and gave a side hug….. Dilshad gave her blessings….. Dilshad, Najma and Tanveer sat there and having conversation…… Asad was staring at Zoya continuously and Zoya was looking down.….. Zoya interrupted there conversation…..

Zoya – Phufi…… mujhe kuch kaam hai…. Abb main chalti hoon…….

Dilshad – Todi der aur rukh jaa…..

Zoya – Nahi phufi please…… Ms. Nasir mein kal aapse office mein milti hoon…..

             Tanveer nodded…… Najma gave Zoya hug…… Zoya left from there not even looking at Asad…… Asad felt really bad…… Tanveer observed the tension between Asad and Zoya and she sensed something……. She really got irritated……..

Farooqi Villa:

                 Zoya reached her villa thinking about disastrous evening……. Her face became red and eyes are filled with anger and sadness…… Asim, Aisha and Asma are sitting in the living room…… Asim so excitedly……

Asim – hey moti…. Kaisa tha tumhari din…..

               Zoya didn't even notice them and went straight to her room…… Asim was really worried for her…….. she sat down in front of her bed folded her legs close to her chest and placed her chin on her knees……. She is completely in her thoughts ..……

Zoya (Agrily) – Mujhe kya hua tha…….!!!!???... Mein unse pichle dho mahena mein jab bhi mili hoon hamesha ladi hoon….….. agar who kisi se shaadi kare…. Dosti kare mujhe kya………!!! Mein kal jaake Mr. Nasir se batadungi ki mein ye contract cancel karna chahthi hoon…… nahi nahi… mein kyu kahoon…. Mujhe Mr. Khan se koi lena dena nahi hai….. mein nahi chodungi apni contract……. aur woh Mr. Khan baad mein jaaye…. Mujhe kya…

Well issi baat pe sher arz hai

Car chalane ke liye cletch close karo gher dabao

Car chalane ke liye cletch close karo gher dabao

Acchi mood ke liye Akdu ko close karo aur ipod ki play button dabao

            Now she is back to her normal mood but her heart……. Allah miyya should know what actually he is planning for her………. She went to freshen up and when she is back Asim was in her room……

Asim – Zoya tum teekh hona……..

Zoya – Of course teekh hoon….. mujhe kya hona hai…….

Asim – tum udaass lag rahi thi…..

Zoya – meri demaag karab hogayi thi…… abb mein teekh hoon…..

(to herself) – kya sach mein teekh hoon….. phir se nahi Zoya…….

Asim – Sach mein teekh hona….

Zoya – haa baba…. Chale kuch khaye……

                    Asim and Zoya went to dining table…. They had there dinner with rest of their family…… Zoya was back to her chirpy mood………they had there dinner filled with joy and Zoya's shayari after so many days after there Ajmer trip and busy schedule of Zoya…….

Asma Khala – Zoya ye khangan kisne diya……??? pushteni lag rahi hai…!!

Zoya – Kuch nahi khala….. by mistake Dilshad phufi ne pehna diya aur nikal nahi rahi hai…….

Asim – Moti hai na… issi liye…….

Zoya – Shutup Asim……

Aisha – Par bahot sundar hai…… aap unse kyu mile aaj…..

Zoya – Kuch nahi isse he……

              Zoya changed the topic and Asim sensed that something is going on in her life…… she wanted to find out about this…….

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           After dinner Tanveer went to her house……. Asad dropped Dilshad and Najma at there home…… Dilshad was happy with Tanveer and her concern…… but she felt that she is not right person for Asad…… She felt that Zoya is right person for Asad….. only she will be able to control Asad's Akduness, anger, craziness and everything…… Najma got really disappointed knowing Zoya is not her Bhabi….. She never thought Zoya as her Bhabi….. but that one minute misunderstanding made her think like that………

            After dropping Dilshad and Najma Asad was back to Khan Mansion…….. He went straight to his room……. He got freshen up and came back to dining table to drink some water…… he poured some water into glass when he heard his abbu's voice…..

Rashid – Kaisa tha aaj ka din..??

Asad (low voice) – teekh tha abbu…….

Rashid – Kya hua beta…….?? Teekh hona……??

Asad – haa abbu…..

Rashid – pichli baar ki tarah nahi karogi na……!!!!!

Flash back:

             Asad called his abbu, Abbas and Tanveer for a private meeting at home……

Rashid – Tumne hum sabko yaha kyu bulaya…???

Asad – Abbu….. woh….. actually

Rashid – Kya hua Asad…..??

                    Abbas and Tanveer are really confused…….

Asad – woh…… Actually….. mein ne ek decision liya hai…… Mein.Ye.Shaadi.Nahi.Karna.Chahthi.Hoon………..

                  Abbas and Tanveer are really startled…….. They were really sad that there plan got spoiled…..

Abbas – Ye sabh kya hai Rashid….!!!!????

                         Tanveer controlling her anger and with a calm face….

Tanveer – Abbu tension matt lijiye……. Asad kehna kya chahtha hai woh toh sun lijiye…..

