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Asya FF Meri Duniya updated Part 30 (Page 93) (Page 67)

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Linsie

Asim is invole with someone else ... poor najmaCry

Ayra.. have no idea what is going on...
they made jia to play the role...
Cry

hate tanveer...Angry

percap sounds scary... atleast game over for
tanveer...
Evil Smile

No one asked Jia to play the role... Jia really loves him...

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 1:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mariam1368

Wow Tanveer's game is over,am really happy to know this
I hope Asya,Ayra n Asima are safe
Superb update

Thank u and they will be safe...
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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 2:29am | IP Logged
all r working hard on there missions 
waiting for tanveers game to end
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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kritz4ever

all r working hard on there missions 
waiting for tanveers game to end

sooonnn...
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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 4:49am | IP Logged
totally loved it so far
eagerly waiting for the next

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                         This Part is dedicated to hottytotty (I am sorry i don't know your real name)

Part 27:

Nikhat - Kya hua Zoya...???

Zoya - Actually wahi log jis ne humein afternoon restaurant mein milete... Follow karte karte yaha aagaye...

                      Humeira got tensed...

Zoya - Problem yeh hai ki Ayaan akela sambal raha hai...

Humeira - Kya...?? Kaha hai woh log...??

Zoya - Waha bahot beed hai na Ayaa n unhe ghar ki taraf lekar gaya hai...

Nikhat - lagta hai ghar mein guss gaye hai...

Humeira - par Ayaan ji akele hai... Kisi ko madatt ke liye bulao...

Zoya - mein jaa kar Mr. Khan ko bulati hoon...

Nikhat - Mein Asim aur Farhaan ko inform karti hoon...

               Zoya and Nikhat left from there... Humeira stood there with shivering legs and sweat on her forehead...

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Farhaan - Ayaan mein ne Zoya ke liye ek gift kareeda hai woh dikh nahi rahi hai... tumne kahi dekha hai...

Ayaan - nahi dekha hai...

Asad - kaha chod diya aapne... Ghar mein toh nahi chod diya...???

Farhaan - lagta hai wahi chod diya... Please Ayaan tum leke aajaoge...

Ayaan - yeah sure...

          Ayaan left from there... Asad and Farhaan hit there fist as success symbol...

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                Humeira couldn't stand anymore taking tension and she couldn't sense anyone around her... Zoya, Nikhat and Najma no one is around her... Same time Nuzzat came there...

Nuzzat - Kya hua...? Bahot tensed lagrahe ho...??

Humeira - Nuzzat, mujhe ghar ke andarleke chalo... Please... urgent kaam hai...

                Nuzzat helped Humeira to get into house... Zoya, Asad, Farhaan, Asim and Nikhat are watching this...

Zoya - Nuzzat andar jayegi toh gadbad hojayegi...

                They saw Aisha speaking her friends there...

Asim - Aisha...!!

Aisha - Ha bhai jaan...

Asim - Ek madat karogi...??

Aisha - Batayiye...

Zoya - Jab Humeira ko Nuzzat ghar ke andar leke jayegi... Tum Humeira ko chod kar kisi bahane banakar Nuzzat ko jald se jald waha se leke aana hai...

Aisha - Kyun...??

Nikhat - Actually Nuzzat se important kaam hai... aur woh Humeira ke saath chali gayi hai issi liye...

Aisha - It's ok mein kar deti hoon...

Farhaan - Actually tum akeli nahi kar sakti ho... Tum aur Nuzzat dono karni hai...

Aisha - Teekhe...!!!

              Aisha reached Nuzzat and Humeira...

Aisha - Nuzzat chalo important kaam hai...

Nuzzat - Par...

Aisha - Par var kuch nahi...

Nuzzat - Mujhe ghar tak...

          Before Nuzzat could complete...

Aisha - Ghar toh yahi hai... Chalo na abhi.. Baji aap chale jayenge na...

Humeira (Trembling voice) - ha...

           Before Aisha and Nuzzat could leave, Humeira went inside... Aisha and Nuzzat also left from there...

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            Zoya, Asad, Asim, Farhaan and Nikhat made a group...

Zoya - Deka Mr. Khan... Plan kaam kar gaya na...

Asad - Kabhi illogical things bhi kaam kar jaate hai...

