Jodha Akbar


Jodha Akbar
Jodha Akbar

"PAAKEEZAA"JA ff PART 4 PG13 (Page 7)

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetshera

Lovely start. JA are happily married. continue soon.
thank you :)

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aanchal_c

update soon...ur story is better than akbar and jodhas real life.
oh my god !! you really think so ! thank you thank you soo much :) :) 
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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bamonforever

Great update. Wink Romance deepening. Wink
please update soon. Big smile
thank you !! it will deepen more as the story progresses ;) 
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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by magicbook

hey friends i am new to this forums !!!!  jodha akbar was  is and will always be my favorite movie and also i am a huge fan of rajat tokas and now that rajat tokas plays the role of jalal Tongue what more could i ask for Wink well i am trying my hand at writting , i am not so good at it but anyways  do let me know if you like it and should i continue 

chapter 1 

She snuggled more into the royal silk spread missing the warmth that keeps her cozy all night ...she roamed her hand over the empty space beside her where her husband jalal was supposed be was wee hours of morning ...she could not sleep the whole night because she was used to him now his sweet whispers and caresses ... but she tried to put herself to sleep ...after a while she felt movement beside her... the familiar scent of "attar" made her realize that it was him she turned quickly and placed her head on his broad muscular chest 

jalal:" app abhi tak nahi soi?"

jodha :" nahi hum toh so rahe hai" she answered with her eyes closed 

jalal chuckled at her attics and moved a lock of hair that was on her face and tucked it beside her ear and kept admiring her beauty so serene divine and peaceful 

jodha:" shehenshaaji " she wispered 

jalal:" hmm boliye jodha "

jodha :" sujamal bhaisa ke bare mein aapko koi khbar mili " she asked fearing his answer ...sujamal was a very dear cousin brother of jodha who had gone missing mysteriously a few weeks ago

jalal:" ab tak toh nahi , par jald hee mil jayegi ...hum par yakeen haina aapko"

jodha opened her eyes and lifted her head from his chest and looked deep into his eyes 

jodha:" apne aap se bhi ziyada " she whispered lovingly  and then placed her head back on her favorite place that is his chest 

jalal: " achaa yeh bataiye ki humari shezaadi kaisi hai?" he asked caressing jodha's huge belly 

jodha :" humara SHEZAADA bilkul theek hai " she wanted a baby boy while jalal wanted a baby girl so since they came to know about the pregnancy they both always had these cute little fights 

jalal would love to tease jodha about how him and his daughter would team up against her that would leave jodha's cheeks all puffed up and red with anger 

life couldnt be more perfect for jalal ...for him jodha was the best thing that happened ...jalal sometimes wondered how did they end up like this ...jodha only hated him to the core when the first met and he ,... he only lusted her ...wanted to win her like a battle ...but fate had chosen them ...never did they thought that they would fall in love ...he did not even believe that love existed ...jalal looked down upon his wife sleeping peacefully in his arms ...he thanked almighty for giving him jodha ...he remembered the first time he saw her at amer 


so this was my first part plz like and comment   

Very Nice Story...Plzzz continue...Really enjoying your story...Smile

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Beautiful Update.
Plz do me pm.
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ab update kar hi do yr...our intejaar kiya nehi jata
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chapter 3

jodha was like a kid in her favorite candy shop ...though she had many jewels ...they were all the expensive ones made out of precious stones and metals ...but still she couldn't get enough of them ...the shop was buzzing with girls trying out jewels and some bargaining  with the shopkeeper about the price of the shop keepers asked jodha " kya chaiye bitiya ?" 

jodha :" hume jumke dekhne hai " the shopkeeper showed a variety of jumkas to her but then someone called him and he got busy with the other customers leaving jhodha ...

here jalal was all while staring her like a beast stares his prey  .. her smooth skin he so wanted to feel her ... her plum luscious lips...he had an unkown urge to bite them  her twinkling eyes which he wished to drown himself ..he had an evil smirk on his face ...he forgot everything and everyone ...the only thing that existed for him was this girl who was so busy in her own world

 ...jodhaa took each  jumka and placed it on her ear and stared at her reflection in the mirror ...jalal found this pretty amusing as jodha was making all kinds of faces while doing so 
she took one jumka and placed it near her ear and gave an ok ok type expression ...then took the third and gave a wow expression but then gave an good but not enough type of expression ...she took the 3rd jumka and made a baby face ...jalal chuckled   at her attics ...jalal couldnt believe himself that he actually chuckled ...he doesnt even remember the last time he smiled !!!...seemed like jodha had finally found a jumka for herself she wanted to try in on so she started removing the jumka that she was already wearing ...jodhaa was trying really hard to twist the screw that held her jumka in place but it wouldnt budge ...she even tried twisting and pulling ...her earlobe was becoming red and sore was hurting her now but she so wanted to try out the jewel ...she gave a firm squeeze and just ended up hurting herself more  "AHH!!" she moaned in pain ...

