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Part 19

               As the first rays of the sun paint the Bhopal skies in a golden hue, Zoya woke up stretching her hands and tightly shutting her eyes due to the rays peeping inside her room making her way inbetween the curtains and falling straight on her eyes….. Zoya's face is looking bright due to those first rays in the morning…… Curtains rose high due to breeze….. Zoya kept her hand to stop those rays but removed her hand to feel morning breeze…….

Zoya – Aaj ka subha kitni naya lag raha hai….. issa lag raha hai ki sabb kuch accha hone wala hai……..

                Zoya got down her bed smiling and went to fresh up…….

Dinning Table:

               Asad was reading his daily newspaper and drinking his favorite black coffee without sugar…… Dilshad was preparing breakfast for everyone….. Zoya came there in her yellow top and blue jeans……

Zoya – Good morning Mr. Khan….!!!

              She found Dilshad working in the kitchen….

Zoya – Phupi…!!! Aap kitchen mein kaam kar rahe hai….???!!! Aapki tabiyat karaab hai na…..

               She went and held Phupi's hand to bring her out of the kitchen….. Dilshad kept her hand on her's and said……….

Dilshad – Zoya..!!! Zoya..!!! mein teekh hoon…..

Zoya – Mr. Khan aap phupi ko kaam karne de rahe hai… kaise bete hai aap….??

Asad – mein ne ammi ko kaha ki…..

              Dilshad interrupted by saying….

Dilshad – usne kaha par mein abhi teekh hoon….. tum jaakar betja mein toast banake leati hoon…….

Zoya – mein nahi aap jayiye mein banake lati hoon… jayiye jayiye…..

         Dilshad came and sat at the dinning table with Asad….. Zoya came there with toast…….

Zoya – Arz kiya hai….

Jab zindagi hai pareshaniyo se roast….

Jab Zindagi hai pareshaniyo se roast…..

Tabb khayi Zoya se banaya gaya pyaari toast……..

Shukriya..!!! Shukriya….!!

Asad – Miss. Farooqi…. Aap ye sab bakwaas kyu karte rehte hai….??!!

Zoya – ye bakwaas nahi hai Mr. Khan isse shayari nahi kehte hai….. aap nahi samjhenge….

Dilshad – Aap dono phir se shuru matt hoajayiye….??? Zoya tum jaakar meri kamre se dawaii lekar aaja beta….

                Zoya went to Dilshad's room… there are so many medicines… she took medicines cover and while going she was hit by corner table…. Medicines cover got slipped from her hand and fallen into dustbin….. she bent down and picked that cover but she got struck by some other tablet silver wrapper….. she picked it and when she read she was shocked to read that label…….

                 She ran to dinning table where Asad and Dilshad were sitting…..

Zoya – Mr. Khan kal phupi ki tabiyat tablet reaction se hui hai par kisi ne phupi ka tablets badal diya hai….

Asad- Aap yeh kya keh rahe hai Miss. Farooqi…..???!!!!

Zoya – Yeh dekhiye…. Prescription mein toh ye medicine nahi hai……..

Asad – Ammi apne dekh kar dawai nahi li…..

Dilshad – Mein tho apni dawaii pehle table pe rakh diya tha aur remainder rakhke so gayi thi… jab remainder aya tho mein jo table mein tha woh tablets kha li thi…..

Zoya – tho dawaii kaise change hogayi…..??!!!

Asad – Mein bi wahi soch raha hoon….??!!!

Dilshad – Aap dono kuch zyada nahi soch rahe hai…..???!!! neend ki wajaha se mein ne galat dawaii leliya hoga… aap dono zyada matt socho…..                                 

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                Bashir entered Tanveer's room with a tray after knock on her door…..

Tanveer (Sarcastically) – kya baat hai aaj mujhe itni tawaja mil rahi hai…. aaj itna kya khass hai..??!!

Bashir – Mujhe kal ke baare mein poochna tha….??

Tanveer – Kall kal kya hua tha….???!!!

Bashir (Desperately) – Natak matt karo Tanveer….!!! Kya hua hai batao… kal raat poochne ka mauka nahi milla… uss Rashid ki wajah se…. batao kya hua tha kall….

Tanveer – wahi hua jo hona chahiye aur woh bhi hua jo nahi hona chahiye……

Bashir – seedhe – seedhe batao…..

Tanveer – Dilshad bach gayi hai Zoya ki wajah se…..

Bashir – Kya..??!!! ye ladki mujhe chain se jeene nahi degi…..

FlashBack Starts

                  Asad gave drink to Tanveer…… Tanveer wantedly spilled that drink on her dress…..

Asad – I am sorry….