Zoya - lagta hai aapko samajh aagaye hai...

Asad - Samajhne ke liye dimaag hona chahiye... Mere pass nahi aapke tarah nahi hoon...

Farhaan - Abb aap dono shuru matt hojayiye...

Zoya - Chal ke dekhe woh dono kar kya rahe hai...

Asad - Nahi...

Zoya - Kyun...??

Asad - nahi.. matlab nahi...

Farhaan - phir se lad rahe hai... Waise Asad.. gaana toh bahot accha tha...

                 Asad got embarrassed and Zoya was blushing...

Asad - Woh... mujhe ek call karna hai.. abhi aata hoon...

             Asad left from there and Zoya smiled at him...

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Inside Villa:

Humeira (Tears in her eyes) - AYAAN...!!! AYAAN...!!!

                 Tears were flowing down with no response from him... Ayaan is there upstairs in Farhaan's room searching gift... Ayaan hearing his name turned around with force... Because of that vase beside him fell down... This sound panicked Humeira...

Humeira - AYAAN...!!!

Ayaan - Humeira...!!!

                  Humeira while ascending got slipped due to saree... She got up herself holding the wall and with the help of stair case she started ascending... she reached last step and again she slipped... But this time she felt two hands on her shoulders stopping her to fall...

Ayaan - Humeira...!!! Tum teekh toh ho...??

              Humeira stood up straight... Her eyes are filled with tears... She is worried... Her heartbeat is out of her heart... She hugged him with force... Ayaan took two to three steps back to gain balance... Ayaan was first at shock to see Humeira like that... He hesitated first but gave a heartful hug to her... They stood there in that position for a long time...

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Someone - Asalam walekum...!!!

               Everyone turned towards that high pitched voice in that party... Everyone had a caual look at her... But her entrance brought hurricane in lives of Gaffur, Asma, Abdul, Zeenat and Anwar... Because they know that lady standing there can bring tsunami in there lives... There happy evening can be turned into a most vulnerable day...

Gaffur - Farida Bi...!!!

              Anwar and Abdul went to Gaffur...

Abdul - Yeh yaha kaise...???

              Farida was a surprise hurricane brought by Raziya into there lives... Raziya was standing far from party waiting to enjoy the drama going to happen... Gaffur went to Farida...

Gaffur - Bi...!!! Aap yaha...??

Farida - Tum toh mujhe bina bhulaye jashn mana rahe hai...??

Gaffur - Aisa kuch nahi... Humein bulane ki waqt hi nahi mila...??

              Zoya came towards her... She took blessings from her...

Farida - Jeete raho.. Suna hai ki aaj tumhari janam din ki jashn hai...

         Farida took some money out of her purse and gave that to Zoya arrogantly...

Farida - Yeh lo... Meri taraf se tofa... Abhi abhi yateem khane se wapass aa rahi hoon... Bhul gayi ki ek yateem ghar pe bhi hai...

                Smile on Zoya's face got faded... Everyone around could sense that... Asad is feeling bad for Zoya... He is hating himself for not able to handle the situation... Asim, Aisha, Nuzzat, Jia and Farhaan are shocked hearig this...

Gaffur - BI...!!!

Farida - Mein ne kuch galat kaha kya...??

Gaffur - BI...!!! Mein nahi chahta hoon ki sabke saamne tamasha bane...

Farida - Chillane se sach nahi badal jayegi...  Band kamre mein zindagi nahi badal jati... Sach yahi hai ki tumne isse godh liya hai... yeh humari kandaan ki khoon nahi hai...

                 Zoya is inn tears... Asma and Zeenat came to her...

Gaffur - Bass kijiye... Zoya meri beti hai... iss ghar ki badi beti... Yahi sach hai...

Farida - Nakli zewar ko sone ki rang saza ne se who sona nahi ban jati... issi tarah Zoya iss ghar ki badi beti kabhi nahi banegi...

Gaffur - sirf aap ke liye Zoya yateem hogi... Par yaha aur kisi ke liye nahi...

              As a symbol Asim, Aisha, Nuzzat, Nikhat, Asad and Farhaan came near her and stood as a support...

Asad - Humne issi liye aapse itne dur reh rahe taaki aap humari niji zindagi mein dakal de khar humari kushi na cheena...

