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Asya FF Meri Duniya updated Part 30 (Page 93) (Page 23)

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Part 15

Udaipur :

             Before day Asad was busy with his meeting and office work….. But today he is free for his friend's wedding…… From morning he is searching her but couldn't find Zoya any where……. On the other side Zoya was busy with the preperations…… she is busy with all the wedding preperations…… even being a muslim she know all the rituals of Hindu marriage...  Suddenly Asad saw Zoya instructing the decoration……. She is wearing jeans and blue top…… Zoya felt someone is watching her……. But she didn't feel uncomfortable…… her heartbeat started racing…… Asad went to Zoya…… he was standing near to Zoya…..  Zoya turned towards him………. She took breath….

Zoya – Mujhe abhi aapse ladna nahi hai……..

Asad – Mujhe bhi nahi ladna hai…….. mujhe kuch poochna hai…….

               Asad could sense that something is wrong with her…….. smile playing on her lips is not smile from her heart…..

Zoya – poochiye……

Asad – woh….. ye hai ki…..

           Jia came and interrupted them……..

Jia – Jaldi chalo… Parvana ki bridal suite mein kuch problem hogayi hai………..

              Jia pulled Zoya from there…… Asad tried to stop them but didn't….

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Tanveer's House :

                  Tanveer sitting on her favourite side of the couch with laptop on her lap….. her mobile is connected with her laptop through a cable….. There is an evil smile on her face……. She is saving a video from her mobile in her laptop…… There came Abbas talking to some one on phone, he disconnected call and sat beside Tanveer………

Abbas – Tumne mujhe yaha kyu bhulaya……..

Tanveer – Abbu mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai……….

Abbas – kya…???

Tanveer – Ye nikha jald se jald hojana chahiye….. humare liye aur humari company ke liye yahi teekh rahega…… Tanveer Constructions ke liye yahi sahi hoga……

Abbas – par humari Tanveer Designers…..

Tanveer – woh kabki aag mein jal kar raak hogayi hai….. uske baare mein sochna samai barbaad karne ka samaan hai……..

Abbas – par humein jiss jiss ko paise interest ke saath dena hai unlogonka kya kare…… Agar ye baath Rashid ko pata chala toh company merging rokh dega……

Tanveer – waha tak nahi jayega abbu…. Bharosa rakhiye….

                         Abbas sensed that Tanveer has some plan which is visible on her face through a evil smile…..

Abbas – Plan kya hai….??

                   Tanveer explained her plan to Abbas……. Tanveer gave a side hug to her

Abbas – Tum toh apni ammi pe gayi ho…….

               Tanveer gave a half smile………

Tanveer – Apne kabhi mujhe ammi ko kyu nahi dikhaya mujhe unki naam tak nahi pata….. apne kaha samai anepe batayenge par who samai kab aayega…..

Abbas – Woh samai jaldi aayega……….

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NewYork :

               It took them half an hour to reach their home from airport……. After reaching home Gaffur, Abdul and Asma went to respective rooms as guided by Anwar…… Zeenat went to kitchen to cook dinner…… Vaishali reached there………. Vaishali so excitedly in a loud voice…….

Vaishali – Zeenat di…… Humeira……..

                     Zeenat wearing an apron came out of the kitchen…….

Zeenat – vaishali..…..!!!!

Vaishali (loudly) – hai di…..

Zeenat – dheere…. Dheere…. Ghar mein mehmaan hai…..

Vaishali – Accha di…. Mein ne Humeira ko kaha 6 baje party hai…. Saade che baj gaya hai……

Zeenat – uske abbu aaye hai…. Issi liye…

Vaishali – teekhe abb chuke hai na… aur India jaane ke baad kab milenge pata nahi…. Please di mein leke jaakar jaungi aur mein hi drop Karungi…. SAFELY… promise….

Zennat (Smile) – usse pooch agar usse manjoor hai toh mujhe koi problem nahi hai…….

               Vaishali went to Humeira's room….. Humeira is cleaning her books shelf….. because she have to pack everything…… vaishali came there slowly tip-toe to scare her but Humeira found out that Vaishali is in her room her..…….

Humeira – Hai vaishali…..

               Vaishali disappointed just like a child……..

Vaishali (childishly) – tume humesha kaisa pata chaljata hai……

Humeira – kyun ki mein tumhari dost hoon…..

           Vaishali and Humeira had a happy laugh…. Vaishali is one and only best friend for Humeira….. she supported Humeira a lot…….

Vaishali – Abb chale….

Humeira – kaha…….??

                        Vaishali took books from Humeira's hands and kept them aside……

Vaishali – come on Humeira aaj party hai…. Yaad hai na…. chalo abb tayar hojao…...

