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Asya FF Meri Duniya updated Part 30 (Page 93) (Page 14)

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Part 11

                   Asad was unable to breath due to tension and also because he ran as fast as fast he could to catch the van…… He controlled himself and started thinking the ways to reach her……. He called his secretary Raghav……..

Asad – hello Raghav……….

Raghav – Good evening sir…..

Asad – I want a location of one number immediately……..

Raghav – Ok sir……. Can I have number please……

                     Asad gave him Zoya's number……. He got her number from Abbas……. When Abbas asked him and Tanveer to her Asad took her number from Abbas……. At last it helped him today……

Asad (Ordered) – I want the information fast…..

Raghav (Scared) – Ok sir……

                Asad disconnected the call…….

Asad (To himself) – By the time Raghav call me….. I have to do something……….

                   Asad went back to Dhaba owner….. he told him the full story……

Dhaba owner – Pareshaan matt ho…… mere bete ka bike hai waha….. usse leja aur baad mein dedena……….

Asad (Happily) – Shukriya……

                Asad left from there and drove as fast as he can……. He is driving like an insane person….. his eyes are filled with tears and fear of losing her….. Asad was extremely frustrated with the rage and the fear he was feeling….. Raghav hadn't given him any information till now….. He could remember every moment spent with her…… her chirpy talks, her smile, her talks with Allah Miyya and everything………. She gave so many names to him... how she used to fight with him on all silly matters……. There first meeting…. How they rolled down on the ground... how she tripped in the office and how he caught her….. every moment of his life with her is just like a beautiful dream from which he never want to wake up…….. He is really furious towards himself for being angry on her……. He held himself responsible for being her in danger….. he didn't understand what to do….. he sent silent prayers for safety of Zoya….. He suddenly stopped his bike when he heard his phone ring…… he is really happy to see Raghav's name flashing on his phone……

Asad – Raghav…… did you trace the number……??

Raghav – yes sir it is somewhere near Mangalpur…… it's a factory….. signal got stopped there……..

Asad – Good….. now send a car to 'Apna Dhaba' which is on the way to Udaipur…… 50km away from Bhopal……. Fast…..

Raghav – Ok sir……

              Asad dove to Mangalpur and started searching factory in that area……. He found an old factory in the outskirts……. That factory is not in working condition…. It is filled with spider webs…… iron pipes and some not actually working bulbs…… he saw two men coming out of the factory……. Asad hid behind a wall to listen what are they talking about…….

Person 1: Madam ko call karte hai…. Iss ladki ko kya karna hai wahi batayenge…

Person 2: Sahi baat hai….

                 Person dialed number in his phone……..

Person 2 : hello madam…. Hume ladki mil gayi hai…. Hum uska kya kare……

Person 1 : Speaker pe rakho…

                          Person 2 kept the phone in speaker……..

Madam : Uss ladki ko katam kardo….. she shouldn't be alive………..

Person 2 : ok madam……

                 They disconnected the call………

Person 2: tum andar chalo…. Mein abhi aata hoon………

                      Person 1 went inside and person 2 started walking towards the van….. Asad went from back and hit him on his neck with his hand….. That person went unconscious………… Asad slowly went inside and saw two persons standing there showing there back to him…….

Person 1: Ye toh behosh hai….

Person 3: Acchi baat hai… bina dard mehsoos kiye marjayegi……

               Asad had a glance at Zoya between those two persons….. Zoya is lying down….. her hands were tied back and her legs were also tied with hard rope……. She has a blood mark at the corner of her mouth……. She is lying unconscious on the ground……. Tears flowed from Asad's eyes….. he couldn't stop himself anymore….. he jumped like a lion on both of them and started beating them……. At last Asad is successful and both of them went unconscious…….

                     Asad ran towards Zoya as if his life depended on her……. He opened the cloth tied to her mouth and opened ropes tied to her legs…… and he opened ropes tied to her hands….. he saw red marks on her wrist which shows how long she struggled to open them….. her cheek is red and swollen…… he tried to wake her up…… but she is till unconscious…… he hugged her and started crying…. He borke his hug and he started screaming……….

Asad – ZOYA…. Ankhe kholo Zoya……  utto Zoya….. tum jo bhologi woh mein karunga….. please Zoya utto……..

                    He hugged her back…… she opened her eyes in his tight embrace….. she felt safe in his arms……. She could feel his tears on her neck….. she slowly picked her arms and placed them on his back…… she hugged him back….. he could feel her hug and felt happy that she came to conscious…… he broke and took her face in his palms….. she could feel his concern for her when she felt the warmth of his palms on her cheek………….

Asad – Tum teekh hona…..

                    She nodded in yes….. he stood up and helped her to stand….. she couldn't stand properly and felt dizzy due to chloroform….. he understood this and looked at her….. he placed his one arm under legs and other on her back and took her in his arms….. they went out and he make her stand near the bike and gave her bike's support so that she will not fall….. he climbed bike and made her sit back…… he started bike and he drove back to dhaba….. after some time Zoya felt sleepy and weak and slept on his back……. He felt her head on his shoulders….. he drove as slow as he could so that she will not wake up……..

