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Asya FF Meri Duniya updated Part 30 (Page 93) (Page 4)

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:03am | IP Logged
Hi... Here is part 3(b)

       Part 3 b

              Zoya suddenly banged into Asad and they rolled upside down on the ground... When they stopped Asad is lying on top her... They got up when Aisha reached there... Everyone around came there... Zoya was embarrassed and to break that she started...

Zoya - can't u see...? Why are you standing in between like a Romeo...

Asad - hello miss... I have to ask that question... Can't you see..? U came and banged into me... What is my fault...

Zoya - I was trying to catch a butterfly... What was you doing..? Can't you move aside...?

Asad - Miss. Titlee... It's not my fault...

          They started fighting and then Aisha and Najma interrupted them...

Najma - BJ she is my friend Aisha's didi... Zoya Fatoouqi... and Zoya he is my BJ I mean Bhai Jaan... Asad... Asad Ahmed Khan...

Aisha - hai... I am Aisha...

Asad - hai I am Asad... and you Miss. Titlee Faroouqi... Next time se dekh kar chalna seeko...

Zoya - Mujhe advice dene se pehle kudh ko dekho... Raaste ke beech mein kada rehna band kardo Mr. Romeo Ahmed Khan...

            Before they start arguing Asad got a call so he left from there... Zoya gave a serious look at him and came back to her normal mood..

Zoya - Happy birthday Najma...

        She took gift from Aisha's hand and gave that to her...

Zoya - here is your gift... I heard from Aisha you wanted this from so many days... So I thought of gifting you this...

              Najma opened the gift and saw the same book gifted by her brother...

Najma - Thanks... But you know what BJ gifted me same book...

            Zoya with a normal smile...

Zoya - oh...

Aisha - di I will go to Najma's house for dinner...

Zoya - ok...

               Najma invited Zoya too... But she escaped by saying that she have some work so only Aisha will come and after there conversation Asad came there...

Asad - Tamatar abb chale...

Najma - ha BJ...

             Asad gave a dreadly look to Zoya and she reflected the same and four of them dispersed from there...

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Nice update... the fight begin..ROFL

going to be very interesting...
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nice.but its too small.
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Part 4

 

            Zoya dropped Aisha at home and became sad that she couldn't go to railway station to receive them but thanks to Allah miyya train got delayed for half an hour so she reached railway station when train pulled onto the platform... Asim came out with the luggage from AC coach and then Gaffur stepped out following him. Abdul syed her uncle and Asma Syed followed them with other two bags...

 

            They didn't see her in the crowd also didn't expect her... Coz Gaffur gave instructions to her not to come and send driver... But Zoya is Zoya... She came from back and shouted...

 

Zoya – salam walekum abbu...

 

             Everyone got startled except Gaffur... Coz he knew her... After all the instructions also she will definetly come to receive them... He said by giving a side hug...

 

Gaffur - I know that you will come... Because whenever we come back from Ajmer you will be come to receive us...

 

Asim - Hey moti mere bina bore hogayi na...

 

Zoya - chupkar... Kitni baar kaha hai... Mujhe moti matt bula... Mein moti nahi hoon...

 

Asim - abh nahi ho... But pehle thi...

 

           Zoya came to him but he went and hid behind Gaffur... After so many trials she couldn't catch him...

 

Asim - tum mujhe kabhi nahi parkad paogi

 

Zoya - dekhona khala...

 

Asma - Asim...!!!!

 

Asim – kya ammi...!

 

Abdul - abb ghar chalke aap dono ladna... Chale...

 

            They all left from railway station and reached home…...

 

Zoya – Aisha Abbu, Khala aur Khalu ko pani dena….. Abbu mujhe urgent kaam hai… mein tayyar hokar jati hoon… teekhe….. Khala khana tayaar hai… aap sab khana khalijiye…. Aisha ko mein Dilshad phufi ke ghar chod deta hoon… Aaj Najma ki janam din hai…. Teekh hai na Khalu…?

 

Asim – jab tumne tair kar diya toh…pooch kyu rahi ho...?

 

Zoya – mein pooch rahi hoon…bata nahi rahi hoon… dekhona khalu..!!!

 

Abdul – Asim…..!!! ….teekhe usse drop kardo….

 

         Aisha came with some glasses of water…..

 

Zoya – Aisha jaldi karo…. Tayar hoja… mein bhi jaakar tayaar hojati hoon…

 

Asim – toh jaaona….

 

Zoya – haa jaarahi hoon…..

