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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 5:24am | IP Logged
wow nice kkk dis was awsm prt it was less taarey but i luv other alot...kk let star i luv how both family taani n rey family support each other in every way dis show how two family hlp each othwe u hav show tht thr share thr happiness pain everything with each other n become thr wall thn thr fall n or become weak i luv how rey family hlp n support n try each n every way to hlp thm n less thr pain ... thn i luv how taarey support each other how thr understand tht thr need to be strong n be mature to make thing better n thn i luv tht u hav show pain in taarey relation of staying away dis is imp in every relation to feel dis pain coz dis relation more strong n show how imp is other person in thr life tht every single time thr miss thm n need thm n how much rey miss taani n need her n i luv taarey hug nice n thn i luv how rey make himself strong to win his life his contract his luv n everything for his taani n how tht bas**** rohan take away everything from him but i luv rey dad entry awsm n i luv how he support him n make him strong to win his life his luv his wife his everything back n i luv how confident rey was n i am waiting for nxt prt but i dont want tht dis stry get end plzz dont end dis stry thanks for PM n luv u dear muahaa n dont end plzz 

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Posted: 11 September 2013 at 5:10am | IP Logged
superb...
loved the family scene...
loved taarey scene at d airport..
rey frustration on letting down taani was superb...
overall just loved it..
update soon..
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Posted: 11 September 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Loved the update...
still wondering how his dad got the file...
waiting for Rey to win the deal...
also waiting for TaaRey anniversary...EmbarrassedBig smile
nithi_newlife Goldie
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Posted: 11 September 2013 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jhanvi_TaaRey

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Yeah!! I'm first this time thanks to your scrapSmile

You really expressed the family's bond and concern.

Unfortunately their deal and Mr.Shekawat's treatment fell on the same week. Taani was initially hesitant about it. It was not that Rey can''t handle the project all alone.

Oops.. Never expected this. I had really wanted to see Rohan and Taani's encounter at the meeting but...
anyways Rey is there naWink

So uncle..Apka saara melodrama katam ho chuka hai. Just get ready to get well soon and ofcourse to meet your angry daughter who is going to pounce on you for lying to her..." he commented in a friendly tone and Taani glared at him. 

This was much needed comment by rey as the whole family had somewhat lost their smile!!

Ab fikar karne ki koi baath nahi hai. After all I have found the best match for my daughter."said Mr.Shekawat looking at Rey. Rey and taani looked at each other.

Yeah!!Thats rightEmbarrassed

 Mr.Singhania looked at his son with pride in his eyes. "Was he the same guy whom never cared about his family...Was he the same guy for whom all that mattered was HIS passion, HIS luxury and HIS friends... Probably not anymore...His son had really learnt the lesson of life perfectly .."he thought.

Finally you showed Mr. Singhania proud of his son!!

-*-

The airport scene was cute.. You can manage some romance amidst tension in chaptersBig smile

"I'll miss you!!" he said atlast and hugged her tight. Her heart lightened. Yet again he understood what she needed...she thought.

But little did she know that he was craving for this. She wrapped her arms around his neck and whispered.."I will miss you more.."


AwwwEmbarrassed


-*-


Sure!! After all its TAANI MADAM's ORDER!!" he said in a sarcastic tone.

She looked at him with her eyebrows raised. Poor girl! Looks like her entire life would go waste trying to understand her boss and his mood swings!!


poor Leena!!!


Rohan raised his hand and pointed to the bag he was holding and Rey's world stopped there...

 

Rohan wasn't just carrying his bag. It was Rey's  life, his hardwork, the trust that Taani had on him, Rey's final opportunity to come out of his guilt. He stripped off the seat belt and got down from the car and tried to chase the motor bike giving a damn about his bleeding hands. His senses did not help him at that moment to warn him that he wasn't a superhero who could just get his target just like that. But Rey's pain or hardwork did not help him capture his bag from the speeding motorbike..


