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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey aaj aapki n aapke os ki bahot tarif suni maine so i was very very curious to read ki aisa Wat was it..
After reading dis os i feel u truly truly deserve all d appreciation which i heard today for u 😳
Dis os was absolutely magical i loved each n every bit of it 😳 i was blushing smiling continuously while reading dis one 😳 ur really a brilliant writer. . I feel aaj agar yeh miss karti toh bahot brilliant sa Kuch miss kar deti πŸ‘
I loved d way u portrayed der post confession feelings loved d way swayam told rey v r not comin to college today 😳
It created magic it touched my heart.. D way u have written it down was awesome.. Aur Kya bolu am in lack of words...
Simple one word mein i can say dat it was KHOOBSURAT 😳

Am actually new here just few months hue hain i ve read very few os.s out of d ones i ve read deepu di has become my favourite writer but now after reading dis i can say ur also in my favourites now 😳

Dis is first work of ur.s which am reading n i totally loved it πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ n i ll make sure dat i read all ur works as n wen i get time..
Pls keep writing u create magic 😳 😳 i so wish ke v get a scene like dis in d show 😳

Ps: sorry for such a long comment but could not control myself... V don't know each other much cos from d time am here i haven't seen u around n i heard dat ur inactive.. Lookin forward to talk to u in person..
Lovely os πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww . . . . Its beautiful... 😊

She waited for him . . .

But majnu late ho gya...😳

She's murmering all that in dream . . Adorable... πŸ˜›

Both are drowned in love n passion...

But both don't even remember how they landed up together... πŸ€”

Lol.. Rey's call was indeed a reality check... πŸ˜†

Their first kiss . . . . In dreamy state... ☺️

Confused love birds ... πŸ€ͺ

Ab Date pe hi chale jao... πŸ˜‰

Clg ja ke toh bas answers hi dene hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
pyar ke side effects----

funny---and romantic 

nice combo megha----and as usual you rocked it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome OS!!!!
I absolutely loved it!!!
they were lost in their own dreamland!!!
Swaron dream land!!!!
and it was so cute!!!
they didn't even know that they were with eachother!!!
soo funny!!!
andd sooo cute!!!
i loved what sharon said to swayam!!!
it truely came from her heart!!
Amazing Job!!
You wrote it really beautifully!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
it was just AWESOME!!
it was cute it was adorable it was romantic 😳
Sharon's dream was sooo cute
the whole OS was just beautiful loved it!! ❀️
great job πŸ‘
thank u for the PM πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Gudiya dii πŸ€—
This was a simple yet beautiful os...😊
Wish it is shown like this only in the show as well...
Sharon imagining swayam in her dreams...aww
and our majnu adoring our diva...
all in all very cute...pyar ke side effects 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome os.. 
i loved it                                                                           
ty  for the pm



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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow first wlcm bk di m so happy. πŸ€— that ur bk.

U knw di i was badly missing ur post posts nd upd8s. πŸ˜”

finally upd8 na she kuch to mila pdhne ko written by you.

Nw enough of my bak bak bk to os.

Superv os di.
Lovd it.
First sharon was dreaming abt swayam.
I so lovd ths part.
Nd in morng swayam was dreaming abt sharon.
Nd rey's call gv them a reallty chk lovd it.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful OS
Loved the way you described their emotions and feelings :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
the only one word coming out of my mouth right now is...
AWWW
it was so so so superb
loved it so much
a big wala HAAAYEEE!!!!!!
<3 <3 <3