Tanveer – This is not you mistake…. Can I use washroom to clean this….

Asad – Yeah sure….

             Asad guided her way to guest room which is on upstairs….. Zoya's luggage is in the other guest room so he guided her upstairs….

Tanveer – Aap yahi rahiye….. I will find my way…..

               Asad stayed back and Tanveer went upstairs….. Tanveer first entered Dilshad's room and saw her sleeping peacefully…. She changed her tablets and came back… she went to washroom and washed the mark…. Tanveer came back downstairs and occupied her seat…… Tanveer started talking to Asad when Zoya came there…… Luck was her side for sometime due to which so much drama happened according to her wish….  After Tanveer's leave Asad realized that blaming Zoya is his mistake and said sorry every thing came to normal……. Tanveer is ignorant of fact that Asad and Zoya were back to normal so she is enjoying her achievement…..

Flashback Ends

            Bashir left from there… Tanveer stood there thinking……

Tanveer – Asad tho abb Zoya se baat karna bhi nahi chahega…… baat karna chodo chehra bhi dekhna nahi chahega……

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                Asad was in his room standing near window drowned in his thoughts….. Asad was in a confusion wether yesterday's incident is an accident or planned…… Zoya banged into Asad's room….. Asad jerked out of his thoughts…..

Asad – Miss. Farooqi aapko koi tameez nahi hai….??!!! kisi ki room mein ane se pehle knock karna chahiye….

Zoya – Knock karne ke liye darwaaza locked honi chahiye…. Anyway mein aapse ladne nahi aaya hoon… yeh lijiye aapka phone aapne dinning table par chod diya hai……

               Asad took phone from Zoya and kept it on his side table…. Zoya saw Asad's worried face…..

Zoya – Mujhe pata hai Mr. Khan aap Phupi ke liye tensed hai… par sochiye phupi shayad sahi keh rahi hai…. hum shayad zyada soch rahe hai…. Well Mr. Khan issi baat pe ek sher arz hai……

Tadapti hui mitti ne kaha barish se chule zara

Tadapti hui mitti ne kaha barish se chule zara

Hum toh kehte hai tension chodo aur Zindagi ko jee le zara…..

Asad (Irritated) – Aaj aapko office nahi hai kya..??!!!

Zoya – Nahi…. Ye baat mein aapse bhi poch sakta hoon..??!!

Asad – Mein ghar se kaam kar raha hoon…. appke tarah kisi ki room mein ghuss kar wahiyaad shayari nahi suna raha hoon…..

Zoya – Aap shayari ke baare mein baat hi matt kijiye…. Aapko taste hi nahi hai Mr. Khan….. huh..!!!

               Zoya started moving looking at Asad….. Before she could acknowledge she was hit by wall…..

Zoya – Ouch..!!!

                  Zoya held her head with her hands….. Asad ran to her and held her…..

Asad (Worried) – Aap teekh toh hai na Miss. Farooqi…..???!!!

                 Asad and Zoya were stood there in a half hug position…… his right hand on her shoulders and other hand on her head where she got the hurt….. Her back is touching his chest…. Zoya turned and now she is facing him….. she got lost in his deep black eyes…..Asad could see attraction in her eyes which he is experiencing…… They were disturbed by Dilshad….

Dilshad – Zoya…!!! Zoya..!!!

                  Asad and Zoya got separated hearing her voice….

Dilshad – Zoya chalo humein shopping jana hai… yaad hai na….!!??

Zoya – Ha phupi mein abhi aati hoon…..

                 Dilshad left from there…….

Zoya – Mr. Khan aap humare saath ayenge na….

Asad (jerked) – Huh… nahi mein nahi aaraha hoon…..

                  Zoya left from there with a fallen expression spread on her face……. Asad stood there like he was stuck to clay……

Asad (To herself) – Mein jaanta hoon Miss. Farooqi jo kichaaw mein mehsoos kar raha hoon aap bhi woh mehsoos kar rahe hai….. par hum ek doosre ke liye sahi nahi hai……..

                         Asad stood there thinking that he will not go to shopping at any cost…..

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NewYork:  

Abdul – Chaliye sabb…. hum late hojayenge…

Anwar – late nahi honge Abdul Miyya…. Aap phikaar matt kijiye hum time pe pohanch jayenge………

                       Gaffur came out with his luggage and joined Anwar and Abdul…..  Humeira is in her room she is wearing her handbag…..

Humeira (To herself) – Mein apni zindagi ki paanch saal yahi gujara hai….. Zindagi ki kitne khushi aur ghum ki yaadein bhare hai iss kamre mein….. pata nahi kab waapas aaungi…..