Rohan is a jerk!! If taani would have been there then he would have got another slap from her!!


The copy you had was a fake one. Infact it was  just a backup. I have the original deal papers...


pheww *sigh of relief*

"Then be ready to hug your son!! " he said and both of them moved in...


Yeah!!


Finally TaaRey anniversary in the next chapter...you would have to update tomorrow then!!!!!

Loved this chapter..Smile


update soon :D




Hi dear...
Even I was excited to see your comment...
Well I didn't want Rohan and Taani encounter much...Rohan was just a  tool to potray how powerful and confident Taani is...So I thought this would do!!
The airport scene was cute.. You can manage some romance amidst tension in chaptersBig smile
Thank you sooo much for this...otherwise ppl think am a real kanjus when it comes to Taarey romanceLOLLOL(sometimes it turned out to be true...what can I do...story he kuch aisa hai...)
Thank you sooo much for your comment...Guess what I read your comment almost 5 times till now...Just loved it...Thank you sooo much!!SmileSmile

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Posted: 11 September 2013 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Hey Nithi,
As always loved your update. The chemistry that you are building with every update between Taani and Rey is absolutely phenomenal. And though I feel sad that this FF is going to end but I feel that your decision is right too because a story that drags loses its essence.
Thanks for maintaining its essence.
Waiting for more.
Love.
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Posted: 11 September 2013 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Natasha.

Taani coming to the states (hope I get to see her lol)
Love the two family bonding, Mr. And Mrs. Singhania was amazing I love that the came and support their son in laws and as well as their daughter in law
Taarey saying goodbye at the airport was very senti... I love how they understand each other feelings without any words spoken
Rey holding his Taani saree and imagining how it will feel to touch her was so cute lol, poor Rey
Hmm that jerk try to sabotage Rey deal but it didn't work, but like Rey I too want to know how did MR Singhania got those original paper? Hmm I have a strong feelings Taani help
Nithi this chapter was magical as usual, u wrote so beautifully
I love it
And I can't wait to read the next chapter

Hey hi,
Thank you soo much for your cute comment Natasha...
Guess what!!
Its just that all our problems look simpler when we find our ppl around to support us...
Well what helped Mr.Singhania save the situation would be unravelled in the next update!!
Thank you sooo much for calling it Magical...Just means a lot to me!!

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Posted: 11 September 2013 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hima_taarey

this one was an indeed special chapter for me! Smile
and the way everyone co-operated and are struggling for 
mr.shekhawat's recovery! that was really heart touching! Clap
the way rey said that mrs.shekhawat cant manage... LOL
that line was really caring and soothing for everyone!
and the day when taani departured, that scene when taarey were 
talking thru their eyes expressing their feeling and,Embarrassed
their hug! which alone expresses how much they will miss each other. Hug
that scene was breath taking!Clap
that saree scene was also very well written. Smile
oh my god! freaking 5 days, it would have been like hell for him.
and the way he was imagining to be with her was Blushing
after that i just got a mini heart attack as rohan attacked leena Shocked
snatching away the hard work of rey. and the way rey was really
hyped up and was crying not able to understand how he will face
his beloved wife? he thought he lost everything! and even i had the same Cry
expression while reading. 
finally i was relieved when it was just a fake copy. but how come??? Confused
and seriously loved the bond of a father - son. Clap
love you lots for this update. Heart
and please update soon... 
curiosity is killing me!!! LOL

Thank you sooo much dear...
I am really excited that you noticed that small things which people don't notice much!!
It means a lot to me...as writing such parts are really difficult!!
Happy that you liked the hug...otherwise I was sure that you guys would curse for not letting them kiss...LOLLOL
To know what happened in between just wait...you will get to know it in the next update!!
Thank you for liking their father son bond!!
Thank you sooo much for your breath taking comment!!
Loved  it!!SmileSmile

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 3:57am | IP Logged
amazing!!!! Clap plsplspls update soonClap and pm me

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