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"PAAKEEZAA"JA ff PART 4 PG13 (Page 5)

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nice start.
continue soon

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IMP NOTE :- IN MY STORY THERE IS NO RUQUAIYYA OR SUKANYA JODHAA IS THE ONLY DAUGHTER OF BHARMAL  AND JALAL IS NOT MARRIED TO ANYONE HIS MARRIAGE TO JODHAA WILL BE HIS FIRST AND LAST ...I DONT KNOW MUCH ABOUT HISTORICAL FACTS JUST WRITING A STORY FOR ENTERTAINMENT   

                   PAAKEEZAA
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                                                                  CHAPTER 2 


FLASHBACK:-


"toh yeh hai aamer " he thought as he looked around the mela which was buzzing with people ...he had disguised himself as a rajput and entered aamer ...he wanted to know everything about aamer before attacking it ...he gazed at the people who were there enjoying with their families in this festive occasion ...all the laughter happiness and decorations only irked him 


"sar kataa sakte hai par jhuka nai sakte ...rajput ...inke ghuroor ko tod kar hume behad sukoon milega " he thought smirking 

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meanwhile in the mahal ...
jodhaa:"moti kissi ko pata nahi chalega hum keh rahe hai na "
said jodhaa to her maid cum bestfriend moti bai 

moti :-" par raajkumari ji aapka is tarah mahal se bahar jaane uchit nahi agar maharaj ko pata chal gaya toh ?. nahi nahi woh toh hume kaal kothri mein bandh kardege"

jodhaa:" pitaji aisa kuch nahi karege ...pehli baat unhe pata hee nahi chalega ki hum mahal se bahar mele mein gaye hai ...aur yadi unhe pata chal bhi gaya aur woh naraaz hogaye toh hum unhe manaa lege " said jodhaa cutely flashing her dimples and innocent smile that would even melt a stone 

moti:" rajkumari yeh theek nai aap unke laad pyaar ka galat faida utha rahi ho "

jodhaa:" toh hum kya kare pitaji hume kabhi akele mele mein jaane hee nahi dete ...ya toh woh mele ka poora samaan mahal le aate hai ya fir hume sainiko ki toli ke saath mele bhejdete hai ...hume aise mele nahi dekhna ...hume toh tum sab ki tarah mele dekhna hai ...uske har rang har khushi ka anubhav karna hai bina kissi rok tok ke "

moti :"' par bina kissi angrakshak ke  ?"

 after so much pleading and emotional blackmail jodhaa finally convinced moti bai and they sneaked out of the mahal...moti covered jodha with a black shawl because if anyone would see her expensive clothes and the jewelry they would make out that she is a royal 


jodha and moti reached the mela and jodhaa was amazed to see so many shops she wanted to visit each and every shop ...this was all so new to her never had she been along outside the mahal this was thrilling for her...moti and jodha were roaming around ...while jodha was having the time of her life moti was super tensed  ...just then jodha saw a jewelry shop ...she just loved jewels she had room full of just jewelry boxes  in her mahal...

jodha : "moti woh dekho gehno ki dukaan!!!"
in her excitement she left moti hand and ran towards the shop ...
on her way she bumped into someone ...a strong muscular frame that almost towered her ...

jalal was in deep thought as to how will he enter the mahal of raja bharmal  just when he felt something soft collide with him he turned around irritated but what he saw left him speechless ...never in his life had he seen such a beautiful girl her eyes her lips her silky smooth skin ...jalal was really hard to impress kind of a guy ...several women had thrown themselves at his feet but he never cared or showed interest...before jalal could react jodha ran towards the shop without sparing him even a glance 



precap :- jalal closed her mouth and dragged jodha to a nearby secluded corner 

 thank you so much for your response people 
so this was the next chapter do like and leave your comments 
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Edited by magicbook - 02 July 2013 at 3:21am

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You rocked...:):):)

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Aww That Was Just Awsome. Loved It Jodha Went Out Of Her Kingdom For The First Time.
Iam Loving This SS Conti As Soon As You Can. (:

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Great going dear...thoroughly enjoyed the updateThumbs Up

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@Magicbook Please PM Me When You The Update The SS.

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Awesome update yaar! Thankx for the pm

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Wow!! amazing update :D
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