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Arhi:Bringing u back chap 15 up, pg 49 (Page 13)

arshilove14 Goldie

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Posted: 29 January 2014 at 2:36am | IP Logged
wow interesting plot
it's really emotional
what happened to khushi
looking forward to read more
plzz pm me

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kutkut12 Senior Member

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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 11:35pm | IP Logged

Sorry for the late update. Asli life was really chaotic...was traveling  much and didn't have time. Hope you understand...


He looked at his son and silently thanked him for being the reason that Payal  was still in RM. He could still remember the time after Khushi and Payal had left RM.He had secretly believed that Khushi was innocent but he could not say anything because of Arnav and Anjali.
He had always followed Arnav blindly. Afterall Arnav was his elder brother and had always looked out for him. Anjali didi had been more like a mother to him. How could he simply defy them? And Khushi did not have any proff against Shyam. Infact, the snake had twisted the facts in such a way that Khushi was looking like the culprit. If he had not known her better he would have been convinced of her guilt but then he also found it difficult to think that Shyam was the culprit. He was the perfect son in law. Shyam had seemed to love everyone and he had actually been very supportive of di and the rest of the family. He had seen that whenever Shyam was there the tension between nani and Arnav went down by several notches. He had seen Shyam doting on di and he had never seen him doing anything objectionable then how could he just become suspicious of him. He had not been a witness to Shyam's dark side untill it was too late and he regretted it big time.

He still remembered the day when Khushi and Payal left RM. He had tried to stop Payal but he could not blame her for siding her sister afterall he was standing by his siblings.

He had called up Payal several times but she cut his calls and never called back. He wanted to go to buaji's house but then he thought that he should wait for for a few days beause he knew that Payal would be very angry and she would not listen o him. He did not want to creat a scene infront of Guptas. Well...who was he kidding...he just couldn't face Gupta's after what all had happened. Hadn't he promised them that he would never hurt Payal and always stand by her but he did not know at that time that his loyalty towards her would be tested agaist his loyalty towards his own family.

He had decided that he would go to GH only after Payal picks up his phone. What if she slams the door on his face?

He kept on trying her phone atleast 20 times everyday but she did not answer any of his calls. He was getting desperate and was planning to go to GH and risking Payal's outburst when after 2 days dadi(Mrs. Devyani Raizada) received a call from buaji that Payal was pregnant. He was on the top of the world and he called her again but she ignored. Dadi told him that buaji sounded very cheerful and seemed unaware of the truth. She looked worried but surprisingly his mother consoled dadi and said that they would definately bring Payal back. She said that they should not say anything to Anjali and Shyam as they might get upset but they would not be able to say anything once Payal is home.
He was really surprised by his mother's stand. Uptill now he used to think that she was against Payal and Khushi as she had never really liked them very much but now it seemed that his mother had more affection for Payal than he gave her credit for.

Well that was a restless night for him because he was not sure whether Payal would agree to come home or not but it turned out that he did not have to worry till Khushi was around. That girl could sacrifice all her happiness for others. A pity that they realized this a little too late.

The next day when Anjali went out to the mandir with Shyam to pray for his well being, the rest of the family assembled in the living room to leave for the Gupta house. He was taken aback when Arnav joined them.

Arnav - Shall we go?
All accept his mother were staring at him. Eventually dadi collected herself and asked him, " You are coming too?"
Arnav gave her a smile and said, "Yes"

His mother put her hand on dadi's shoulder and said, " Sasuma, you don't have to worry. Everything will be alright. You will know everything once we reach Gupta House."

Everyone except Arnav and his mother were confused but they did not say anything and left forGH.

Aakash now knew that the conversation that was going on was of great importance but he had not payed much attention owing to the fact that he was completely preoccupied with the thoughts of Payal's rejection.

While Akash was thinking about the past his son started screaming. Payal took out his feeding bottle from the bottle warmer and started feeding him. Akash sighed and left the room.

Edited by kutkut12 - 22 April 2014 at 12:45pm

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crazyqueen Senior Member

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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
that was so emotional and heart breaking.
plzz PM me the next part.plzzz.

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Divyahet IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Wonderful update once again,
So Akash too believed that Khushi was innocent,
But I couldn't blame him as he was feeling secure under his elder brotherswings, but as a husband he failed.
Now I am eagerly waiting for the past to reveal...
What they talked at Gupta house ?
If possible continue soon.
Take care,
Thank you for this beautiful update.

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chavvi16 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 2:08am | IP Logged
As brother he was best
But as hubby he too failed
To take care of his wife
Side with her
If he couldn't protect her why marry
He didn't stay true to his vows
And now he suffers for it
Well I can see why he didn't believe khushi though he knew her to be innocent
But his one mistake sure cost him lot
Where is khushi though
Does anyone know about her

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ChitraF IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Nice story.. read all parts in one go.. continue soon

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Sindhuramakrish Goldie

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 3:24am | IP Logged
after a long time u have updated and it was superb. giving each part a title in the name of the characters was a good idea . payal's return was expected . and now i am waiting to see what happened in the past. waiting eagerly for the next update

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casker IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 3:53am | IP Logged
nice ff.

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