                   When they reached dhaba.. due to halt she woke up and she got down….. he parked his bike and helped her get inside…… dhaba owner arranged a room for her to take rest….. Asad helped her to get inside and helped her to sit on the bed……. By that time Asad could say anything dhaba owner's daughter came there with water and some food…… so Asad left from there…….. dhaba owner's  daughter (Ravali) went to Zoya…….

Ravali – ye lijiye paani……

                       Zoya drank some water and looked at Asad through window who is standing outside…… Ravali observed that and said……

Ravali – pata hai jab aap lapata hogaye the…. Woh kitne dar gaye the….. pappa ke paas aakar madat mange aur unke chehre issa lag raha tha jaise koi uski zindagi lekar jaarahe the…. Issa lagaki uski dil se dhadkan cheen rahe the….. uska duniya ussi samai katam hogai jis samai aap lapata hogaye………

                         After saying this Ravali left from there….. Zoya is surprised to hear this…… she looked at him again….. He is standing there talking to dhaba owner…. He gave back bike keys and thanked him for all the help they did….. he came back to room to see zoya how she is feeling…… Asad with so much pain and concern in his eyes…………..

Asad – Aap teekh hai na……

Zoya – haan teekh hoon…. Thanks for saving me….

                 Asad just nodded…..

Asad – Mein bahar sojata hoon…… kuch chahiye toh bulalijiye……..

               Zoya looked at him and nodded….. Asad went out to sleep…….

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Asma – hum kal HUmeira ko lene jaa rahe hai….. you people take care…. Zoya baji bhi nahi hai……

Najma – Humeira aarahi hai…….

Aisha – haa…. Usse lena bade abbu, abbu aur ammi jaa rahe hai…….

Najma – Accha…. Mere bhai bhi aaraha hai…..

Asim – Kon….???

Najma – Ayaan…. !!!

Asim – Tumhari bhai ka naam Asad hai na…..

Najma – haa.. par mujhe do bhai hai…. Aur tumhe kaise pata Asad ke baare mein…..

Asim – Woh tama….. Najma….. Zoya ne bataya…..

Najma – Oh accha……..

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                 Asad couldn't sleep whole night……. Suddenly He heard Zoya's shoutings…… he ran to her room and he saw that Zoya is having a nightmare……… he went there and holded her hand……..

Zoya – Ammi aur Farheen meri wajah se margaye hai….. Allah aapne mujhe kyu nahi bhulaya………

Asad – Utto… Zoya… utto…..

Zoya – Ammi…….

               Zoya didn't wake up from sleep but became calm after sometime…… Asad got really scared with this sudden behavior of Zoya…… Holding Asad's hand Zoya again went into deep sleep………. Asad sat down and slept there keeping his head on bed……….

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                       Asim dropped Najma home………… Najma said bye and when she is leaving Asim caught her hand……..

Najma – Aap yeh kya kar rahe hai…..???

Asim – Mujhe aapko kuch dena hai…….

Najma – Kya……??

                   Asim came close to her and she went back……..

Najma – Aap yeh kya kar rahe hai…..??

Asim – Mein tumhe kuch dena chahta hoon……

Najma – Kya…??

Asim – tumhari favourite…..

Najma – meri favourite………!!!!

                   Asim took box of choclates and gave that to her……… this brought a wide smile on her face…….

Najma – wow!!! Thank you…..

             Dilshad saw Najma standing with someone out, she got worried and came out…….. When she came out she saw Asim standing there and gave a sigh of relief………

Dilshad – Salam walekum Asim……

             This startled both Asim and Najma…….

Asim – Walekum Asalam phufi…….

Dilshad – Tum yaha…… pehle andar toh aao…

Asim – nahi phupi mein Najma ko chodne aaya tha…….. mujhe kuchkaam hai….. mein ghar chaltha hoon…….

              Dilshad gave a smile and Asim left from there….. Dilshad and Najma went inside…….

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Next Day Morning:

                 Zoya woke up from her sleep and saw Asad sleeping there down…….. She woke up and got ready……. After sometime Asad woke up from his sleep and saw that Zoya was not there….. he started searching and found her praying…. So he left her and went to get ready……

                 After Prayer Zoya called Asim……..

Zoya – Hello Asim……..

                  Asim in half sleep………

Asim – Haa Zoya…… kaha pe ho…..

Zoya – on the way to Udaipur……

                Asim saw the time and got worried………

Asim – Abbhi tak nahi pahinchi…. Koi problem…..?

            Asad came there and saw Zoya talking to someone….. he went near to her when she answered……

Zoya – Kuch nahi hua…. Gadi karab hogayi issi liye……… abb nikal rahe hai…..

Asim – sabb teekh hai na……..

Zoya – wahi aaj abbu, khala aur khalu Humeira ko lene jaa rahe hai na….. bass issi liye…….

