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Asya FF Meri Duniya updated Part 30 (Page 93) (Page 18)

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raziya toh nhi..ya ohir uske father...
hate her..yr

thnks 4 d pm

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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princeegoyal

raziya toh nhi..ya ohir uske father...
hate her..yr

thnks 4 d pm

pari

your not exactly correct but your are correct... it's not Raziya but someone else

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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 5:26am | IP Logged
hey tis is really good...totally luv it...superb...
both asad n zoya are too cute...guess it must be razia or someone who really hate her...thx fr the pm n please pm me for the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...


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Hi friends... Thanks for your comments... they really motivates me... here is Part 13... 

      Thanks to all regular readers for taking out time and reading Meri Duniya... 

              Welcome to all new readers...

                        If any silent readers... please feel free to comment or PM me...

                                   Thank you friends for taking out your valuable time and reading FF Meri Duniya... please do comment... your comments motivates me to continue Meri Duniya...


Part 13

               Zoya and Asad reached marriage venue…… They took their luggage out of the car…… Jia came out seeing Zoya……

Jia (Worried) – Kya hua Zoya….??? Itna der kaise hogai pahunchneme…… meine tumhe call bhi kiya….. kabhi busy kabi switched off…… hua kya tha…???

Zoya (Smiling) – Pehle saas toh lo….. mein teekh taakh pahonch gayi hoon na….. toh phikaar kis baat ki…. Pehle ye bata tayariya kaise chal rahe hai…..

Jia – Tayari hogayi hai…… ek minute…..

                   Jia turned and called one worker…. She asked them to pick Asad and Zoya's bags and keep them in their rooms….. Zoya and Asad followed that person to upstairs…. That person went upstairs to keep luggage….. When Asad and Zoya are climbing stairs slowly…..

Zoya (looking down) – Aapko…. Aapko kuch kehna tha……?

Asad (startled) – Haa…. Haa who…. Kuch nahi…..

Zoya (looking down) – Sach mein kuch nahi kehna hai…….

Asad – kuch poochna tha……. I don't know I have right to know or not….

Zoya (Immediately without thinking) – You have…..

                       Zoya realizing what she said suddenly looked at him and again started looking down…… Asad was looking at her continuously without even a one second gap….. He don't want to miss any expression on her face…… He felt as if he will miss a scene from suspense movie….. if he will miss that scene he will not understand rest……

Zoya (To herself) – Ye mein ne kya kaha…. Sach mein mujhe lagta hai ki he has right on me….

                   Asad interrupting her thoughts…..

Asad – Sach mein….!!!

                  Zoya looked at him….. they were lost in each other's eyes when that person who carried luggage to their rooms interrupted them……

Worker – Sir and mam…. Mein ne aap dono ki luggages rooms mein rakh diya hai……. Seedha jaakar right aapka room hai sir aur mam aapka seedhe se left….

              After informing them he left from there…….. Zoya took this opportunity not to continue their conversation and left from there to her room…. She ran into her room and closed door….. Asad stood there for some time thinking about what she said and he also left from there……..

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Farooqi Villa : Hall :

Asma – Asim luggage car mein rakh do….

Asim – Haa ammi…..

                Asim picked two bags and went outside to load them in the car……

Asma – Aisha apna dyaan rakhna…. Asim yahi rahega….. Bhaijaan ka bhi khayaal rakhna…… tumhari mobile mein hi gussi matt rehan

Aisha – haa ammi…..

Abdul – Asma begum….. who bache nahi hai… who sambaal lenge….

                Gaffur entered the hall, every one became silent with respect………

Gaffur – Asma tum fikar mat karna…. Asim hai na….. parso Zoya bhi pahonch jayegi….

                 Asma nodded………

Gaffur – Abb chale der ho raha hai……….

                    Everyone left from there to airport……..

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                      Zoya in her room thinking about Asad……. Every moment spent with him and all silly fights they had brought a wide smile on her face….. she sat before mirror and getting ready when she saw that she lost her earring……

Zoya (To herself) – Allah Miyya….. meri earring….. (with fallen face)….  Yeh meri ammi ki akhri nishani hai……. Mein isse kaise kho sakti hoon….. mein ne abb tak kaise nahi dekha…….