                  Asam and Zeenat interrupted her thoughts……

Zeenat – Humeria chalo… we are getting late……

                Asma took her luggage and started moving and followed by Zeenat and Humeira…….. They all assembled in the hall with there luggages and left to airport…….

               Anwar, Gaffur and Anwar's friend are in one car with luggage….. Asma, Zeenat, Humeira and Abdul are in other car drove by respective drivers….. Anwar's car was moving infront followed by Zeenat's car…. Suddenly Zeenat saw that Anwar's car came to halt and Anwar was speaking to someone with the window open….. Zeenat peeped out to see who it is…

Zeenat – Ayaan…!!!

Humeira – Ayaanji….!!! Yaha…!!!

                  Zeenat saw that Ayaan got into there car and car started moving followed by there car……

Zeenat Messaged Anwar:

Kya hua…??!! Ayaan yaha…!!!???

Anwar replied:

Woh India jaa raha hai… usse airport jaana hai par koi taxi nahi mil raha hai….. issi liye humne lift diya hai….

Zeenat replied:

Oh….. ok….

Asma – Kya hua…!!!??

Zeenat – kuch nahi…. Ayaan ko taxi nahi mill raha tha issi liye Anwar ne lift offer kiya tha…..

                 Humeira remembered that Ayaan said that he is leaving to India but she never thought that Ayaan lives in Bhopal and he will be travelling with them……

Anwar's Car:

Anwar – Ayaan tum bhi Bhopal mein rehte ho….???!!!

Ayaan – ha…!!!

Gaffur – Bhopal mein kaha rehte hai….???!!!

Ayaan – Moti nagar uncle…. Khan Mansion humari ghar hai…..

Gaffur – Khan Mansion…???!!! Tum Dilshad ke bete ho….???!!!

Ayaan – ha uncle… aap unhe jaante hai….??!!!

Gaffur – woh toh meri sagi behan jaisi hai…… humne tumhara baare mein suna hai… pehli baar dekh raha hoon……

                   They reached airport and they got down….. They entered airport with there luggage……  After all the formalities and security check they all got settled in the given gate no. …

Anwar – Toh Ayaan Miyya… hum itne saal se NewYork mein hai kudh ki rishtedaar se toh mile nahi….

Zeenat – Rishtedaar….!!!???

Anwar – Ha rishtedaar… Ayaan humari Dilshadji ki bete hai……

Zeenat – Ayaan Dilshad Phupi ka beta hai….. seriously look at the destiny itne saal NewYork mein hai India jaate samai mil rahe hai…..

Ayaan – Don't worry hum India mein bhi aapko company denge……..

                   All smiled…. After sometime Ayaan was getting bored as everyone are in there own work….. Humeira is also busy listening music…..

Ayaan – mein thoda ghoom ke ata hoon…. koi chalenge mere saath….

                 Gaffur and Abdul were busy in there talks so they said that they don't want to come….. Anwar was doing some important work in his laptop so he was also not ready to go with him….

Ayaan – Zeenatji, Asmaji apko shopping nahi karni hai… Airport ki shops mein toh exclusive items hote hai….. NewYork airport toh itni badi hai ki aapko atleast window shopping karke sab kuch dekhni chahiye……..

Asma – Ayaan toh sahi keh raha hai…. Zeenat hum jaakar shopping karte hai yeh logh toh apne kaam mein busy hai….. hum yaha betke bore hojayenge…….

Zeenat – teekhe chalo…….

                 Asma and Zeenat got up from there seats and wore there handbags…….. Humeira was still sitting listening to songs…….

Ayaan – Humeira aap nahi aayenge….

Humeira – aake mein kya Karungi…. Mein toh kuch dekh nahi sakti hoon…. aap jaakar enjoy kijiye………

Zeenat and Asma – Chalo na Humeira…!!!

Ayaan – Isse kaise chaliye mein aapko sab kuch dikha tha hoon….. chaliye chaliye……

               Humeira got up from her seat…… They all started moving when they saw one shop…… Zeenat and Asma entered that shop and started checking everything…. Humeira is getting bored…...

Ayaan – Aap bore ho rahe hai na…. mein bhi….

                 Humeira nodded……..

Ayaan – Ek kaam karte hai…... hum airport ghoom ke aate hai….

Humeira – Aap mere saath ghoomenge toh aur bhi bore hojayenge……. Mein yahi rehti hoon aap jayiye…….

Ayaan – isse kaise… mein keh rahi hoon na…. mere saath chalke dekhiye aapko yeh din humesha yaad rakhenge……..

              Ayaan caught Humeira's hand to drag her with him….. when they came out of the shop Ayaan realized what he was doing and Humeira is actually feeling embarrassed at his act…. He left her hand…. They started walking….

