SS - The Formation of Arjun Rawte - Ch.1 on Pg.2

Jounin Newbie

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Hey there! Smile Glad to see the Arjun forum so busy and posty, but I thought that writing a fanfiction that is perhaps not set in the current setting would be more...different, perhaps? LOL Anyway, I know some may completely hate this idea of mine, but I want to give it a shot to see how it goes. And just as a note, the other fanfictions in this forum are the driving force for me writing this story even though I just entered the forum and entered the forums, itself. I guess I am getting bold, but leave your remarks... 


The academy stood tall and towering in all its glory as the sunlight shone harshly on the white building. The gates that barricaded the entrance were no less similar to the ones of a rich man or a king's palace. The patches of grass on both sides of the walkway were lush and green as if they had never been trampled upon. All this only made the minuscule girl feel frightened. 

She rose a hand to her eyeglasses and adjusted them again out of nervousness. Her hand trembled and sweat built up on her wide forehead which she had been condemned for for many years. Plain brown eyes that were dull and hidden once again scanned the empty school grounds before falling slack near a cool wall which were connected to one of the gates.

Maybe, she thought pessimistically, it wasn't such a good idea to come here early. All I am doing is building up more nerves. 

A frail wrist peeped out from her extremely large coat and she sighed in relief when the hand struck 6. Soon, there would be people coming and then, perhaps it wouldn't be so hard. 


An angry hand slammed down on the old, beaten table and everyone sitting around sat up straighter. Unlike the perfect appearance of the academy from the outside; it had poor and outdated equipment and the walls were whitewashes and plain. Nervous brown eyes sought out the source of the angry hand slam and inwardly shuddered. He didn't even look like a teacher...

"It seems that all you rookies are here to do is stare at the walls or throw glances at one another! Enough with all this introductory nonsense. You don't need to know anyone, but your designated teammates." 

One manicured hand rose out of the pack of 30 students and the man's eyes narrowed. He was in no mood to answer questions or pay any mind to who these rookies were. Being a second year student and on his way to become a valedictorian, he was naturally elected for the announcer of enrollment day for silly, dull rookies. He had to admit that these were the worst batch out of all the ones that came in today.

"What?" he questioned, bluntly. 

A girl cleared her throat and stood up with unnecessary confidence. "Um, well, all I wanted to really ask was...if you are a teacher...perhaps?"

Arjun's eyes narrowed further till they were only two beady pupils glaring at the girl. She didn't seem bothered in the slightest, instead she flashed him a big grin. Having enough, he pointed to his second year tie and asked if he looked like a student to her or maybe she was blind? Her face fell at the snickers and she sat with a big thump.

"Now, if everyone is done with their squabbling and unnecessary questions, I want to explain how things work here." He pulled out a wooden chair, placed one leg on it and gave off his most intimidating glare to the already sunken rookies. "One - teams announced today will follow under a second year team. You are rookies and they are elites. Two - never openly talk to your teammates about your personal life because frankly, no one cares. Three - No personal relationships allowed. You are teammates and each other's pillars and that's all there is to it." 

"Team One is based upon those who have scored the highest on the entrance exams and will consist of three people. These three people will work under my team which consists of me, Sameer and Shree. Riya, Aisha and Sakshi, whoever you are - make sure to stay here and wait for my team. Don't make me repeat it."

Brown eyes drooped miserably and for once she enjoyed the warmth of her big sweater to engulf her in the heat of the room. For once, she wished that her luck instead of thanking it. And then she glanced at the stiff man who was reading out the names of the other teams and sighed. Working under this man would be horrible and he seemed no less than a bully too. 

Edited by Jounin - 28 June 2013 at 6:55pm

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unishaz IF-Rockerz

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nice start.. Continue soon..
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Nice start and interesting title. Continue soon.
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Hey...nice start!

And, yeah...Welcome to the CrAzY Arjun Forum!!!!!
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interesting prologue...cont soon
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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 8:09am | IP Logged

Amazing start!! Clap

Gosh!!...I always wanted to read a story revolving around an wait is finally over ! LOL
Can't wait for the Seniors v/s Fresher's clashes! Wink 
Continue real soon!! Big smile
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interesting start, do contd soon :D
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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 6:53pm | IP Logged

Great! Thank you all for your lovely comments and likes. I personally do like writing replies to every comment, but first I want to get this story somewhere. I definitely enjoy reading comments, questions and even criticisms because these are what drive me forward! Smile Arjun, especially may seem a little out of character in this, but it is important as he is an Academy student and not a super cop yet! Wink

Chapter One

As the minutes progressed further, the tension within her rose to the climax. It was bad enough being placed on the same team as that big, bad bully, but also that she faded in comparison to the two angelic looking girls who sat away from each other. The one with extremely large doe eyes had shoulder length glossy hair and a perfect hourglass figure. Maybe she is a model in secret,thought Riya despondently. 

Turning to the other female in the room, she noted that the girl had a determined sheen in her brown eyes. Although she was just as pretty as her neighbor, the girl seemed to pay more attention to the guide book in front of her than to her surroundings. And that's exactly what I should be doing, Riya noted, quickly flicking through the guide book.

It wasn't long before the silence in the room became insufferable. The girl with the doe eyes and a gum in her mouth popped it loudly. No one reacted until she did it a few several times. 

"What is the problem, Sakshi?" 