                      Zoya got really worried and started searching everywhere in the room..…... her eyes are filled with tears……

Flashback

                    Zoya is playing with her sister in the garden……

Gaffur – Tum ye kya kar rahe ho Heena begum……????

Heena – Ye meri Zoya ke liye….. jab ye badi hojayegi…. Jab isse iski mann pasand ladka miljayega mein Zoya ko ye earrings doongi….. ye earrings ye kahega ki mujhe who ladka manjoor hai aur who ladki uski kismat hai…… ye Zoya ko hamesha meri manjoori aur meri yaad dilayega……..

Gaffur – Toh tumhe ring banwana chahiye….. tumne yeh earrings kyu banwaya….. bada ajeeb hai earrings dena……

Heena – Yeh meri ammi ne mujhe diya hai…… jab aap mujhe dekhne aaye the……. Aur aap meri kismet bangaye…… allah ki shukr se mein bahot kush hoon….. issi tarah Zoya ki kismat mein ek accha ladka mille…… issi liye……..

Flashback Ends

                Zeenat told her about this earrings……. Zeenat handed her this earrings when she lost her mom…… At the age of 15 she might not know about destiny, love and all….. but at that age also she strongly believed that marriage is a life long commitment…… whoever my mom will like and I will get a sign that she likes I will marry him... Zoya was furious at her for loosing that earring……..

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                Asad in his room sitting on his bed holding Zoya's earring……….. he started thinking what all happened……

Flashbacks

             After bringing Zoya safely back and after leaving her in the room, he came out and sat outside when Ravali came there with jug of water and kept it there…….

Ravali – Asadji aapke t-shirt se kuch latak rahi hai……….

            Asad coming out of his thoughts……..

Asad – kya….?? Kaha…???

Ravali – Peeche…. Shayad earring hai……

               After answering Ravali left from there……… Asad tried to reach it and atlast hevreached it…… when he took that in his hands he was surprised to see that it was Zoya's earring…….. then he remembered that when she slept on his shoulder on bike may be at that time it got stuck in his shirt……….. he was looking at that earring and on the other side Zoya was standing near window and saw a shooting star………

Flashback Ends

               He kept earring safely in one box and then kept in his bag……. Asad got ready and came out... he was out for his meeting which was postponed……..

                         *************************************

NewYork : Humeira's Place :

Humeira – Aapi mujhe bahot dar lag raha hai…….

Zeenat – Darr…. Kiss baat ka darr….. tumne toh aaj tak har problem ko face kiya hai…… you supported yourself a lot….. abb kyu darr rahe ho……

Humeira – Aaj jo bhi shopping mall mein hua agar waha India mein hoga toh………. Mein whah kisi pe bhoj nahi bana chahthi hoon…….

Zeenat – aisa kyu soch rahi ho…… jab koi tumhe chahtha hai tab tum unpe boj kaise ban sakto ho…… Mujhe aaj tak kabhi nahi laga…… waha tumhari abbu hai, baji hai sabb hai….. waise bhi mein aur jiju bhi aayenge…..

               Humeira just smiled half-heartedly……. She went to her room keeping her hand on the wall…… Zeenat and Anwar made a line on wall…... she can feel that line and following that she reached her room…….. she went to her room and took her diary out……. She learnt brain lipi in 1 year…… she wrote in her diary……

Humeira's Dairy: Brain Lipi

        Mein bahot kush hoon….. abbu, khala aur khalu aarhe hai mujhe lene….. par pata nahi dar kiss baat ka lag raha hai…… Ammi ki bahot yaad arahi hai…….. Farheen ko bahot miss kar rahi hoon…….. hum jab bhi India jaate te bahot masti karte te……. Ammi aap chale gaye te aur meri duniya bhi anderi hogayi hai……. Aap hum sabko kyu chod ke chale gayi ammi….. .. (Tears rolled down her eyes) …. Humari yadein lekar mein yaha aagayi ammi…... .. Mein waha meri anderi se Zoya aur abbu ki duniya mein anderi nahi barna chahthi hoon…… Abb mein waha jaakar …… pata nahi kya hoga meri zindagi mein…….

