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Arhi:Bringing u back chap 15 up, pg 49 (Page 28)

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Garima had always loved both her daughters equally, atleast this is what she beleived but deep down she knew that she had a special soft corner for her sister's baby girl.Payal was a 7 year old child when Garima had married Shashi and she took an instant liking to the quite and loving child that she was but with Khushi it was different.

She had been with her sister throughout her pregnancy as her sister had stayed at her parent's house for the delivery due to some medical complications. Her sister's husband was an orphan and had only one elder brother with whom he was estranged so her parents and she took care of her sister during her pregnancy. She was the first one to take Khushi in her arms when she was born. She had taken care of a new born Khushi till her mother was fit enough to take care of her. When her elder sister was leaving for her husband's home with a 3 month old Khushi Garima had cried like she was being seperated from her own baby. Even Khushi had missed her masi for days and used to cry a lot till she got used to her own mother. Even after that Khushi had special atachment to Garima.

When her sister and her husband died Garima could not let Khushi go to her father's brother as she knew that he did not really want her. Shashi had understood her feelings for Khushi and offered to adopt her. Garima had always been grateful to Shashi for this beautiful gesture not that it was unexpected. Shashi always had a heart of gold and Khushi...well anyone who saw her instantly fell in love with her.

Shashi, Garima and PAyal were very happy in a quiet way but the moment Khushi entered their lives it was full of laughter and crazy things. There was a lot of chaos and confusion but they were happy...very happy. She was one mischievious brat... but a good one. In no time Shashi came to love her as his own daughter. In fact it was Shashi and Payal who used to save Khushi from Garima's wrath after she committed mistakes(which was quite often).

Madhumati used to scold Khushi a lot but deep down she also loved Sanka Devi...a nickname provided by Madhumati herself.

When Arnav told them abt Khushi's sacrifice for Payal she could not belive it. She knew that Khushi was very good at heart but she could not belive that her naughty little girl had become so mature that she had sacrificed her whole life. Khushi knew that in their middle class society her life and all her dreams of a loving husband and small little family of her own would end after her divorce and yet she sacrificed the only thing she had ever really wanted for Payal.

She felt guilty abt slapping Khushi on the day of her marriage to Arnav. Everyone had treated her badly. Raizadas could be forgiven as they did not know her that well but Garima could not forgive herself. How could she think that Khushi would not think abt her family's honour? In fact it was their family's honour and Payal's hapiness that she was trying to save that day and everyone misunderstood her.


Khushi had always put her family before herself and even when she was abt to leave them she had made financial arrangements so that they did not have to borrow from others and she felt ashamed of using that money but what could she do?
Her husband was paralysed, their house in Lucknow was sold because they could not pay the loan they had taken for Payal's marriage and there was no other source of income except Madhumati's pension, which was not much. She even felt guilty abt burdening Madhumati but what could she do? She could go hungry but she could not let Shashi die. She could not even work as a house maid as Madhumati would never allow it and then she could not embarass Payal as everyone knew that she was the daughter in law of Raizada family. This is the price you pay for marrying your daughters to rich boys. They can spoil or make the life of your children according to their own whims and you cannot do anything. This is what Akash bitwa did by breaking Payal's heart by not beleiving her and this is what Arnav did by spoiling Khushi's life because of his misunderstanding and they could not do anything to save their daughters. She knew PAyal was not happy and Khushi...they did know where she was.

Edited by kutkut12 - 04 June 2014 at 9:20pm

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My place.

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Posted: 04 June 2014 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
A mother's heart. that was a wonderful rendering. Garima has realized but she is tied. she cannot do anything which makes her more guilty. it was emotional. hope kushi is safe and waiting eagerly for her return

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fantastic update
loved it
thanks for the pm
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I like your POV approach to the story... different and engaging. Thumbs Up
Looking forward to your next part !

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simply amazing
loved it

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Superb part
Continue soon

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