Farida - Mein aap ke liye masla paida karti hoon... Aapke Bi hai hum...

Gaffur - Isi ka toh dukh hai... Aap humare Bi banker bhi humein nahi pehchante hai... Humari Jasbaat ko nahi samjhte hai...

Farida - Hum nahi samajhte hai... Humein pata hai aap kitna toot gaye te jab Zubina gujar gayi thi... Kya aap iss Zoya ko uski wajah nahi maanti... Isne zidd nahi kiya unn doo ko Hindustan aane ke liye... Iski wajah se masoom Farheen bhi iss duniya se chali gayi hai...

Gaffur - Bass kijiye Bi... Aap jitna tamasha karna chahte hai aap kar chuke hai... Aap yaha se chali jayiye...

Farida - Gaffur...

Gaffur - hum aapse vinati karte hai...

               Farida couldn't take anymore rejection... She left from there... Tanveer is reall very happy learning this... Raziya from far is enjoying her victory...

Raziya - Aaj ki tufan tum logo ki zindagi mein kum hai... Aage aur bhi tufan aayenge...

                  Raziya got into her car and left from there...

                 Zoya went to Gaffur... Gaffur hgged his daughter and patted her to cool her down...

Gaffur - Mujhe maaf karde beti... Tumhari kushi ki din par ye sabb...

Zoya - Abbu...!! Aap ko maafi nahi maagni chahye... Mujhe shukriyada karni chahiye...

                Gaffur placed his hand on Zoya's head... Everyone around are overwhelmed looking at bonding of father and daughter... Everyone clapped for them...

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Inside House:

              Humeira realizing that sheis Ayaan's arms... She broke hug... Ayaan also came to present realizing the situation... They were embarrassed for moment...

Humeira/Ayaan - Tum teekh toh ho...???

              Humeira and Ayaan after moment...

Humeir/Ayaan - Ha...!!

Ayaan - Woh... Aap.. Aap pani piyenge...???

               Humeira nodded in yes...

Ayaan - Mein jaake le aata hoon...

Humeira - Neeche jaane ki zaroorat nahi hai... uppar mei kamre mein hai...

          Humeira started to move...

Humeira - Ouch...!!!

            Ayaan held her...

Ayaan - mein madatt karta hoon...

Humeira - Nahi...!!!

          Humeira tried to but couldn't... Ayaan without asking her permission picked her in his hands...

Humeira - Ayaan...!!!

Ayaan - Sshhh... Aap chal nahi paa rahe hai, aur aap zidd kar rahe hai... Abb chup chaap mere baat sunenge...

          Ayaan walked towards Humeira's room with her in his arms... He is staring at her innocent face... he is still in confusion at her behavior... He didn't understand why she is tensed... Why did she leave party in middle...??? But he understood that Humeira was tensed for him... She left party for him... She didn't even care that she is falling... She didn't care about her swollen foot... Ayaan entered Humeira's room and placed her on chair near to table... He poured some water in glass and gave that to her... Humeira drank water...

             Ayaan took her feet in his hands...

Humeira - Ayaan ji aap yeh kya kar rahe hai...???

Ayaan - Aapki pair pe chot lagi hai aur mein dekh raha hoon... Aap yeh batayoye medical kit kaha hai...??

Humeira - Cupboard mein...

                 Ayaan opened cupboard and took medicine box out... He applied cream on Humeira's feet and started massaging...

Ayaan - Tum apni chot ki bhi parva nahi ki aur yaha tak aagayi... Aisa kya hogaya hai...???

Humeira - Zoya Baji ne kaha ki woh Gunde yaha aaye the, aur aap akeli un logon ko baat kar rahe the...

Ayaan - Aap mera maddat karne aagaye... yeh kaisa pagalpan hai...???

Humeira - Aapko kuch hojata toh...???

Ayaan - Aapko kuch hojata toh...???

Humeira - Mujhe kuch bhi hojaye, koi farak nahi padega...

Ayaan - Fark padta hai...!!! Aisa kabhi matt bolo...

             Ayaan placed her feet down... They were silent for sometime... Humeira breaking silence...

Humeira - Woh gunde chale gaye...???

Ayaan - kabhi aaye hi nahi...

Humeira - Kya...??!!! Zoya Baji ne aisa kyun kaha...???

Ayaan - Mazak kiya hoga...