Asim – Kuch nahi hoga…. Allah pe barosa rakho……

                Zoya saw Asad standing there………

Zoya – Asim mein baad mein baat karti hoon……….

              She disconnected call and went to Asad………

Asad (To himself) – itna sabb kuch hone ke baad bhi ye apni dard kisi se nahi baat thi hai……. Allah aapne isme itna dard kyu samaya hai…… mein iski dard baatna chahta hoon……. Kya mujhe hak Hai…….???

                      Zoya interrupted his thoughts…..

Zoya – Thank you Mr. Khan…..

Asad – Kiss liye…..???

Zoya – kal jo apne mere liye kiya uske liye……

                Asad nodded his head….

Asad – Kya aapse mein kuch pooch sakta hoon…..??

Zoya – Ji Mr. Kahn…..

Asad – Kal woh log aapko kyu maarna chahte the….?

Zoya – Pata nahi…..

Asad – Aapko kisi se dushmani….?

Zoya – nahi…..

Asad – Toh phir……

Zoya – Mujhe kal ke baare mein abhi baat nahi karni hai……

Asad – Mujhe kuch aur bhi poochna tha……. (To himself) Kya mujhe poochna chahiye….. nahi abhi nahi….

Zoya – kya poochna hai aapko…..?

Asad – Woh……. Actually….. kuch nahi……….

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                          Tanveer woke up from her sleep with a smile by thinking that no one will come between her and Asad…… She got ready and went down……. She got a call from those persons whom she employed for the task………

Tanveer – hello….

Person 1 – mam bhuri kabar hai….. who bach gayi hai….. kisine aakar hum sabko maarkar uss ladki ko lekar chala gaya……

                Tanveer disconnected the call angrily……….

Tanveer (Screaming) – Woh bach gayi hai…….. who nahi bach sakti hai……. Asad tumne usse bachaya na….. tumhe ye bahot mehengi padne wali hai…… Par mein haar nahi manugi……

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New York:

Zeenat (Covering her phone) – Humeira jaldi aao…… Zoya ka phone hai…… (Taking her hand on the phone) kaise ho Zoya…….???

Zoya – mein teekh hoon Aapi…. Aap sab waha kaise hai…..?

Zeenat – Sab teekh hai……..

                Humeira came there slowly….. Even in that darken life she have her light of confidence of hope…… She completed her MBA finance and topped in her college….. At last she will be going to India after 10 years…... In these 10 years she learnt how to live her life in darkness….. she never took help of anyone…… she reached phone easily because she knows every corner of that house………

Humeira (Excitedly) – Baji….. hum 10 saal ke baad India aarahe hai…. Mein bahot kush hoon…….

Zoya – Pata chal raha hai tumhari awaaz se bahot kush hona tum…….

Humeira – bhot kush aue mujhe aapki awaaz se ye pata chal raha hai ki aap bahot pareshaan hai……

Zoya – issa kuch nahi hai…….

Humeira – Aap mujhse chupa rahe ho….. mujhe pata hai aapki pareshani ka kaaran….. har baar ek jaisa nahi hota…. Aap pareshaan matho…….

Zoya – teekh… au r kya chal raha hai…..

Humeira – Aap hi bataya ye… aapko yaha se kya chahiye…….

                     Zoya and Humeira had their talks……. On the other side Asad was speaking to Ayaan in phone…….

Asad – Kya chal raha hai chote miyya…..

Ayaan – India ane ki tayari ya Bhai jaan……

Asad – Tum aarahe ho…… aur ujhe kisine bataya tak nahi……..

Ayaan – Sirf Tamatar ko pata hai….. yahi batane aapko call kiya hai………

Asad – Accha itna late……

Ayaan – Nahi bhai jaan…. Aapko hi pehle batana chahta tha….. par who Tamatar black mailer….. usse batana pada…….

Asad – Hmmm…. Aur kya………

                      Asad had their talks with siblings……… And they are happy that after so many years they will be meeting them….. They disconnected there calls………..

Zoya (To herself) – Allah Miyya…. Sab kuch teekh he rakh na…… sabko salaamat rakhna…….

Asad (To himself) – Ye toh India aaraha hai…... ye tufaan bhi lane wala hai….. abb ye pehle kiske ghar jaayega….. Khan Mansion ya ammi ke pass………

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New York Shopping Mall :

                    Ayaan entered shopping mall so happily…… he is really excited that he is going to India….. he is here to do shopping for his family…… he entered and started searching all items to pick the best…… Ayaan is Ayaan at the same time he also started flirting with sales girls and sales girls are also liking his funny nature……… he is a flirt but he never hurts everyone…. He is funny and he makes everyone happy…… that is in his nature……..

                  Humeira also entered same shopping mall with Zeenat to buy some gifts……. Humeira never lost her confidence…….. Actually she lost her confidence when she first faced her reality that she cannot see….. but family support and Zoya's love gave her the confidence to live…..

                       They entered into one shop and Zeenat is selecting some perfumes for them……. Humeira started moving to check what all perfumes are there…… she banged into someone……..

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totally luv it...read it all in one go...
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