Humeira – nahi… aaj hi abbu aye hai…. Mein nahi aapaungi….

Vaishali – koi bahana nahi chalega…. Chalo na please….

             At the same time Zeenat entered with a tray and offered Vaishali juice…. Vaishali took a sip and looked at Zeenat for help….. Zeenat smiled and went to Humeira….. she placed her hand on her shoulder…….

Zeenat – chale jao na….. chale jane ke baad aap sab kab milenge kisi ko pata nahi hai…

Vaishali – please….

Humeira – par abbu aaj hi toh aaye hai…..

Zeenat – mein hoon na tum chale jaana…..

                 Humeira wore a white and pink shaded salwaar suite and got ready……. Vaishali was waiting for her downstairs…….

Vaishali – Already saath bajgaye hai….. ek ghanta late hai……

Zeenat – don't worry…..

                     Humeira came there wearing her hand bag on her right hand and pulling it up to her shoulder…….

Zeenat – ese nahi hand bag ise pehnthe hai……..

                  Zeenat pulled the hand bang down from her shoulders to her arms…..

Vaishali – Abb chale….

             Vaishali and Humeira bid good bye to Zeenat and left……….. Vaishali and Humeira reached there in fifteen minutes….. Rohit was waiting for them in on the otherside of th parking area…… vaishali saw him and got down the car and ran to hug Rohit….. She forgot about Humeira….. Humeira strted moving her hand on the door to open it….. At last she opened it and came out slowly when she was going to cross the way a car came there…… he has blown the horn with that Humeira got confused and stood there……. Person in that car applied breaks but she was slightly hit by that car and fell down……

                 Vaishali and Rohit broke there hug and shocked to see that incident….. Vaishali realized that it is her mistake that she forgot about her for a moment….. They ran to her and that person inside car got down and he is Ayaan……. Ayaan is surprised to see Humeira there and he is also worried about her…… Humeira got up rubbing her elbow with the help of Vaishali…..

Ayaan – Aap teekh hona Humeira…..

Humeira – Ha mein teekh hoon Ayaanji…..

Rohit – kya Ayaan dekhe nahi chala sakta…..

                     Vaishali is confused how come Humeira know Ayaan…….

Vaishali – Wait a minute aap dono ek dusre ko jaante hai…..

Humeira – yeh humein shopping mall mein mila tha…….

Rohit – ok abb andar chale…….

               They all started moving this time Humeira took out her stick from her bag…. She opened that folded stick and with that she started walking…… Ayaan is really surprised to look that…… Ayaan asked Rohit about Humeira….

Rohit – she is blind….

              Ayaan is shocked to hear this….. Rohit went inside ans Ayaan parked his car…..

Ayaan (To himself) – Humeira is blind…. Par usse dekh kar toh nahi lagti….. phir ussne mujhe pehchaan kaise liya…..

                     Ayaan went inside…. Humeira is sitting on couch there and getting bored which is visible on her face….. Vaishali was there but Humeira forced her to go and meet everyone….. Humeira don't want her to sit only with her and miss that enjoyment…. But for every five minutes she is coming to check her wether she is alright or not….. Ayaan came to Humeira…..

Humeira (smile) – Hi Ayaanji…..

Ayaan (Shock) – Hi Humeira……

              Ayaan sat there and he was silent for sometime……

Ayaan (with blank face) – Kya mein aapse kuch pooch sakti hoon….??

Humeira – haan poochiye….

Ayaan – Aapne mujhe parking area mein pehchaan kaise liye…..

Humeira – Aapke awaaz se….

Ayaan – par aapne toh mera awaaz ek hi baar suna hai….

Humeira – phir bhi mujhe jo bhi madat karate hai mein usse kabhi nahi bulti hoon….

Ayaan – Par abhi aapne kaise pehchana…..

Humeira – Aapke perfume se…… bahoti strong hai…..

                      Ayan smiled with her….. They had some usual talks and after sometime her watch buzzed…

Ayan – Hey What's this…?

                    Humeira pressed one button through a voice in watch she can know the time…..

Humeira – Through pressing this button I can know the time….. and I have to leave now….

Ayaan – But why…?? Party is still on…

Humeira – It's too late….. I have to go now…

                Humeira called Vaishali….. She informed her that she have to leave now….  Humeira walked away with Vaishali and Ayaan was watching them…… He is really mesmerized about how sweet she is and how strongly she is facing her life……

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Najma's college :

                    Aisha and Najma are sitting in their college canteen and having sandwich……

Aisha – Najma tum college picnic ke liye aa rahi hona….??

Najma – pata nahi ammi se poochna padega…..

Aisha – kab poochogi humari picnic parso hai………

Najma – aaj poochungi….