            Asad turning towards Tanveer……. By raising his head slowly…….

Asad – I am sorry Tanveer……… mein abb ye shaadi nahi karskta…… I am sorry Tanveer….

             Tanveer was really really angry……. By controlling her anger…….

Tanveer – it's ok Asad….. tum abb nahi karna chahthe ho toh teekh hai….. hum agle mahine karlenge…… kyu uncle…….

               Tanveer is really tricky……. She took full scene into her control……. Asad is completely confused now…… he wanted to say that he don't want to marry…. But now full scene is changed..

Asad – woh…… actually…….

Tanveer – mein samajh sakti hoon….. hum nikha ko postpone karlenge……..

                Abbas is now burning with anger……… Tanveer gave him a sign to stay quite…… and she gave him a look which says "I will take care…. Please stay calm.." Asad was going to say something but Rashid interrupted…..

Rashid – Dekho Asad Tanveer tumhe kitni acchi tarah samjte hai…… meri choice kabhi galat nahi hosakta hai……

               Asad plan got reverse….. and Tanveer is enjoying this with wicked smile on her face….. Asad could not say anything to his father……..

Flash back ends

              Asad came out of his thoughts…… and tried to say something but Rashid interrupted him……..

Rashid – mujhe pata hai…… tum aisa kuch nahi karogi….. tum mera baat manogi na…..??

             Asad could not say anything other than nodding his head in yes reluctantly….

                                  *******************************

Next Day Morning: Farooqi Villa: Zoya's Room:

             Sunlight entered Zoya's room through window……. Sunlight felt really bad for waking up such a beauty……. Zoya was really looking beautiful in sleep…… but sunlight failed to wake her up…… she turned other side to escape from disturbance of Sunlight……. But she couldn't sleep anymore because alarm clock disturbed her sleep…. What sunlight couldn't do alarm clock did….

           Zoya woke up from her sleep rubbing her eyes with her fingers…… when she saw the clock it's already eight…. From laziness she is now in hurry…..

Zoya (To herself) – Oh no Allah Miyya… I am late….

            She got up from her bed she felt some pull back….. kangan got struck in between some threads of her pillow…… she tried and removed kangan from that and hold that hand in her other hand….. looking at the kangan……

Zoya (To herself)

Heart – ye kangan (she started smiling)

Mind – stop smiling and come back to reality…. You have to give this kangan back…..

Heart -  Why…??? (Childishly)

Mind – Come on don't you remember….. Dilsha phufi ne apne bahu ke liye laya tha….

Heart – Pata hai….. (Sadly)

Mind – Toh nikalo aur usse de aao….. (sternly)

Heart – ok…… (sadly)

                    She looked at the kangan sadly…. Went to washroom and got ready……. After getting ready she had her breakfast and went to office……

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              Asim went to drop Aisha and as usual to meet Najma…… Asim dropped and Aisha there and not going from there….. Aisha understood and started smiling…..

Aisha – Bhai aaj aap jaane wale nahi hai kya……?

          Asim coming out of her search came to Aisha…

Asim (Still searching for Najma) – Kuch nahi…… ise… hi…. Tumhe kuch chahiye…..

Aisha – mujhe kuch nahi chaiye….. lagta hai aapko kuch information chahiye….

            Asim coming out for his search……

Asim (confusedly) – Kya…!!!??

Aisha – Shayad aaj Najma late anewali hai…..

Asim – Accha… (Suddenly realizing) …. Mujhe kyu bata rahi ho…. Mein jaa rahi hoon….. abbu aur bade abbu pahunch gaye honge….

           He get inside the car and trying to back but he will see Najma coming in view glass and comes out…. Najma is looking really beautiful in the dress given by him….. She is blushing…. Because she knew Asim is standing there…… Aisha is watching all this and unable to control her laugh……. Najma came there…….

Aisha – Hai Najma….. (then looking at Asim) Bhai aap gaye nahi….

Asim – Jaa raha tha…

Najma – Hai Aisha….. hai Asim….

Asim – Hai Najma….

Aisha – You are looking really beautiful…… dress kaha se karida….

              Najma didn't know what to answer….. she is confused and looked at Asim… Zoya Look say's "Asim help…"

Asim – Shayad Orex mall mein……

Aisha – aapko kaise pata…..?? (smiling)

                        Najma Smiling…. Thought of teasing

Najma – Shayad Asim ne kisi frnd ko diya hoga…..

                Asim felt so embarrassed…… and said

Asim – mein abhi chalta hoon…..

          Asim left from there giving "Mein nahi chodunga" look…. Najma was smiling looking at him……

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Precap : Girls Vs Boys Dance in Vishal's Sangeet''... Asad reaches there because he is Vishal's friend and Zoya will be there because she planned that wedding'' Zoya was good friend to Parvana who is bride'.. so she will participate in that wedding other than planning'.. let's see who will win Asad or Zoya'.. or both will win'..

                  Please do comment... all suggestions and criricism are invited... Thanks for reading...



Edited by VindhyaMounika - 23 July 2013 at 5:26am

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