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Asya FF Meri Duniya updated Part 30 (Page 93) (Page 6)

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I read it in one..really tat was fantastic..amazing.continue soon.pls pm me.

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              Hi frnds'.. thanks to you all for reading Meri Duniya by taking out your valuable time'' and also commenting''. A BIG THANK YOU'.. this part is dedicated to all regular readers'' and I welcome new readers... If any silent readers... please comment or atleast PM me...

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Part 6

Zoya went to manager and asked him where is table no. 6……. He showed her the way and pointed towards a young lady in pink and white salwaar…….. she looked irritated….. Zoya moved towards the table with files in her hand…… Zoya wore jeans and a pink kurti…… After looking at Zoya, Tanveer got more irritated which is visible on her face…..

Tanveer (To Herself) – Ajeeb ladki hai…… kapde toh dekhe kaisi pehni hai…..

                Zoya interrupted her thoughts…..

Zoya – Hello mam…. Good evening…… sorry for the late……

Tanveer – It's ok…. Please sit….

                Zoya occupied her seat and wondered….who is that guy…who is going to marry her…. Mr. Nasir told that both are going to meet me…….

Zoya – Mam… where is your fiance….. will he be late…

Tanveer – Actually he went to make a call………. Let me call him……

            Tanveer excused herself and left to make a call…….. On the other hand Asad is trying to fix his phone….. At last he is done with it and when he switched on the phone there are 3 missed calls of Tanveer……..

Asad – ye itni baar kyu call kar rahi hai…..!!!

           Asad called Tanveer back……..

Asad – Hello….. Tanveer is everything alright……….

Tanveer – Yeah…. Ms. Farooqi is here

             Looking at her and she is busy with her laptop and arranging some files……

Tanveer – We are waiting for you……..

                  Just then Asad has seen Dilshad and Najma coming there…….. he was waiting for them for so long time….. When he banged into Zoya he was talking to Najma….. because of that sweet accident his cell broke and call got disconnected….

              Najma and Dilshad came to Asad….

Asad – Salaam walekum ammi…… hai Tamatar…..

Dilshad – walekum salaam beta….

Najma – Hai BJ……

Dilshad – Tumne hume yaha kyu bhulaya……!!

Asad – Aapko aapka surprise dikhane ke liye….. aapko aapki bahu dikhane…. Aur Najma ke liye bhabi…..

Najma – Sachi mein…

Asad – sach mein….abb chale……

           All the three were going inside…….. but Asad was not happy because of him his nikha got postponed to september and today is September 1st….. but even now he didn't accept Tanveer from his heart and without accepting he never wanted show her to his ammi and Najma….. because of their force to see her he planned this surprise……. Asad got a call from Mohan his secretary about some important work so he asked ammi and Najma to go to table no. 6…………

            When Najma and Dilshad reached there they has seen her from back……. When they reached there…….. their eye were wide open…… they couldn't believe their own eyes……. Najma face lit up with a wide smile and Dilshad was really happy her son……. The way she want her bahu…. Zoya is the same….

            When Zoya saw them…… she got up and hugged Dilshad and Najma….

Zoya – Aap dono yaha….. what a surprise…?

Dilshad – Hum nahi tumne surprise diya……

Zoya – Mein ne…..!!!!

Najma – Haa aapne Bhabi…..!!!

Zoya – Bhabi…..!!!!!! (Surprised)

Najma – Haa bhabi…. Uss din colg mein aap jab bhai se milete tab bhi aap dono nahi bataya….jab shopping mall mein mile the tab bhi nahi…… Kya natak kiya..

Dilshad – Shopping mall…!!!!!!! Kab….!!!!!

Najma – Pata hai mein aur Aisha shopping ke liye gaye the…..

Flash Back

Najma – Konsi shop mein chale……..?

Aisha – Ek minute yaha Zoya di ki friend ki shop hai…… woh aane wali hai……

          Same time Zoya reached there…….