Aisha – aaj mein tumhari ghar aane wali hoon na….. mein bhi moral support dungi don't worry...

Najma – shutup…..

                At the same time Najma phone buzzed…. She opened her message it is Asim……

Asim Message :

Khana kha liya……??

Najma Message :

Kha rahi hoon…. Sandwich..

Asim Message :

Zyada matt khalena moti hojaogi….. abhi itni moti ho aur moti hojaogi toh mein sambaal nahi paungi…..

                      Najma got angry reading that message….. she made a childish puppy face…… she didn't reply…. Asim sensed something is wrong……

Asim (To himself) – ladkiyon ko itna jaldi gussa kyun aajata hai…. Abb toh ye aur bhi laal hogaya hoga…..

              Asim tried to call her but she is not answering his call…… Because of so many continuous ringing of Najma's phone Aisha asked her...

Aisha – who is calling…??

Najma – Koi nahi customer care……

                Najma switched off her phone…..

Asim (To himself) – lagta hai bahot gusse mein hai…… abb ise toh mana na padega aur isse mananeka plan mere pass hai……

                    Asim kept his phone on table and started checking files but he is only thinking about Najma which is understood from his smile……. Evening Asim reached college to receive girls….. they came out smiling and laughing….

Asim – Hai Aisha and Najma……

Aisha – hai….

               Najma didn't reply…..

Asim (To himself) – Lagta hai bahot gusse mein hai…

            Najma occupied back seat and Aisha occupied front seat….. Asim adjusted his rear view glass….. He said sorry by making sorry face but Najma ignored…… After reaching Najma's home…… every one came out the car and went inside…… Dilshad welcomed them with a warm smile….. Dilshad went into kitchen to bring some water and to bring some snacks……..  Aisha went to washroom…. Asim used this chance…..

Asim (Teasingly) – Najma tumein nahi lagta hai tum aur bhi red hogayi ho…. Bilkul red Tamatar ki tarah…..

                     Najma folded her hands and sat quite……… Asim took out box of choclates…… Najma eyes got widen with excitement…… Asim observed that and felt happy……. Najma is trying to control her excitement……

Najma – yeh… kiss ke liye hai….

Asim (Teasingly)– Yeh….. tumhe kyu batau…. Tum toh mujhse baat nahi kar rahi ho…..

Najma – Matt bata…..

Asim – hey…. Hey sorry…. Ye tumhara liye hai….

Najma – Kyun mein toh moti hoon na….. aur bhi moti hojaungi…..

Asim – mein toh majaak kar raha tha……

Najma – par mujhe hassi nahi ayi….

Asim (so sweetly) – mein ne sorry kaha na…. maaf kardo…. Aur tum moti kaha ho….

Najma (childishly) – sach mein…..

Asim – sach mein…..

               Najma looked at him…. Asim offered her choclates and Najma took those choclates from him and giggled like a small child….

Asim (Teasingly) – yeh sabb akheli matt khajana….. aur bhi moti hojaugi……

Najma (Made an irritating face) – tum phir se……

Asim – majaak kar raha tha…. Tum mujhe aise hi pasand ho…….

                   Najma blushed….. Asim started smirking looking at her…… After this Najma went inside to help Dilshad…. All four had a great time…. At last after so many pleas Dilshad agreed to send Najma for two days picnic…. They will be starting day after tomorrow….. this is because Asim assured he will accompany them and he will take care of their safety……..

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Udaipur :

             Asad is trying to speak with Zoya from morning but he couldn't. Now it's time for wedding…… everyone are in their rooms and getting ready….. Asad went to his room and came out in black sherwani…… Zoya's room is opposite to Asad's room…

             Asad went and stood before Zoya's room door……. He gulped the lump that formed in his throat….. he lifted his fisted hand to knock the door….but when he knocked, door just moved back……. So he entered inside and saw her messed room………

Asad (To himself) – Kitna gandha rakha hai isne apni room ko……

                  He just had a look at the whole room………

Asad (To himself) – lagta hai ye apni room mein nahi hai…..

                When he is leaving her room his eyes got struck on one box….. it is an antic box of medium size….. he went near that box which is on her bed... he brought his hand near to that box to open it but he pulled his hand back……

Asad (To himself) – Asad tum yeh kya kar rahe ho….. usme Miss. Farooqi ka personal cheeze bhi hosakte hai…… nahi yaar shayad dekhna chahiye……

                He sat on her bed and opened that box slowly and he saw some really old things in that……. It looks like she takes care of them a lot……. He started taking each item from that box……. He saw her earring which is the first item in the box……. He then remebere that other earring is with him……

Asad (To himself) – lagta hai ye earring inke liye khass hai……

               He kept that earring aside…… he saw a golden color globe kind of antic piece…… he opened it and music started playing and there is a couple inside holding hands it turning round according to music…. Music is so soothing that he lost in that moment…….. After sometime he closed that and kept aside……. There were two photos inside…….. Asad picked up photos and confusion spread on his face….

