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"PAAKEEZAA"JA ff PART 4 PG13 (Page 7)

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chapter 3


jodha was like a kid in her favorite candy shop ...though she had many jewels ...they were all the expensive ones made out of precious stones and metals ...but still she couldn't get enough of them ...the shop was buzzing with girls trying out jewels and some bargaining  with the shopkeeper about the price ...one of the shop keepers asked jodha " kya chaiye bitiya ?" 

jodha :" hume jumke dekhne hai " the shopkeeper showed a variety of jumkas to her but then someone called him and he got busy with the other customers leaving jhodha ...

here jalal was all while staring her like a beast stares his prey  .. her smooth skin he so wanted to feel her ... her plum luscious lips...he had an unkown urge to bite them  her twinkling eyes ...in which he wished to drown himself ..he had an evil smirk on his face ...he forgot everything and everyone ...the only thing that existed for him was this girl who was so busy in her own world


 ...jodhaa took each  jumka and placed it on her ear and stared at her reflection in the mirror ...jalal found this pretty amusing as jodha was making all kinds of faces while doing so 
she took one jumka and placed it near her ear and gave an ok ok type expression ...then took the third and gave a wow expression but then gave an good but not enough type of expression ...she took the 3rd jumka and made a baby face ...jalal chuckled   at her attics ...jalal couldnt believe himself that he actually chuckled ...he doesnt even remember the last time he smiled !!!...seemed like jodha had finally found a jumka for herself she wanted to try in on so she started removing the jumka that she was already wearing ...jodhaa was trying really hard to twist the screw that held her jumka in place but it wouldnt budge ...she even tried twisting and pulling ...her earlobe was becoming red and sore ...it was hurting her now but she so wanted to try out the jewel ...she gave a firm squeeze and just ended up hurting herself more  "AHH!!" she moaned in pain ...

just then she felt a two strong warm  hands hold her wrists and stop her from doing anything further with her earring  ...she was startled ...she turned around and found the most handsome guy that she had ever seen staring down at her ...he was huge ...muscular ...his eyes were like a pool  of warm honey ...he had the perfect square jaw and a mustache outlining his upper lip ...but something about him intimidated  jodhaa... seeing how close they were she tried to move back a little bit but jalal held her in place by his strong grip ...he was hungrily staring at each and every feature of her ...this was the first  time he was seeing her up so close ...here jodha was numb with fear ...she just stared at her wrists not able to look him  in the eye  ..never was she ever treated like this by a man...jala inched more closer to her face ...she sensed him coming closer and turned her face the other side out of fear ...just then she saw moti outside the shop it seemed as if she was searching for her
 

jodha :"M..!!"

before she could even moti's name  jalal closed her mouth and dragged her to a nearby secluded corner ...jodha kept struggling and hitting jalal with her tiny fist but all in vain ...on the contrary jalal was enjoying all this ...but in all this struggle jodha's jumka got pulled more and she was hurt 

she held her ear in pain and tears started flowing down her cheeks ...jalal could not bear the sight ...it was strange how a cruel man ..a beast like him who doest give a second thought before killing dozens of people can get affected by such a thing ..."shhh chup hojaye...hum dekhte hai " he whipered to her ...he held the locks of  her hair and tucked them behind her ear and tried removing her jumka as gently as possible ...jodhaa did not protest as she was really in pain ...and being the pampered child that she was she wasn't used to pain ...jalal gave a firm twist to the jumka screw ...jodha gasped and as a reflex held onto his biceps ...jalal waS mesmerized by her this act...he gently removed her jumka ...and blew some air on her earlobe to soothe her ...now such intimacy was new and scary for jodha " naam kya hai aapka " he asked huskily 
but from his shoulder jodha noticed moti  who was talking to the shopkeeper and by her actions jodhaa understood that she was asking about her to the shopkeeper ...jodha pushed jalal with all her strength and tried to escape ...but jalal was too quick for her he held her wrist while she struggled to free her hand " kuch poocha hai humne aapse " he asked smirking at her futile attempts of freeing her hand ...jodha did not like that she got angry puffed up her red cheeks  and said " nahi bataige kabhi nahi bataige chodo hume " jalal just  giggled at her  anger he found it really amusing ...that angered jodhaa more and she bit his hand real hard !!!




PRESENT :-

"ahh!!" moaned jodhaa softly  in her sleep which brought jalal back from his thoughts he worriedly looked at his wife who held   her huge belly ...jalal made out that it was his shezaadi who was again started  kicking  ...he gently removed jodha's head from his chest and placed it on the pillow and moved towards her belly caressing it 

 jalal:-" kyun sataa rahi hai aap apni ammi ko ?" he whispered to the belly  with fake anger  " accha toh aaj aapne hume bahut yaad kiya ...
theek hai aaj hume maaf kardijiye aaj ke baad aisa nahi hoga " with  that he kissed jodha's stomach 

jodhaa giggled and jalal looked up at her " acha chup chup ke aap humri aur shezaadi i ki baatein sun rahi hai "

jodha :" karte rahiye aap shezaadi shezaadi  hoga toh hum ek pyaara sa shezaada hee"

jalal:" accha aap so jaeye hume apni shezaadi ka laad karne dijiye "
and with that he again  kissed her belly 

jodha giggled again and said " aisa mat kijiye na shehensha ji hume gudgudi hoti hai aapki moocho (mustache)  ki wajah se 

jalal came on top of her and pinned her both hands either side but all while being careful not to put any weight on her 

jalal:" accha aapko gudgudi hoti hai ? ..kal raat toh nahi ho rahi thi "
he whispered seductively 

jodha had become beetroot red as the passionate moments of their love from last night  flashed in her mind she couldn't take his intense gaze anymore and hugged him in the shyness 


precap:- jalal entering jodha's mahal in flashback

so people this was the third chapter please like and comment ...silent readers please please hit the like button and comment your suggestions and critics are welcomed  

 




Edited by magicbook - 02 July 2013 at 3:23am

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Your story is a perfect composition of past and present.

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Loved the updateBlushingBlushingBlushing...great going...

Thanks a ton for the pm...Hug

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Originally posted by Super Kool

Loved the updateBlushingBlushingBlushing...great going...

Thanks a ton for the pm...Hug
gladd you liked it super kool Big smile

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Sorry for the late reply! Loved the moments between Akdha it was really awesome! Thankx for the pm

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So Beautiful...both the present and the past...Loved it..Please continue soon..Thanks for the PM...and the Gudgudi part...Jodha dialougue"App shehzaadi shehzaadi karte rahiye, hoga toh hamara pyaara sa shehzaada hi"
 
Please Please continue soon...

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Awesome...

Shehzada and Shehzadi scene was really cute...

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