Zoya – oh sorry I am late…… come on let's go…….

            They went to first floor…….. there is standing Asad speaking to someone in the phone…..

Najma – Sallam Walekum BJ…….

              Asad disconnecting call…….

Asad – Walekum salam Tamatar tum yaha…….!!!

Najma – Shopping karne aye hai….. aur aap BJ…??

Asad – Mein apne dost milne aya hoon…… But he said that he is not going to come…….

Aisha – Salam walekum Asad ji…..

Asad – walekum salam

Zoya – salam walekum……

                        Asad did not answer Zoya…..

Zoya (To herself) – Akdu kahika…… walekum slam toh bol sakta hai na…..

Asad (To herself) – Agar mein walekum salam bolunga usmein bhi ladayi ka bahana dundegi….. it's ok boldeta hoon…..

               Zoya got irritated…….

Asad – Wale…..

            Zoya interrupted……

Zoya – kehen ki zaroorat nahi hai…..

Najma – Aap dono phir se shuru mat hojayiye………. Pichle ek mahine se jab bhi mile the ladayi kiye bina gaye nahi…. Abb jaakar shopping kare BJ join us………

          Asad joined them……. They were selecting some suits for Najma, Aisha and then Zoya……. All went to trail rooms for trails and there out Asad is getting bored……. Aisha and Najma came out and went to other section in the same mall…... Zoya came out wearing her red salwaar and started searching Najma and Aisha for their opinion but they were not there…….

            Asad saw Zoya and got mesmerized by her beauty….. Zoya saw Asad staring at her and thought to ask him about this…..

Zoya (To herself) – poochu….!!!? …… pooch leti hoon…..

Zoya – Mr. Khan kaise lag rahi hoon…….

Asad – Beautiful……..

Asad (to himself) – Tum ye kya kar rahe ho….

Asad – Dress bahot beautiful hai….

                 Zoya went inside trail room to change her dress…..

Asad (to himself) – ajeeb ladki hai thanks tak nahi hai…..

Zoya (to herself) – ajeeb ladka hai compliment bhi teek tarah se nahi de sakta……

             Zoya came out wearing jeans and blue top…… and red salwaar in her hands… she gave a look to Asad which confused him…….. after that they left mall…….

Flash back ends…….

Dilshad – Accha….. !!!!

Najma – Hume laga ki mein aur Aisha busy the issiliye BJ ne unke help kiya……. Mujhe kya pata hum busy na bhi hote toh BJ he uski help karenge………. (Teasing Zoya)

Dilshad – Zoya….. mein bahot kush hoon…..mujhe tumhari jaisi bahu mili hai…..

Zoya – Phufi….actually

Najma – Bhabi….. aapne mujhe bhi nahi bataya……..

Zoya – mein tumhari bhabi nahi hoon….

Dilshad – haa abb kaisi banegi…… nikha ke baad banogi na……

Zoya – phufi please suniye………

Dilshad – Sun ne keliye kuch baki nahi hai….. ye lo meri tarah se ye kangan…. Ye pushtaini hai…. Nikha ke din pehna mat bulna…….

                   While Zoya was trying to explain…… Dilshad and Najma are in no mood to hear to her….. Dilshad with her own hands made her wear the kangan….. Zoya is completely confused…… she is almost wet with sweat in that cold weather…… She is unable to handle that situation when Asad reached there…….

Asad – Ammi……

                Dilshad came to him and hugged him……..

Dilshad – Mujhe bahu bahot pasand aayi….

Asad – Aap ne usse mill liya kaha hai woh………..

Najma – BJ abb toh natak band karo………. Yahi toh hai babhi……

                Najma pointing at confused Zoya……. When Zoya has seen Asad she is confused but realization strike her Tanveer is going to get married to Asad….. she felt like someone stabbed a sharp knife into her heart…. She is angry…….



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ooo no she know... that asad is getting married to tanveer..yuck
poor Zoya...

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