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(Swaron OS) The Wait... (Page 6)

amipatel2 Senior Member

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:35am | IP Logged
OMG it was so cute!!! Amazing os

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JJ_Holic IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:46am | IP Logged
awieee such a cute and brilliant osClapClapClapClapClap
loved the post confession bliss that both of them were feelingSmileSmileSmile
sharon dreaming of swayam and then the whole cuddling scene was so cute.
lol the kissEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed thinking it was a dream was a nice touch.bechaara rey in dono ke lie cover karte karte pareshaanLOLLOLLOL
the ending was just as sweet lol pyaar ke side effectsWinkWinkWinkWinkWink
absolutely loved it keep writing more

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rinkubathija12 Groupbie

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
The amazing work from your side after a long time! Its just full of emotions and every word inscribed here is best to explain their state and love for each other. A big applause to you for that because explaining these feeling in mere words is a very big task. I felt felt every word. I want to comment very long but now life is not less than what we call a complete mess. . I would edit this if i get enough time. For now i can't promise anything.

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nami2811 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Firstly.. I love ur DP! Embarrassed

I hope u remember me Tongue We met only yesterday n wen I dropped into d forum I saw SwaRon OS by Megsy. So why not read it? And thank god I did!
This is so amazing! Sharon hugging d pillow tight n dreaming abt Swayam n Swayam watching it from d windoe.. Haayyyee! And both of em end up dreaming in d morning n al dat was a reality! Awww... I loved hw Swayam threw his phone n aaid Sharon n me r nt coming to d college!

You write wonderfully.. This is d first work of urs dat m reading n I loved it <3
-TanHaVruShan- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Hey aaj aapki n aapke os ki bahot tarif suni maine so i was very very curious to read ki aisa Wat was it..
After reading dis os i feel u truly truly deserve all d appreciation which i heard today for u Embarrassed
Dis os was absolutely magical i loved each n every bit of it Embarrassed i was blushing smiling continuously while reading dis one Embarrassed ur really a brilliant writer. . I feel aaj agar yeh miss karti toh bahot brilliant sa Kuch miss kar deti Clap
I loved d way u portrayed der post confession feelings loved d way swayam told rey v r not comin to college today Embarrassed
It created magic it touched my heart.. D way u have written it down was awesome.. Aur Kya bolu am in lack of words...
Simple one word mein i can say dat it was KHOOBSURAT Embarrassed

Am actually new here just few months hue hain i ve read very few os.s out of d ones i ve read deepu di has become my favourite writer but now after reading dis i can say ur also in my favourites now Embarrassed

Dis is first work of ur.s which am reading n i totally loved it Clap Clap Clap n i ll make sure dat i read all ur works as n wen i get time..
Pls keep writing u create magic Embarrassed Embarrassed i so wish ke v get a scene like dis in d show Embarrassed

Ps: sorry for such a long comment but could not control myself... V don't know each other much cos from d time am here i haven't seen u around n i heard dat ur inactive.. Lookin forward to talk to u in person..
Lovely os Clap Clap Clap

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 24 June 2013 at 1:10pm

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yogini64 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
Awww . . . . Its beautiful... Smile

She waited for him . . .

But majnu late ho gya...Embarrassed

She's murmering all that in dream . . Adorable... Tongue

Both are drowned in love n passion... Day Dreaming

But both don't even remember how they landed up together... Ermm

Lol.. Rey's call was indeed a reality check... LOL

Their first kiss . . . . In dreamy state... Blushing

Confused love birds ... Silly

Ab Date pe hi chale jao... Wink

Clg ja ke toh bas answers hi dene hai... D'oh

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ToujoursPur IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
pyar ke side effects----

funny---and romantic 

nice combo megha----and as usual you rocked it.

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8JSmileyFace8J Senior Member

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
Awesome OS!!!!
I absolutely loved it!!!
they were lost in their own dreamland!!!
Swaron dream land!!!!
and it was so cute!!!
they didn't even know that they were with eachother!!!
soo funny!!!
andd sooo cute!!!
i loved what sharon said to swayam!!!
it truely came from her heart!!
Amazing Job!!
You wrote it really beautifully!!!

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