Ayaan – Chaliye mein yaha ki haal chaal batati hoon…. aapko radio pasand hai ya cricket commentary……

Humeira – Kyu..???!!!

Ayaan – batayiye toh sahi….

Humeira – Radio….!!!

Ayaan (Speaking fast like a RJ) – Toh aap taiyaar hojayiye RJ Ayaan ke saath latest khabre sunne keliye…… Abb hum cross kar rahe Gate no. 13 jo humari right mein hai jaha logh board kar rahe hai….. board toh kar rahe hai par mujhe BOARD kahi dikhayi nahi dde raha hai…….

                   Humeira started laughing like a child……

Ayaan – Aur abb hum pahonch gaye hai electronic vendor ke pass… koi paisa dala hai par unhe unki item nahi mili hai… unke chehre se unki baat mere zubaan se "Mere paisa kha ke tum kya karega… hazam bhi nahi kar payegi bahar nikaal mera paisa……"

                     Humeira burst out laughing at his non-senseble but silly talks…..

Humeira – Ayaanji bass kijiye…. Hass hass ke meri halat karaab ho rahi hai…….

                     At the same time her phone rang….. it's phupi……

Humeira – Ayaanji Phupi ka phone hai….. shayad woh logh humein doond rahe hai……

Ayaan – Aapko kaise pata chala ki yeh Zeenatji ka phone hai……???!!!

Humeira – Kyun ki meri mobile mein har ek insaan ka alag ring tone hoti hai aur yah Aapi ki hai…. abb chale……

               Ayaan and Humeira went to Zeenat and Asama……

Asma – Kaha chalegaye aap dono.. abb chale….

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Graveyard:

                 A man kneeld down before two graves with a white cap on his head….. tears pourdown his eyes…. Graves was made with granite and on one grave Zubina Siddiqui and on the other Farooqi Siddiqui's name was carved beautifully…….

Bashir – Mein tumhe aur humari pyaari beti ko akhri baar bhi dekh nahi paya….. yeh sab kaise hogaya…. Aap dono mujhse iss bhari duniya mein akhele chodke chale gaye……. Mein ne aap dono ko kuch dino ke liye chod kar NewYork gaya tha par dono mujhe zindagi bhar ke liye akhle chodkar India se chale gaye…..

                   He prayed infront of two graves and left from there with teary eyes……..

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Car:

                Zoya was sitting in the front seat and Dilshad at the back….. Zoya's face is lightened with a wide smile…. She looked at driving seat where Asad is driving with a stern face…..

Zoya – Phupi insaan ko khudki decision mein addi rehna chahiyena…. Hain na Mr. Khan…??!!!

                        Mr. Khan gave her a stern look…..

Zoya – Phupi agar insaan confused rahe unska wajah kya ho sakta hai…….???!!!

Dilshad – Ek wajah toh woh pyaar mein abhi abhi pada hai……

                         Zoya and Asad looked at eachother…. Some unknown feeling from inside is trying to jump out through there eyes…… They didn't understand what they are feeling now….. Is that an agreeing feeling with Dilshad's opinion…??!!! … or it is an embarrassment impling that they didn't understand but she understood or embarrassment saying that Dilshad's opinion is not true….

Dilshad – Doosra ki woh pagal hai……

                     Zoya and Asad coming out of thoughts….. Zoya with a jerked and gummy smile……..

Zoya – Wahi toh phupi woh insaan pagal he hai……

                  Asad gave her an irritated and angry smile…. By that time they reached shopping mall….. Dilshad got down….. Dilshad saw one of her friend so she went first to meet her leaving Asad and Zoya alone….. Zoya unfastened her seatbelt when she is going to leave Asad held her hand…..

Zoya – Aap yeh kya kar rahe hai Mr. Khan…??!!!

Asad – Aap yeh kya bole jaa rahe the….??!!!

Zoya – Mein ne kya kaha….???!!!

Asad – Mein pagal hoon…??!!!

Zoya – Toh apne decision mein aap adde nahi rehte….??!!!

Asad – issa kuch nahi hai Miss. Farooqi…..

Zoya – Toh aap ye batayiye aapne kaha aap nahi aanewale hai… toh kyu aaye hai….???!!!

Asad – woh…. Actually….

Zoya – Kya Mr. Khan…??!!!!

Asad – Kyun ki mein apni ammi ko musibat ke saath nahi bej sakta tha……

                   Asad got down car….. Zoya sitting there shocked….

Zoya – So mean Mr. Khan…

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Precap – Asya moments….. Humeira and Ayaan's journey….. NewYork people in India…..

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