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(Swaron OS) The Wait... (Page 8)

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Super cute OS Megha Di...

loved the sharon's monologue... 

She knows so well about her majnu... thats y she kept the windows open Wink

and swayam yeh sab sharon se sunne ke liye taras gaya...at last i must say '' THE WAIT IS OVER" in terms of everything Embarrassed

and woh dhono ek doosre mein itne kho gaye ki unhe pata bhi nahi ki dhopar ki 1 baje hai...LOL LOL
 and the highlight is 

"What exactly happened Swayam?" murmured Sharon on his chest.


Swayams smile widened, he grinned, hugged her tighter and said, "pyaar ke side effects!"


i loved this pyaar ke side effects Embarrassed
but rey Angry LOL LOL 

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:38am | IP Logged
awesome os. loved it

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Wow.. thats just so amazing.. beautiful.. splendid..

Well I will fall short of words to describe this particular OS.. post-confession OS..

Sharon being an absolutely different person.. Diva becomes Laila.. Mr. Majnu ki Laila..

pehle she wants him to drop her home.. par boys ne Sharon ke saare armano pe pani fer diya ROFL.. Simi smelling something fishy about the two.. chill girl, your friend is in love..

and now sharon feels he will visit her once done with boys.. pyaar sach mein logon ko badal deta hai.. pehle kabhi Swayam ka window se aana pasand nahi tha.. and now she expects him to get into her house through window.. ajab..

She is dreaming about majnu.. OMG.. Diva falling in love.. aur toh aur neend mein hi Swayam ko feelings express kar di..

Swayam enters through window. ab toh official boyfriend hai.. toh door se bhi enter kar sakta hai na.. pata nahi kya mazeh milti hai window ke through stunts marte huye aane ki..

but I loved the morning scenario the most.. both dreaming about Sharon.. and then Kiss Embarrassed and the most hillarious part.. Tu hai toh I will be all right.. initially I thought it would be Simmi.. but its Rey.. Its 1 in the afternoon.. kitna sote hain yeh log Shocked That last line 'pyaar ke seide effects' was so cute..

I just loved it... keep writing more.. thanks for the PM..

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 2:13am | IP Logged
dat was simply awesome... Big smile 
loved d romantic majnu boy ... Embarrassed and our cute Diva..  Embarrassed
and bechara rey...  LOL

pyaar ke side effects.. LOL LOL


Edited by sweetdivya - 26 June 2013 at 2:13am

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Pyaar ke side effects, indeed.
Wonderful sequence, beautifully penned, extra ordinary OS.
It feels so good to see them so much in love, thinking about nothing else, reveling in each others' arms and drowning in pool of love they feel for each other.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 9:27am | IP Logged
now isnt this how a couple in a new relation behaveEmbarrassed
loved sharon talking in her sleep nd glad swayam heard all of it... he really shld know how much she loves her.
this was a sweet one.
Ps:thanx for PM

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vaishali_mhaske Senior Member
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Awsm OSSmileSmile loved it Smile specially the end part in which Swayam says" pyaar k side effects hai ye...".
Wonderful work done...SmileSmileSmile

May be creative has also given us the same to watch...after SwaRon confessionEmbarrassed

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 10:50am | IP Logged
hey, well i have read almost all ur work but commenting for the first time..Embarrassed
u r an amazing writer and i love all ur work..Big smile
coming to this OS, it was a fun read and a cute one...
rey shouting on fone was too good..LOL
nd the last line of swayam "pyaar ke side effects" was so apt and concluded the OS perfectly..Clap
just loved it to the core...

P.S- this is my longest comment on IF till date...even i'm amazed ..



Edited by aku30 - 28 June 2013 at 10:50am

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