Asad (To himself) – yeh kiski photo hai….. shayad Miss. Farooqi ki ammi aur abbu hai….. par yeh doosri photo kiski hai…… iss mein bhi ek pair hai…….. aur yeh photo jali hui kyun hai…….

                When Asad was in confusion and thinking about the photos…… His phone rang and he is really surprised to see Tanveer's name flashing on his phone…. He kept everything in its place and went outside to answer his call…….

Asad – salam walekum Tanveer….

Tanveer – walekum asalam…… aapke liye surprise hai….

                Asad got confused with this……

Asad – Surprise….!!!

Tanveer – Turn around…..

                   Asad turned around and he is shocked more than surprised to see Tanveer there…….. He slowly brought down his phone and disconnected the cal…… Tanveer came to him excitedly and hugged him but Asad didn't respond for the hug….. he stood like a statue with a shocking expression on his face….. Zoya came there to change…… she is shocked to see Tanveer there and also deeply hurt to see them in that position…… Asad looked at her with shock in his eyes and he could really read how much hurt she is from inside…… Asad slowly pushed Tanveer back and broke the hug…… Tanveer was happy that Zoya has seen them…..

Flashback Starts

           Tanveer came out of the car and entered into the hall….. she stopped one person and asked him where is Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan's room and that person guided her to there…. When she was going to climb the stairs he saw Zoya instructing someone about the work and Jia came there……. Tanveer slowly tip-toed to hear there conversation……

Jia – yaha sab kuch teekh hai tum jaakar tayaar hojana….. humein lawn mein jaakar mandup check karni hai…. Tum tayaar hoke aajana…..

Zoya – teekhe…. Tum phir se sab check karlena…..

                      Tanveer called Asad and went to upstairs as fast as she can…….

Tanveer (To herself) – Abb isse bahar kaise bhulaun……

                      But for Tanveer's luck Asad himself came out to answer the cal……

Flashback Ends 

           Tanveer is happy that her first step to keep them away got worked….

Tanveer (To herself) – Asad ka toh pata nahi par iske baad Zoya toh Asad se door rahegi…..

             Tanveer displayed her evil fake smile on her face……

Tanveer – Salam walekum Zoya……

               Zoya and Asad was staring at eachother…….

Zoya – walekum asalam…..

Tanveer – Aap yaha…..

                     Zoya still staring at Asad……

Zoya – ye shaadi ka project humein mila hai issi liye……

Tanveer – aap ka itni badi company hai…. Aap sirf shaadiyan karwate hai….. ya kuch au…

              Zoya now looking at Tanveer……

Zoya – Mujhe do dilonko milana accha lagta hai….. issi liye mein Shaadiyon ki team ko guide karke uske saathi hi rehti hoon…… meri dusre teams dusre event managements karte hai….. even I participate and guide them but I love to participate in shaadi managements…

                     Tanveer gave her a smile while Asad was still staring at Zoya…. Zoya ignored his eyes on her…..

Zoya – If you excuse me…...

              She said and entered her room……

Tanveer (To herself with a confusin on her face) – Asad toh issi room se bahar niklata….. agar ye Zoya ka room hai toh Asad andar kar kya raha tha……..

                 Asad was still thinking about Zoya but collecting his thoughts he turned towards Tanveer and asked her…..

Asad – Tanveer tum yaha kar kya kari ho….

Tanveer – Mujhe aapko dekhne ka mann kar raha tha aur yaha Udaipur mein mujhe kaam toh issi liye agayi hoon……

                Asad was silent and answered her…..

Asad – Aap tak gayi honge jaakar fresh up hojayiye……

                 Asad called one person and asked him a room for Tanveer and that person guided her to her room which in the other corner of the same corridor….. Asad went down stairs to meet Vishal….. Zoya in her room got ready and sat before mirror…… Zoya is lost……

Zoya (To herself) – Mujhe itni upset honeki kya zaroorat hai…. Asad is Tanveer's fiance they can hug and whatever they want they can do….. but why is it hurting me….. Allah Miyya What's wrong with me…..

               Zoya got up from there after wearing her earrings…… she went and sat on her bed and took that antic box and kept that on her lap……. She opened it carefully and took those two photo's out….. she looked at those two photo's and tears formed in her eyes….. she placed them near to her heart….. tears flowed through her eyes and down by making way on her cheeks…..

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Just read this part

So Humeira is blind.. Gosh

Wow

This was the best thing

AyRa were so cute

Even asim and najma rocked

AsYa forever

Hate that evil Tanveer

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