Humeira - Aisa bhi koi Mazak karta hai kya...?? Mein kitni dar gayi thi pata hai... Ek pal saase rukh gaye thi meri...

Ayaan - Aapki zindagi mein itna important hoon ki aap ki saase rukh gayi...??

Humeira - woh...!!! Mein... Aap mere dost hai na... issi liye...???

Humeira (To herself) - Sach mein isi liye...???

Ayaan (To himself) - Sach mein issi liye...??? Kya hum ek doosre ki zindagi mein sirf ek dost hai...??? Humeira bina soche samjhe meri liye, mujhe gundon se bachane ke liye yaha tak aagayi... Yeh dosti nahi ho sakta hai...  Humeira ki pair pe itni choti si dard bhi, mujhe itna dard kyun de raha hai...??? Kya yeh mohobbat hai...??? Ya mein galat soch raha hoon...?? Kya hai yeh uljhan...??

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Garden: Party:

               Asad is searching every where... But he couldn't find her anywhere... He didn't understand to whom shall he enquire about... He stood there thinking about her... After sometime he decided to call her... When he was going to dial her number he felt a hand on his shoulder...

Farhaan - Asad...!!!

Asad - Aap...??!!!

Farhaan - Aap kisi ko doond rahe hai...???

Asad - mein...?? Kisi ko nahi...???

Farhaan - Mujhe lagta hai aap ussi ko doond rahe hai...

Asad - mein Zoya ko nahi doond raha hoon...

Farhaan - Mein ne Zoya ki naam hi nahi liya...

Asad - Woh... Actually... mein...

Farhaan - Zoya apni kamre mein hai... Aaj jo bhi hua, usse bahot dukh pahoncha hai... woh akeli rehna chahti thi... Par mujhe lagta hai, usse aapki zaroorat hai...

               Asad smiled and nodded... Farhaan left from there...

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Tanveer - Kaha ho tum log...???

Guy - Ghar ke peeche... humne kaam shuru kar diya hai...

Tanveer - Aag bahar aur andar se dno taraf se lagni chahiye...

Person - teekhe mam...

           Tanveer disconnected her call...

Tanveer - Zoya... Tumhari aakhri gadi aagayi hai... mein tumhe ghar ke andar bejna chahti thi, par tum kudh chali gayi thi... abb tum kudh uss kudha ke pass bhi chale jaana...

             On the otherside persons appointed by Tanveer are executing the plan...

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Zoya's Room: Balcony:

               Zoya is staring at moon having a black blanket in the background... Stars were twinkling around moon just like her eyes which are filled with tears... She wanted a shoulder for support... A shoulder on which she can place her head and cry her heart out... Arms who can take her into warm and concerned hug to calm her down... She felt a hand on her shoulder, she understood that it is Asad who is standing behind her... She felt happy from inside thinking about Asad's concern for her... She shut her eyes tight... Tears pour down her eyes and made there way down her cheeks...

                 She turned and hugged him tight... Asad hugged her back wrapping his arms around her...

Asad - Aap teekh toh hai...???

Zoya - Ha...

               Answering his question Zoya broke the hug... She turned otherside looking into black sky...

Zoya - Dar lag raha hai Mr. Khan... dar lag raha hai ki meri apne mujhe chod ke na chalejaye... Mein iss bhari duniya mein akeli na padd jaun... Aap bhi mujhe...

             Zoya stopped her sentence in the middle...

Asad - Miss. Farooqi...

            Zoya turned towards him... Asad holding her shoulders made her sit on the swing in the balcony... Asad kneeled down in front of her...  Zoya was looking down with teary eyes... Asad raised her head by keeping his hand under her chin... He wiped her tears...

Asad - Zoya...!!!

              Zoya looked at him with surprised eyes... Asad called her Zoya... At last her Akdu called her Zoya...

Asad - Aisa kabhi nahi hoga... Mein aapko kabhi nahi chod ke jaane wala... Kon sa dil apni dhadkan ke bina reh sakta hai... Kaun saas ke bina jee sakta hai... Aapke bina mein nahi hoon... Aap se bina zindagi jeene se pehle mein maut ko gale lagaloon...

                Zoya placed her hand on Asad's mouth to stop him to say that...

Zoya - Aise kabhi matt boliyega...