               She closed her dairy with eyes full of tears……

                      ******************************************

                 Ayaan in his room sitting on bed……..

Ayaan (To himself) – India toh jaa raha hoon…… pata nahi kya hoga…… abbu ke pass pehle jaaun ya ammi ke pass….. Bhai jaanplease bacha lena….

              Ayaan's friend called him…….

Ayaan – hello Rohit…..

Rohit – Yaar kal farewell hai sab logh aa rahe hai…… tum bhi aarahe ho na…..??

Ayaan – Ha yaad hai…. Pahonch jaunga….. don't worry……

                Rohit planned a farewell party because most of his friends are going to India…… He and his fiance Vaishali planned this party……..

                              **********************************

            Vaishali called her friend Humeira………. Humeira heard her phone ring and reached her phone carefully….. She has special ringtone for everyone…… According to ringtone she identify the person calling him……. She answered the call…….

Vaishali – hai Humeira……….

Humeira – hai Vaishali……..

Vaishali – Kal farewell party hai…. Aa rahi ho na……

Humeira – woh mein soch rahi thi ki……..

Vaishali – ki tum nahi aaogi……… kab takk chalega isse…… social gatherings se kab tak door rahogi….. kal tum aarahi ho…. Humari akhri meeting shayad…. Uske baad tum India chale jaogi……. mein Zeenat didi se baat kar chuki hoon…… tum aarahi ho…. Au rmujhe kuch nahi sunn na hai……..

                         Humeira couldn't say no…… so she accepted the invitation………….

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            Tanveer took her phone out from the bag and dialed Balraj's number……..

Tanveer – Balraj tumhe kuch pata chala…….

Balraj – haa pata chala mam….. mein abhi aapki hi call karne wala tha…… aapne call kar liya hai………

Tanveer – kya pata chala……..

Balraj – mam mein ne aapko sab kuch mail kar liya hai….

Tanveer – Ok………..

                  Tanveer disconnected call and went to her laptop and opened her mail excitedly……. After opening Balraj's mail she got really shocked…… she never expected this result from his investigation…. Tanveer took her phone and dialed someone's number………

Tanveer (Arrogantly) – salaam walekum……..

Other person – walekum asalam……..

Tanveer – mujhe aapse milna hai…………..

Other person – nahi mil sakte hai………

Tanveer – Milna zaroori hai……..

Other person – aaj nahi milsakta hoon…….. kal milenge…… wahi jagah jaha hum hamesha milte hai…..

Tanveer – teekhe….. khuda hafiz….

Other person – khuda hafiz……..

                            Tanveer disconnected call and folding hands before her chest……….

Tanveer (To herself with an evil smile) – toh yeh hai aapka raaz………abb yeh khuli raaz hai……….

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                Zoya came out her room wearing other pair of earrings and with a sad face and covering it with a smile…….. she is checking all arrangements and making some changes……… Jia came there…….

Jia – kya hua…??

             She asked Zoya with so much confidence that she found out that Zoya is sad……….

Zoya – kya hua….??!!! Kuch bhi toh nahi……

Jia – Tum uddass lag rahi ho………….

Zoya – Mein aur uddass….. kabhi nahi…..

           After answering she left from there with the name of work…… jia sttod there thinking…….

Jia (To herself) – kuch toh baat hai….. yeh kabhi batati nahi hai…… iss bhaar bhi mein kudh pata lagaungi…………

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Precap - revelation of that other person and master mind of tanveer's plans...

             Thanks for reading... 

NOTE : I know it is a short and late update... but friends my college got started and i will not be able to update daily... i will try to update frequenlty...



Edited by VindhyaMounika - 23 July 2013 at 12:01pm

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Nice.continue soon.

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Great story!!!

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Nice...I loved the earing wala part...plz continue soon. ...

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