just then she felt a two strong warm  hands hold her wrists and stop her from doing anything further with her earring  ...she was startled ...she turned around and found the most handsome guy that she had ever seen staring down at her ...he was huge ...muscular ...his eyes were like a pool  of warm honey ...he had the perfect square jaw and a mustache outlining his upper lip ...but something about him intimidated  jodhaa... seeing how close they were she tried to move back a little bit but jalal held her in place by his strong grip ...he was hungrily staring at each and every feature of her ...this was the first  time he was seeing her up so close jodha was numb with fear ...she just stared at her wrists not able to look him  in the eye  ..never was she ever treated like this by a man...jala inched more closer to her face ...she sensed him coming closer and turned her face the other side out of fear ...just then she saw moti outside the shop it seemed as if she was searching for her

jodha :"M..!!"

before she could even moti's name  jalal closed her mouth and dragged her to a nearby secluded corner ...jodha kept struggling and hitting jalal with her tiny fist but all in vain ...on the contrary jalal was enjoying all this ...but in all this struggle jodha's jumka got pulled more and she was hurt 

she held her ear in pain and tears started flowing down her cheeks ...jalal could not bear the sight was strange how a cruel man ..a beast like him who doest give a second thought before killing dozens of people can get affected by such a thing ..."shhh chup hojaye...hum dekhte hai " he whipered to her ...he held the locks of  her hair and tucked them behind her ear and tried removing her jumka as gently as possible ...jodhaa did not protest as she was really in pain ...and being the pampered child that she was she wasn't used to pain ...jalal gave a firm twist to the jumka screw ...jodha gasped and as a reflex held onto his biceps ...jalal waS mesmerized by her this act...he gently removed her jumka ...and blew some air on her earlobe to soothe her such intimacy was new and scary for jodha " naam kya hai aapka " he asked huskily 
but from his shoulder jodha noticed moti  who was talking to the shopkeeper and by her actions jodhaa understood that she was asking about her to the shopkeeper ...jodha pushed jalal with all her strength and tried to escape ...but jalal was too quick for her he held her wrist while she struggled to free her hand " kuch poocha hai humne aapse " he asked smirking at her futile attempts of freeing her hand ...jodha did not like that she got angry puffed up her red cheeks  and said " nahi bataige kabhi nahi bataige chodo hume " jalal just  giggled at her  anger he found it really amusing ...that angered jodhaa more and she bit his hand real hard !!!


"ahh!!" moaned jodhaa softly  in her sleep which brought jalal back from his thoughts he worriedly looked at his wife who held   her huge belly ...jalal made out that it was his shezaadi who was again started  kicking  ...he gently removed jodha's head from his chest and placed it on the pillow and moved towards her belly caressing it 

 jalal:-" kyun sataa rahi hai aap apni ammi ko ?" he whispered to the belly  with fake anger  " accha toh aaj aapne hume bahut yaad kiya ...
theek hai aaj hume maaf kardijiye aaj ke baad aisa nahi hoga " with  that he kissed jodha's stomach 

jodhaa giggled and jalal looked up at her " acha chup chup ke aap humri aur shezaadi i ki baatein sun rahi hai "

jodha :" karte rahiye aap shezaadi shezaadi  hoga toh hum ek pyaara sa shezaada hee"

jalal:" accha aap so jaeye hume apni shezaadi ka laad karne dijiye "
and with that he again  kissed her belly 

jodha giggled again and said " aisa mat kijiye na shehensha ji hume gudgudi hoti hai aapki moocho (mustache)  ki wajah se 

jalal came on top of her and pinned her both hands either side but all while being careful not to put any weight on her 

jalal:" accha aapko gudgudi hoti hai ? ..kal raat toh nahi ho rahi thi "
he whispered seductively 

jodha had become beetroot red as the passionate moments of their love from last night  flashed in her mind she couldn't take his intense gaze anymore and hugged him in the shyness 

precap:- jalal entering jodha's mahal in flashback

so people this was the third chapter please like and comment ...silent readers please please hit the like button and comment your suggestions and critics are welcomed  


Edited by magicbook - 02 July 2013 at 3:23am

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 1:27am | IP Logged
Your story is a perfect composition of past and present.

Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 01 July 2013 at 5:54am

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