 

               Zoya went into room and got ready in her pink embroidery salwaar….. she came out wearing some heavy earrings and duppata hanging on right shoulder…… Aisha wore a sweet pink salwaar….

 

Zoya – Aisha Tayyar hogayi…

 

Aisha - haan baji...

 

Zoya – Abbu, Khala, Khalu…hum jaa rahe hai.

 

Asma – Jaldi aajana……

 

Zoya – teekh hai khala

 

Aisha – teekh hai ammi...

 

             They reached Dilshad's house with in 30 minutes...

 

Zoya – Asim aake pick up karlega…..usse call kar dena...

 

Aisha - haan baji... Abb aap kaha jarahe hai...?

 

Zoya - abhi mein orphanage jaungi aur waha se kaam…...

 

Aisha - kuch nahi... aise hi pooch rahi thi... Bye

 

              Zoya said bye and left from there to orphanage... She donated Rs. 50000 and after meeting them she let from there after meeting everyone...

 

           Whenever Zoya go to ashram they have fun there... She goes there one's in a week... She play with kids there and talk to other old people who came here because there children are not taking care... She also meet those unprevilized girls and try's to keep everyone happy…..that is her nature... They all live like a family... From there she went to attend nikha...

 

Jia - hi Zoya...

 

Zoya - Sab teekh taak chal raha hai na...

 

Jia - Sab teekh taak chal raha hai. Tu tension matt le... Jaakar Suhana se mill... Woh pooch rahiti...

 

Zoaya - teekhe but pehle jaakar mein cattering dekhleta hoon...

 

Jia - Mein dekhleta hoon... Tum jaakar mill...

 

Zoya - ok teekh hai...

 

           Zoya went to meet Suhana who is in bridal room...

 

Zoya - hi Suhana... Happy wedding...

 

Suhana - thank you...

 

         They started all girly talks and all other started teasing Suhana...

 

Suhana - haa... Mein lucky hoon... I got best pati... Aur tu bata Zoya... Tumhe kaisa pati chahiye?

 

         Zoya got startled and replied

 

Zoya - mujhe...?  

 

          After a pause...

 

Zoya - mujhe Isa pati chahiye jo meri aasu tez barish mein bhi pehchaan jaye...

 

         She explained her dream prince in one sentence... And she continued...

 

Zoya - he should love my family and should respect them... He should support me in all the ways...

 

       She stopped there and started blushing and everyone started teasing her... at that time one random girl came there...

 

Girl - Zoya...?

 

Zoya - yeah it's me...

 

Girl - aapko Salim ji bulla rahe hai...

 

Zoya - teekhe aap chaliye... Mein aati hoon...

 

          Zoya bid good bye to Suhana and she left from there... When Zoya reached downstairs Salim was talking to Abbas...

 

Salim - haa Zoya... Come here...

 

Zoya - yes sir... Did u call me...? Is everything alright...?

 

Salim - yeah everything is fine... You have done a great job... Meet Mr. Abbas Nasir...

 

Zoya – salam walekum sir…..I am Zoya Farooqi...

 

Abbas  - it's pleasure meeting you...

 

Zoya - same here sir...

 

Abbas  - your company has done a great job... Actually my daughter's wedding is fixed... It is in August endings... I would like to give this wedding contract to your company...

 

Zoya - of course sir... We will definitely meet up 2marow and discuss about this...

 

Abbas - is it ok at 10:00...

 

Zoya - yeah sure... But can you please kindly excuse me...

 

Abbas - yeah sure...

 

Zoya (to Salim) - sir now I will leave... jia will take care of all these...

 

Salim - ok...

 

              Zoya took a leave from there... Sudarshan and Sushanth continued there discussion...

 

             ***********************

 

                 After dropping Najma, Asad went back to his office and from there he went to Khan Mansion..

 

Asad - Baba... Paani...

 

Bashir Baba - laya beta...

 

            Baba brought water and gave it to Asad…...

 

Asad - thanks baba...

 

Bashir baba - Khana laga doon...

 

Asad - nahi baba... Dood dedijiye... abbu ne khana kaya...? Davayi liye...?

 

Bashir Baba - haan... Mein dood room mein bejdunga... 

 

Asad - teekhe...

 

           Asad left from there and went to his father's room... He was not there... So he went to terrace...

 

Asad - abbu...?

 

        Rashid was sitting on his favourite chair in his favourite place…... that is the place where Dilshad and he used to spend time….. he goes and sit there alone whenever he is sad

 

Rashid - ha Asad... Come...?

 

Asad - aap ye kya Kar rahe hai...?

 

Rashid - party... Celebrations... Meri beti ki birthday hai...

