"PAAKEEZAA"JA ff PART 4 PG13 - Page 8

Originally posted by: arshalover26

Wow nice story. Read all the the parts in one go nd it is very interesting. Plz pm me the next parts nd update soon.

thanks for liking my story 😳 i will definitely pm you the next part 😊 

Originally posted by: Bamonforever

Woww your story is going beautifully n you're writing it very fluidly n lucidly. I'm loving the toggling between the past n present.

Eager for the next chapter now. 😃

thank you so much bamonforever !!!😃😊 i am glad you like my story 😳

Originally posted by: ApurvaLovesARVI

So Beautiful...both the present and the past...Loved it..Please continue soon..Thanks for the PM...and the Gudgudi part...Jodha dialougue"App shehzaadi shehzaadi karte rahiye, hoga toh hamara pyaara sa shehzaada hi"

 

Please Please continue soon...

lolz you know what me myself couldn't stop smiling when i was writing the gudgudi and shezaada shezaadi  part 😉😳 thanks for liking my story !!😊

Originally posted by: Ashvikfever

Sorry for the late reply! Loved the moments between Akdha it was really awesome! Thankx for the pm

thanks for liking my story 😃

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Your story is a perfect composition of past and present.

thank you 😃

waiting for an update ...plz update sooon :)  :)  :)

Its really good!! Continue soon:)

Ohhh! Now this FF I shall definitely follow. :D

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hey r u planning to update this ff anymore.