Asad - Aur kya bolun...???

Zoya - Wahi lafz jo aap bolne ke liye aur mein sunne ke liye tadap rahe hai...

                  Asad made Zoya stand infront of him... He took her hands in hands...

Asad - Mein jiss ehsaas se itne din baagta raha... Jiss jaszbaat ko mein chupata raha... Usse elaan karne ka waqt aagaya hai... Miss. Farooqi... (Asad Smiled) Zoya...

                Zoya's heart started racing... She couldn't stand anymore... Most awaited moment came into her life... But..!!!

Zoya - Mr. Khan.. ek minute... aapko kuch ajeeb nahi lag raha hai...

Asad - Yeh ehsaas toh ajeeb hi hai...

Zoya - nahi Mr. Khan... aapko zyada heat nahi lag rahi hai... jalne ki baboo nahi aarahi hai...

                Asad stopped for a moment and sensed it...

Asad - Ha Miss. Farooqi...

                When they turned towards Zoya's room... it is on fire... Zoya got really tensed... She is scared of fire and these flames scaring her to hell... Asad removed his coat and wrapped it around Zoya...

Asad - Aap gabrayiye matt...

               Zoya is almost fainting... Asad held her...

Asad - Miss. Farooqi...!!! Mein hoon aapke saath... Aapko kuch nahi hoga... Mujh pe barosa hai na...

Zoya - Kud se zyada...

Asad - Hum safe honge...

                   Asad and Zoya made there way out of fire from Zoya's room...

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Ayaan - Ghar mein aag kaisi lagi hai...???

Humeira - Mujhe bahot dar lag raha hai Ayaan...

Ayaan - Tumhe kuch nahi hoga... Tumhe kuch hone se pehle maut ko mujhse gujar na hoga...

Humeira - Ayaan... yeh kaise baate kar rahe hai...

Ayaan - Hum baad mein ladte hai... pehle humein yaha se bahar nikalne ka raasta doond na hai...

                  Ayaan took a blanket and wrapped it around Humeira... He held her... They started moving but for Humeira it became difficult to move... Ayaan picked her up in his arms and they started moving out of the room in between the flames...

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Aisha (Screaming) - GHAR MEIN AAG LAGI HAI... GHAR MEIN AAG LAGI HAI...

               Everyone turned towards house... Everyone are hell shocked from sudden incident... They ran from party... All ladies started crying...

Zeenat - Zoya aur Humeira kaha hai...???

Farhaan - Ghar ke andar hai...

Dilshad - Asad aur Ayaan...???

Farhaan - Woh bhi wahi hai...

               Everyone are in distraught condition... Abdul called fire for exhausting fire... They didn't understand what to do... Suddenly Asim remembered Nikhat saying that Najma was inside house...

Asim - Najma kaha hai...???

Dilshad - Najma...!!! Najma Aisha ke saath thi na...

Rashid - Najma kaha hai...??? NAJMA...!!! NAJMA...!!!

Nikhat - Najma ghar ki andar gayi thi par waapas nahi aayi... Asi...

        Before Nikhat could call Asim... Asimjumped into house through fire flames...

Asma - Asim...!!!

         Abdul went to Asma to handle her... Whole scene is enjoyed by only one person with evil smile... That is TANVEER.. Farhaan was in confusion what to do... He saw some people running from there...

Farhaan - Yeh baagh kyun rahe hai...

            He saw white times in there hands which are usually used for storing petrol or kerosene...

Farhaan - Aag lagi hai ya lagayi gayi hai...

                Farhaan didn't wait for any moment...

Farhaan - Jiju mere saath ayiye... Mein baad mein samjhadungi...

              They started running from there... No one understood for what... Even they left Tanveer in confusion..

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Inside House:

          Humeira's and Zoya's room are on upstairs... When Both Asya and Ayra came out of rooms... They ended up meeting eachother...

Ayaan - Bhai Jaan... Zoya...!!!!

Zoya - Humi... Ayaan...!!! (Zoya ran to Humeira) Humeira ko kya hua hai...???

Humeira - Baji aap teekh toh hai...

Asad - Humein pehle yaha se bahar nikalna hoga...

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Asim - NAJMA...!!! NAJMA...!!!

                 Najma got fainted and she is lying on the ground in Aisha's room...