 

        He got up from his seat and started walking...

 

Rashid - Pata hai woh jab 10 saal ki thi usse har birthday pe ek doll diya karta tha... Mein aaj wish bhi nahi kar paya...

 

       He slipped with tears in his eyes and Asad supported him...

 

Asad - abbu sambhaliye...

 

Rashid – tumhari ammi mujhe chod ke chali gayi... Tum mujhe nahi chodogi na...? You will be there with me right always to support me like this...?

 

          Asad took him to his room and placed him on the bed and removed his shoes and waited there till he fall asleep and later left from there... Before going out of the room he looked at his father and left...

 

           Asad in his room standing near window, staring at the stars and thinking...

 

          Sab kehte hai jodiya baghwaan banata hai... Toh Phir kyu kuch jodiya judai ki gum ka shikar bante hai... Kya baghwaan se bhi galatiya hoskta hai...? 

 

           Bashir baba interrupted his thoughts by saying... Beta dood..?

 

Asad - haa baba waha rakh dijiye...

 

Bashir baba - kya hua beta... Koyi koyi si lagrahe ho..?

 

Asad - kuch nahi baba... abbu ko dekha aapne... Woh ammi ko chahte hai... Phir bhi door rehte hai... Jab bhi mein ammi ke pass jata hoon... Woh abbu ke baare poochte hai... Toh kyu hai ye doori...

 

Baba - ek galatfaimi ki wajah se ye door hogaye... Ego ki wajahse abb tak nahi mill paye... Zyada socho matt... dood peeke soja...

 

          Bashir baba left from there leaving Asad in thoughts...

 

                                        ********************

 

Next Day Morning : Farooqi Villa

                  In the kitchen…… Khala is preparing breakfast…… Zoya went to kitchen…

Zoya – Good morning Khala…… kya bana rahe ho…?

Asma (Khala) – kheer bana rahi hoon…. Tumhe bahot pasand hai na….

Zoya – thanks khala….. pata hai mein ne aapke haat ka khana bahot miss kiya hai…

Asma – sach mein….?

Zoya – sach mein…. Aapko pata hai na…. ammi ke baad mujhe aapke bana hua khana bahot pasand hai……

                      In the meantime Asim entered kitchen….

Asim – yaha flood aane wala hai kya….?

Zoya – kya….?

Asim – kya….? Kyaa….?

Zoya – Kya keh rahi ho…..?

Asim – Actually emotional scene ke baad…. Rona dona common hai na….

Zoya – shutup…… mein kabhi roti nahi hoon….

Asim – accha……!!!!

Zoya – haa…..

             Asma interrupted…….

Asma – aap dono phir se shuru hogaye….. Asim jaakar tayaar hoja...tumhe Aisha ko drop karna hai…..

         Asim went to get ready… Zoya helped her khala in the kitchen….. There breakfast was quite….. because Zoya left early……. She has some work in the office….. After breakfast Asim went to drop Aisha…..

Aisha – Bye Bhai jaan……

            In the meantime Najma reached there……

Najma – hai Aisha……

Aisha – hai Najma…..

Najma (In low voice) – hai Asim

Asim – hai tama….

            Najma widened her eyes….. looking at him and showing Aisha standing beside her….. then Asim in stern voice

Asim – hai Najma…..

             Najma smiled at him…. Aisha was smirking….. She knows what is happening between them… but they don't know what is happening between them…… they feel attraction between them… but they never acknowledged each other….. they were staring at eachother……

Aisha – ahem..ahem… Najma mein abhi ati hoon…. Mujhe Ruby se kuch kaam hai……

Najma – chal mein bhi aati nahi….

Aisha – Nahi mein jaati hoon…… tum aaja na….

            Aisha left there giggling……. After Aisha left Asim took one gift packet from back seat of the car…..

Asim – Tamatar… this is for you… yesterday was your birthday… I couldn't gift you yesterday……….

Najma – Thank you….. mein abhi jaati hoon… late ho rahi hai…..

Asim – bye……

               Najma left from there… Asim was staring at her till she got inside the building….. After that Asim left from there…

                                   *****************************

                I think part 4 is little boring... sorry for that... Unhappy ... i promise that i will make part 5 some what interesting... i know this part have no Asya scenes... part 5 will be about them...Smile ... all suggestions and criticism are invited

Note : hi frnds... I will not be able to update everyday... because i will be out of station... if time allows me and if i can update... i will 100% try to update... before that by today evening i will update part 5... 



Edited by VindhyaMounika - 23 July 2013 at 5:13am

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