Startled, Riya turned to look at the studious one with a mixture of confusion and admiration. If it was her, she would have definitely ignored it unless the girl questioned her directly. Riya never was a chatterbox or the one to ask questions directly. She wondered if this trait was going to be a drawback for her as a member of this team. 

The girl stopped her popping momentarily. "You know what's the problem, Aisha. That punk is my problem, of course!" She flipped her hair behind her shoulder and grinned beautifully. "I need my prey soon to play my pranks on. You and I both know I don't like to be kept waited."

"Well, get used to it. 'That punk' is now our team mate. This is serious business, Sakshi."

Sakshi, in return snorted gracefully. "As if. He is hardly a team mate if he can't commit himself enough to arrive on time. I say we teach him a lesson."

"No thanks. It was tough enough for me to bag the second rank in these exams. I am not up for this any more, Sa'shi." 

Riya knew that the conversation was closed as Aisha ducked her head down and began to intensely stare at the guide notes. It was clear that they both knew each other, but what shocked her even more was the different personalities they possessed. While Sakshi seemed more daring and like a consistent prankster, Aisha had a determined streak in her to strive forward and be fixated on her career only.

"Yo! Newbie!" Riya ducked her head and eyed Sakshi from under her uneven bangs. Before the Academy had started, Riya had been saving up money to get a decent haircut if not the best clothes, but somehow the money had disappeared from her piggy. Oh well, at least it wasn't too much. 

She flickered her dull eyes to meet the enchanting, mischievous ones of her receiver. "...yes?" 

"You're...Reeeyaaa, right?" The girl was smiling impishly as if she was planning something for her. Riya frowned at this and wondered if Sakshi would be her potential bully in the future. At least, she hoped not.

"I...yes." Keeping her conversation short was a skill that she picked on overtime as her father didn't like her talking too much. Since then, Riya had kept her conversations short to avoid any more taunts from her old man.

"Sa'shi, leave her alone," warned Aisha, suddenly. "I don't want another team mate down the pit if ones already there." 

That was seemingly enough for Sakshi to angrily turn to her old best friend. Sometimes, Aisha could be a real prat, but her ability to understand the underlying tone in her voice never ceased to amaze her. Before she could open her mouth, a familiar voice hissed.

"Shut your trap before it costs you, ugly," he retorted at her while striding into the room confidently. Perching on the half cracked table, he watched as his other team mates entered and made themselves comfortable. It didn't escape his notice that the annoying girl had her mouth half open since the moment he called her ugly. He ignored her completely and gestured at his team mates to take the spotlight. 

"I'm Sameer," said a fair, lean built man before throwing a hateful glance at his companion who was busy scrutinizing the three girls.

The one with the glasses didn't need an invitation to speak. He stepped further and grinned hopefully at Sakshi while introducing himself as 'Shreekant,' but also demanding that they call him by 'Shree'. 

It was silent for a few seconds before the process was repeated with Aisha introducing herself first. She looked casual and rather interested in the guide book than on her team mates. Arjun, despite sharing a similar trait found that the girl was not yet in the position to ignore her team mates. For a successful team, you need to understand your team mates inside out. Clearly, this girl has no clue, Arjun concluded disgustingly. 

The second girl who stammered called herself 'Riya'. Immediately, it sparked his interest because she was the highest achiever in all of the rookies. He had to admit that Riya seemed more fitting for the category of 'ugly', but there was no reason to call her that since she could barely even maintain eye contact with anyone. It's not like the other one wasn't ugly. Surely this one won't be in my business, but she lacks the spunk needed in this team. Arjun tensed as he inwardly planned a tough regime exercise for her to not only build some confidence, but also to tone up her small size which was obviously noticeable despite her big sweater. 

The last one spoke with a nasal tone which was harsh to all their eyes as he watched Rathod and Shree cringe slightly. Sakshi or 'ugly plus annoying' as he would like to address her shot him a bold glare with immense hatred shining in her brown orbs, but with a tinge of something else he wasn't able to catch. This girl has no redeemable quality, apart from being annoying and self-centered. Maybe, I could place her with Rathod to test his patience and keep her out of my way. Or maybe with that goof, but I doubt that any work will be done that way. He distastefully noted the boy who was struck with love. Arjun swore he saw minuscule hearts in his eyes. 

Slamming the door on his way out, he blissfully imagined how decent it would be to work alone. Clearly, fate was playing an ugly trick on him.


Grimacing at the pile of sheets on her paper, Riya sighed gloomily. It was bad enough for the Academy to be far, far away and her hike hadn't done her any good, but cause her more fatigue. And now she had to read these papers and memorize them before tomorrow's joint class with her team mates. No doubt that she would be embarrassed by one of her very own team mates.

Today, the introductions went far better for her than she expected. The bully did nothing more than scrutinize her and she didn't really feel concerned over this as he was eyeing all of them the very same way. Or so she hoped. Maintaining eye contact stirs up anger, noted Riya ducking her head under the faint light from the lamp and scanning the pages about negotiation skills.

She knew that this was probably her worst topic. The instructions clearly stated that they would have to practice their negotiation skills with a team mate in front of the class for 10% of their grade. Although, they were given the choice to pick, Riya knew that it didn't change things for her so greatly. She hadn't even had the chance to thank Aisha for stopping Sakshi's experimentation on her with her pranks. What if Aisha had taken offense at this? 

With that last thought in mind, Riya headed off to bed with an empty stomach and an aura of gloominess. She decided that the best thing was to wake up early and brush up her facts about negotiation skills. After all, they were important in recognizing a criminal and getting him to confess. 

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