Asim - NAJMA...!!! NAJMA...!!!

            Asim started searching everywhere... He went to Aisha's room which is in downstairs... He ran to Najma who is lying on ground unconsciously...

Asim - Najma... utto Najma...

              Asim looked around and saw a jar of water and sprinkled some water on Najma's face... He tried to wake up gently slapping on her cheeks... Najma woke up with coughing... When she opened her eyes she saw Asim infront of her eyes... Najma moved back herself...

Najma - Tum yaha kyun aaye ho...???

               Asim was shocked by this question...

Asim - Najma humein yaha se bahar niklna hai...

Najma - Mein mar jaungi par aapke saath yaha se nahi jaungi...

                    Asim slapped Najma to calm her down...

Asim - Pagal jaise baate matt karo... Bahar tumhari maa baap tumhare liye ro rahe hai aur tum yaha marne ki baate kar rahi ho...

                  Najma became silent thinking about her parents... Asim is trying to find way... Because door way is completely destroyed... In the meanwhile Asim saw that Najma's uppatta caught fire... He stamped her duppatta to stop fire spreading...

Asim - Kis duniya mein ho... tumhari duptta ko aag lagi hai...

             Najma didn't respond...

Asim - humein iss kidki se jaana hai...  iss kidki se hum hall tak pahunch jayenge...

             Asim and Najma went near window... But it is lit by fire...

Asim - Pehle tum jaogi...

Najma - Mujhse nahi hoga...

Asim - Tum kar paogi...

              Najma with help of Asim got out of room... Asim also jumped out of room but got hurt on his hand due to fire... As they left room roof fell down...

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                 Asad held Zoya and Ayaan held Humeira... They came down as fast as they could... But after coming to center of hall they saw that Asim and Najma are inside and Asim got hurt on his hand... They came near them...

Najma - Bhai jaan...

Asad/Ayaan - Tum teekh ho...???

Zoya - Asim... yeh chot...

Asim - Humein jaldi baahar nikalna hai... nahi toh yeh ghar kisi bhi samai iss ghar ki tabhai ho sakti hai...

Zoya - Par hum inklenge kaise...??

Asim - Peeche k raste hu nahi ja sakte hai... aage se jaana hai...

Humeira - Aapko koi awaaz nahi aa rahi hai.. jaise kuch kaaj ke hangers ki sound...

Asad - Move...

              Asad and Zoya went to one side, Ayaan and Humeira to other side and Asim and Najma to one side... Sandler fell down in the middle and some pieces glass went and hit Ayaan... He got a cut on his face and deep cut on his right arm... Zoya got hit to the pillar... Her head was bleeding...

Ayaan - Aah...

Najma - bhai Jaan...!!!

Asim - Zoya..!!

               Ayaan removed that glass piece... It caused so much pain to him... Humeira kept her hand on his hand and reached wound sliding her hand all over the arm... When he felt the wound he tied it around wound...

                Asad removed his hand-kerchief and tied it around Zoya's head...

Asad - Aap teekh toh hai...

Najma - Humein jaldi bahar jaana hai...

Asim - Humein entrance se bahar nikalna padega...

                  Every one got up... Asim and Najma were near to door...

Asad - Asim tum Najma ko lekar pehle bahar jao... Baad mein Ayaan aur Humeira phir hum...

                 Asim went near to door by that time pillar fell down... That became a hindrance to go...

Najma - Abb hum bahar kaise jayenge...????

         ... Everytone started thinking a way to go out... Out everyone are scared... They didn't understand what to do... Fire engine didn't reach...

Asim - humne Carpets laye the party ke liy... do abbhi ghar mein hai...

                   Carpets are thick and if they placed on fire also they will not catch fire so fast... Asim and Asad brought carpets and spread on the pillar from one side to other... Asim and Najma went out... People out took breathe seeing them safe but still scared about other people trapped inside... Asad spread other carpet and this time Ayaan, Humeira made there way and also Zoya followed them and came out, By seeing them they came everyone took breath...

Dilshad - Asad kaha hai...??

                Zoya turned back but couldn't find Asad back... Before Zoya could eneter insde she stopped by people out... Ayaan was going inside but before entering a wooden board from up fell which was hanged on top of door... He got hurt on his head... Rashid went and brought back Ayaan...

Rashid - Mein andar jaunga...

            Before Rashid could enter Zoya ran inside...

Rashid - Zoya...!!!

Gaffur - Zoya...!!!

Inside House:

               Zoya's fear about fire was too weak before her strong love...  Her nightmare came back to her eyes... She is shivering and sweating... She didn't understand what to do... She is shock and confused because of thouhts running in her mind... she didn't how to handle herself...

Zoya - Zoya...!! Zoya...!!! Tumhe kud ko sambal na hoga... Asad ko bachana hoga... Tumhari Asad... Bachao Zoya... Tumhari Asad ko bachao...

                    *********************************************

Outside:

                     Farhaan and Anwar back with some wounds on there body and also with one guy... They couldn't catch everyone but after fight they could catch hold on guy... Tanveer was hell shocked seeing this...

Abdul - yeh sabb kya hai...??? Yeh kaun hai...???

Anwar - Aag laga nahi... lagaya gaya hai...

                   Everyone got shocked hearing this...

Gaffur - Kya...???

                    Anwar holding person from his neck...

Anwar - Batao sach bato...

Person (Shivering tone) - Ha.. ha humne kiya hai... humein paisa diya gaya hai iss ghar ko aag lagane ke liye...

Anwar - Kise maarne ke liye...???

Person - Zoya naam ki ladki ko...

                  Evevryone was more shocked and surprised... Gaffur came near to person and slapped him...

Gaffur - Kyun maarna chahta tha meri beti ko... ??? Kyun...??/

Person - humein kaha gaya tha...??

Gaffur - kisne kaha...???

              Person raised his hand and pointed towards that person who asked them to do this...

Rashid - Tanveer...!!! Kyun kiya tumne...?? Kyun..??

                Tanveer didn't answer...

Dilshad - Tumhari wajahse Asad aur Zoya dono khtre mein hai...

Zeenat - Bata kyun kiya tumne...???

Tanveer - Kyun ki mein Asad se nikha karna chahti thi... Zoya ki wajah se sab kuch ulta hogaya... Asad mujhse pyaar nahi karata tha... Phir bhi nikha ke liye taiyaar tha... Par jabse Zoya mili sab kuch badal gaya... Zoya ki wajah se meri nikha rukh gayi...  Asad Zoya se Mohobbat karne laga... Issi liye mein Zoya ko maarna chahti thi...

               Dilshad slapped her...

Dilshad - Bass kar... Tumhari mooh se unn dono ki naam bhi matt lena... Chali jao yaha se...

Asma - Yeh yaha se kudh nahi jayegi...

Zeenat - Iss ko lene police aayenge yaha...

              Tanveer went to Rashid...

Tanveer - uncle... Please uncle... Mujhe police ki hawale matt kijiye...

              Rashid didn't even respond... By the time police reached there...

Rashid - Le chaliye isse...

                    Police wore her hand-cuffs...

Tanveer - Meri maksat puri hogayi... Zoya uss aag mein jal kar raakh hojayegi... Aur iss beijatti ka badala mein zaroor lungi...

                              ***************************************

Inside House:

Zoya - Mr. Khan...!!! Mr. Khan...!!!

               Zoya started running around... She couldn't find him...

Zoya - Mr. Khan...!!!

              Zoya reached dinning room...  Asad was lying there on ground bleeding...

Zoya - MR. KHAN...!!!

                Zoya ran to him and kneeled down...

Zoya - Asad... Utti ye Asad...

                   Zoya was distraught and crying hard... She started moving him to bring him to conscious... Seeing Unconcious killed her from inside... Asad opened his eyes...

Asad - Zoya...

Zoya - Asad...!!!

 Asad - Aap yaha kyun aaye ho...???

Zoya - Aap ne kaha ki aap meri saath kabhi nahi chodenge... Mujhe bhi kuch kehna hai... Jab tak meri saas chlegi tab tak yeh Zoya aapki rahegi...

                    Asad got up with the help of Zoya...Asad and Zoya hugged... They broke the hug...Asad placed his hand around Zoya and started walking with her help... They started finding way out home... Everthing around started falling...

Asad - Hum bahar kaise jayenge...???

Zoya - Carpet...!!!

              She saw a wooden plywood lying there... She placed it on entrance... She came out with him... As they came out building got collapsed...

                            **************************************
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